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本帖最后由 zylpascal 于 2010-3-16 09:16 编辑

谢谢大家 能偶尔路过丢两块砖就行 没什么要求
下面是物种起源英文版 没考笔试的看看 可能对阅读有帮助
再次谢谢好心人帮拍!(注:未限时作品 可能残留一些小文字错;见谅!)

Generally speaking, arts play a significant role in human history and society for many evident aspects. Certainly, there is no denying that many other things also contribute to create and preserve ideals of a society. In my view, comparing with those other forms, arts indeed worth more applause.



In the first place, as a spiritual creating work human beings carried out, arts is a crystallization of mankind' thoughts, appreciation, emotion, sentiment, etc. A novel is often a recasting of writer herself/himself. For instance, Arthur Conan Dole , who created <<Hemlock Homers>>, had got a experience bearing with detective case in his career. That is why the figure of Homers is so vivid. The symphony <<Destiny>>,one of the greatest composition made by German musician Beethoven, is a condensation of his own life ,which as we know ,to some extent unlucky. Thus, it is undisputable that arts can expose the internal world of human kinds who compose the society, in that view, we can say that arts reveal the hidden ideas of a society.



Secondly, arts does act as catalyst in the reaction(that is so-called impulses) between human beings and the outside world within which they contact everyday, to simply speak, arts tie people more closely to the realistic life. Considering the famous American literature <<Root>>, which reveals the misery lives of American Black slaves, was once said to have a merit by igniting the fuse of the American Civil War which had radically changed the United States history. In this example, we see that the arts demonstrate its social characteristics in the process of a social revolution.




However, contrast to above point, sometimes arts also provide a cushion for humankinds--to separate from the outside collision, and that is mostly seen on the occasion that the artist need to do so by his own. Nietzsche, one of the most controversial philosopher, dwell his hermetic thoughts in his books, which were hardly appreciated by contemporary thinkers. Maybe arts ,here ,his books offer him a spiritual arena for himself. After so many years, still many experts try
to probe Nietzsche's eccentric thoughts from these
"arts". Whether right or wrong, the book themselves give the author and modern scholars a existing stuff to analyze.



In a word, arts preserve the minds of our human kinds, then pass those torches from one to another; In this passing process, human beings start to learn what is beauty, what is truth, what is the essence of the society.
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发表于 2010-3-13 20:28:51 |只看该作者
诶 怎么上传资料啊?我还不会啊 才发现 平时下的挺那个爽的 指点
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发表于 2010-3-14 17:26:44 |只看该作者
1. 不需要加《XXXX》书名号,外国人没有这个符号
2. 文章布局建议每段中间空一行
3. 最后一段需要改下:前半句说了art pass torches对应文章第二段所表达的概,后半句话就没有很好地表达文章其余部分阐述的意思。
4. 虽然字数没有一个统一标准,但建议再多点。到550吧。
5. 三四段开头阐明观点的句子建议稍微短点,这两段的后面论述部分可以写长句,建议可以在这两段这里加几句。记得新东方老师的建议是论述时每段部多余6句,没句在25个单词以上。

我也是刚开始复习作文,有些地方评论得也只是照搬别人说的那套,自己还未实践。有不当之处请自己斟酌

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发表于 2010-3-14 18:01:16 |只看该作者
编辑一下你的帖子, 然后在最下面那个""编辑帖子"的按钮右边有个"添加附件", 点它就行了, 接下来也一定都会了吧~
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谢谢那位评分的同仁 真的很感谢 你也把你的让我帮你评吧 如果不介意我的水平的话
另外 也非常感谢楼主的回复
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没有添加附件的按钮啊 会不会是我会员权限不够? 真的没看到 编辑帖子按钮右边只有叫你输入验证码的框
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