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TOPIC: Issue 136 The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
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1.人是有自主思考能力、free will的动物。世界充满选择
如:学生可以选择学校、可以选择工作(growing up),人生的前途命运可以选择。、很多方式娱乐,享受生活、人生因为选择而丰富多彩。

2.很多时候,人们主观的说 没有选择。 实际上并不是这样的~ 缺少勇气和坚韧去面对选择。 如失恋自杀,其实一端恋情的结束实际上意味着你还可以有更好的选择。 即使在大萧条时期, 并不是没有选择, 你仍然可以根据实际情况政策做正确决策避免大的损失。 生病:阿姆斯特朗

3.当事情violate法律 道德时,没选择 必须遵守。如对政府有不满
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请大家指教啊~~谢谢~~


Choice is what you need when dealing with troubles in your life. Is the situation when choice is absent extremely rare, as the speaker asserts? In my opinion, to a great extent, I agree with the speaker as we humans have the ability to think and make decisions all by their own. However, absence of choice may happen in the realms of law or ethics.


As we all know, human beings domain the world and indeed have the free will to do whatever they want. Choices are fraught with the contemporary society. As a student in the university, we have the choice of the schools as well as the academies we are to get further education. If you can stick to your goal from the beginning to the last, Harvard or Yale is not merely your dreams. Upon graduation, choices could also made by us to obtain a job of various types as you like. The vista of the future is mastered by our own and every choice equals to a step towards your ideal. Similarly, You as well have free choices to entertain to enjoy lives. When hungry, one can choose to order a set of fast food sent to the door, or dress up and go to a luxurious restaurant to have a big meal; when bored, one can watch TV, play games, or chat with friends on the internet; when tired of living, you can easily get access to any places of interest in whatever countries. Life is full of wonders and the situation when absence of choice is truly rare.




But when thinking in retrospect, people always say they are absent of choice while facing difficulties. Actually, after thorough analysis, we can find that choices do exist; it is their lacking in calmness and brave heart that have made so. One apt illustration involves the increasing quantities of people committing suicide. A typical cause of the suicide is the disappointment in one's love affair. Breaking up with your ex-girlfriend or your boyfriend is not a disaster as what you have imagined. Actually, you are able to have the choice to search for a better one due to the breaking up and it is just another beginning of a new love experience. On the other hand love doesn't mean your whole life; choices are that you can do your work better to fulfill your mental need. Also, during the Great Depression, numerous people got bankrupt and depressed to death. Nevertheless, even in this situation, you do have choice to be calm and do your business according to the principles of the market and the policy of the government. And Armstrong, the world’s greatest cyclist ever, once was the victim of serious cancer. Instead of falling behind, he bravely chose to fight with the disease sturdily and finally returned to the racing to win more champions. Therefore, never say "no choice" when you are in great trouble, just as an old saying goes: "nothing is impossible to a willing heart."



However, there are also certain circumstances that choice is seldom. Common sense tells us that when coming across things that violate the law or ethics, we have no choice but to respect. Here comes the example of paying taxes. No matter how much you are complaint about the government, each of you who has incomes is without question the taxpayers. Otherwise, you will be persecuted by the law and ethics. Free choice is a relative concept, which is only allowed in moderate extension.



In conclusion, the absence of choice is really a rare circumstance as people have the independent thought to make decisions of their own and once they have the brave heart to tackle the difficulties, they will not suffer the sense of "no choice". However, when facing matters associated with the law and ethics, choice is rare indeed.
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Choice is what you need when dealing with troubles in your life太绝对,我不觉得我在食堂里想着我选择什么菜是一种trouble,建议宽泛定义. Is the situation when choice is absent extremely rare, as the speaker asserts? In my opinion, to a great extent, I agree with the speaker as we humans have the ability to think and make decisions all by their own. However, absence of choice may happen in the realms of law or ethics.


As we all know, human beings domain the world and indeed have the free will to do whatever they want这里的whatever显然和第一段的TS矛盾,有例外了还叫whatever. Choices are fraught with the contemporary你后面讲的所以例子,饥饿无聊困顿,都不仅仅是当代生活才有的,所以这句话显得很突兀 society. As a student in the university, we have the choice of the schools as well as the academies we are to get further education. If you can stick to your goal from the beginning to the last, Harvard or Yale is not merely your dreams. Upon graduation, choices could also made by us to obtain a job of various types as you like. The vista of the future is mastered by our own and every choice equals to a step towards your ideal. Similarly, You as well have free choices to entertain to enjoy lives. When hungry, one can choose to order a set of fast food sent to the door, or dress up and go to a luxurious restaurant to have a big meal; when bored, one can watch TV, play games, or chat with friends on the internet; when tired of living, you can easily get access to any places of interest in whatever countries. Life is full of wonders and the situation when absence of choice is truly rare.




But when thinking in retrospect, people always say they are absent of choice while facing difficulties. Actually, after thorough analysis, we can find that choices do exist; it is their lacking in calmness and brave heart that have made so. One apt illustration involves the increasing quantities of people committing suicide. A typical cause of the suicide is the disappointment in one's love affair. Breaking up with your ex-girlfriend or your boyfriend is not a disaster as what you have imagined. Actually, you are able to have the choice to search for a better one due to the breaking up and it is just another beginning of a new love experience. On the other hand love doesn't mean your whole life; choices are that you can do your work better to fulfill your mental need. Also, during the Great Depression, numerous people got bankrupt and depressed to death. Nevertheless, even in this situation, you do have choice to be calm and do your business according to the principles of the market and the policy of the government.过于宽泛,也许进一步解释会更有说服力 And Armstrong, the world’s greatest cyclist ever, once was the victim of serious cancer. Instead of falling behind, he bravely chose to fight with the disease sturdily and finally returned to the racing to win more champions. Therefore, never say "no choice" when you are in great trouble, just as an old saying goes: "nothing is impossible to a willing heart我预感到这里的nothing和impossible要和下面一段矛盾."



However, there are also certain circumstances that choice is seldom. Common sense tells us that when coming across things that violate the law or ethics, we have no choice but to respect. Here comes the example of paying taxes. No matter how much you are complaint about the government, each of you who has incomes is without question the taxpayers. Otherwise, you will be persecuted by the law and ethics或许征税还不能上升到伦理的高度. Free choice is a relative concept (Good point,可惜你前面几段把话说得太绝对), which is only allowed in moderate extension.我问个问题,我为什么不能选择违背法律?人类法律的进步就是不断地违背,不断抗争换来的,如果我愿意承担坐牢的结果,我是完全可以选择违抗法律和已经陈腐的ethics。你看看能不能把我的观点考虑进去,加入你这一段,做个攻击的靶子,这样似乎能体现出一些complexity



In conclusion, the absence of choice is really a rare circumstance as people have the independent thought to make decisions of their own and once they have the brave heart to tackle the difficulties, they will not suffer the sense of "no choice". However, when facing matters associated with the law and ethics, choice is rare indeed.


总体写的可以,逻辑衔接注意~祝顺利!
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nieyong + 1 谢谢~ 倒数第二段你提的问题很新颖 很受启发 ...

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