求点拨issue

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只有6天就要考试了 ARGUMENT一般  issue 还是不行。。。
但又不想完全放弃
有经验的人给点突击建议啊  不胜感激！
这是我写的3个issue 中的一篇   就是那篇论述mistake 和progress 的


I agree with this statement.Every new step of our human is based on the former experiences and lessons,which come from mistakes.Admittedly,we don't like mistakes because every person desires direct success,but it is impossible to avoid mistakes on the way to the next improvement,and maybe we should learn to enjoying making mistakes and gaining progress through mistakes.

Discoveries and progress in science
are achieved only by making mistakes.To some extent,science is a subject full of experiments,assumptions,and reasoning,so it is inevitable to err for scientists and scholars.All new experiments and assumptions are the results of former failures,and there will be endless new ones in the future if there is no end in science.Thomas Edison--the most famous inventor, once made so many contributions to society and brought all humankind numerous progress,knew thousands of ways not to build a bulb.Another Chinese scientist--Yuanlongping,who invented hybridized rice which has solved the problem of hunger for millions of people,once tried 20 years to discover the optimum way to make rice most productive.From the two examples,we conclude that final success will emerge if you have made enough mistakes,and these mistakes are your best companion.

It is also true on the societal level.We were not born with talents of uncovering the unknown world.Everything we are aware of and understand now is after mistakes and corrections.The young might not be conscious of what is the most important thing in their life when they are scrambling for lucre until they loose an old friend or somebody they love most;students cannot acquire the best and efficient method in their study before they fail in exams times;and politicians always gain nothing
helpful to their leadership if they don't make mistakes on their way to puissance.Someone would question:Could some people avoid making errs in their life?I'm afraid the answer is definite no.Even the greatest figures in history make foolish mistakes,but it is their mistakes that promoted their progress and inscribed their names in our mind.

However,my agreement to this statement does not indicate that making random mistakes should be encouraged and that mistakes will necessarily result progress and new discoveries.We must concede that more mistakes make you more near to truth,but consideration about whether the next step is effective is necessary.That is to say,people should not make new steps without thinking.Every former mistake is valuable and directive,and the wise can analyze the reason why their former step is wrong or useless,while fools cannot.As a result,intelligent people learn experiences from mistakes they made,but some others make the same kind of mistakes again and again,what is more sarcastic,they think they become nearer to success.Thus we should be conscious of that whether the next step is necessary,if possible.Every time we make a mistake,something useful should be extracted so that we can avoid the same kind of errs in the future.

In sum,it is unrealistic not to make mistakes on the journey of discovering.Mistakes are nothing bad for our human,and they remind us of which path is unaccessible and provide us with experiences of failure.But we can reduce the meaningless mistakes by learning something through mistakes we have made.