呵呵，第一帖就求拍~作文一篇

meloUID: 200558

3-24
you agree or disagree with the following statement?
should live one city or in one country all their life instead of moving to live in different places.

The new century (wrong subject) has witnessed (a) remarkable stride in advancing technology and various field(s). Nowadays, development of vehicles (too general)makes our global (globe) more like a small village than any other time before. As a result of this, more and more people began to concern about whether we should stay in one place or move around. Even though several people would prefer to stay in one familiar city all their life, I would like to live in same different places. From my perspective, this kind of life style indeed has numerous benefits for me.
you are wasting my time.
first, I (first person )want to figure out that (why?) it is a pity to stay at one place for the/your/myentire life, no matter how beautiful this place is. Because by living in this way, you would lose a good chance to come through different kinds of life experiences and to full-fill (ah ha, no such word) your life bottle ( life bottle to fill with what? is there really such thing or your made it up). Traveling around and moving in (between) different cities could give you a brilliant and memorable experience. We would (may or might) meet different persons, suffer from several indicates( doen't make sense to me) , and have a deep understanding of other cultures. All of these are valuable wealth of our life, which can obtain (be obtained) only by been (being) to different places
(not even close, guy, u r totally not geting this writing thing.)

Second, on the contrary, staying in one place for a long time may erode your passion ( never seen such usage) and momentum. This place is so familiar to us that we lose our momentum and our curiosity gradually, this is a human nature. Such as the frog in a well, it considers itself as the wisest one and never makes up its mind to learn some else. However, to jump out of this well, we have to moving into some different place instead. When we face unacquainted person we have never met and unfamiliar subjects we have to learn from the beginning, we would arouse our nature( doesn't make sense) of seeking for new field. Taking those artists for (a) example, such as Van Gogh and Picasso, they all traveled around the world and spent their entire (lifes) in several different cities to search for inspiration for their productions ( are Van Gogh and Picasso some worker in factory since they product?).
( I am sorry you judged my article like you really know what logical is. US raters care nothing about a frog in a well, and they may never understand what you wanna say. this kind of writing skill looks like the one I use when I am in high school. you really need to inspire yourself on some new one, jump out of well, read some real article written by Americans.)

To sum up, staying in a signal place entire life is like to trap oneself in a well, it obstructs us from learning new things and wears away our passion of searching. To enjoy a colorful life and be active about life, we should make our trip to several different places and broaden our view.
good luck for you any way

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

3-26 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students who keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be more successful than students who do not.
As we growing up, we all have our own private room to stay in and to avoid from those interferers of outside world. However, this room is not also a physical place for us to live in, it works as symbol for us to measure whether we would be successful or not. Some people argue that only those students who can keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be successful in their future lives. After a deep consideration of this statement, I support to this judgment for several reasons. And I would only explore a few important ones here.

First, a cleaning and organized room presents the host good habits of life, these characteristics are very valuable for his or her life. The person whom keeps the objected in the room with a strict order, can make a reasonable plan about his or her life without any question. And the person who has a tiny and sweet bedroom is absolutely a person who loves daily life vary much and has passion about the world. There are several examples to illustrate this opinion, let us take my English teacher for example. Mr. High is one of the most impressive professors in our university. He is very precise with his scientific research and also pays much attention to keep his office methodical. We can always hardly to find a piece of ash in his office, and all the documents he has are all organized by their categories.

In addition, a disordered and messy space would have several bad influences for us on the contrary. Just like noise and offensive odour, a dirty space can drive us crazy after living in it for a long time. Living in a disordered room would slow down our pace of life and efficient of work. It would take us a lot of time to find the staff we need, while others have already finished their job. What’s more, a messy place can erode our motivation about life. We always see this kind of case in films, a person who is brokenhearted with his or her lover, always locked himself or herself in the lonely room and mess it. However, this action does not have a positive influence to relieve the sadness, the messy room makes the person disappointed about the messy life as well and to be more uncomfortable in this room.

To sum up, environment is a vital factor for our development. A neat space makes us clearly about where we are and where we should go. However, a mass room is a obstacle on our way to succeed which decrease our life pace.

yxb_25UID: 2758094

3-26 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students who keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be more successful than students who do not.
As we growing up, we all have our own private room to stay in and to avoid from those interferers of outside world. However, this room is not also
(only) a physical place for us to live in, it
(also)
works as symbol for us to measure whether we would be successful or not. Some people argue that only those students who can keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be successful in their future lives(life). After a deep consideration of this statement, I support to this judgment for several reasons. And I would only explore a few important ones here.(这里为什么要用only呢？楼主能解释一下么？）  

First, a cleaning and organized room presents the host（cultivate） good habits of life, these characteristics are very valuable for his or her（people's/individuals') life. The person whom keeps the objected (possessions)
in the room with a strict order, can make a reasonable plan about his or her life without any question. And the person who has a tiny and sweet (sweet 感觉在这里不够正式吧，sweet guys/person/place 口语用得比较多） bedroom is absolutely a person who loves （their）daily life vary much and has（has 改为are)
passion about the world( be passion about). There are several examples to illustrate this opinion, let us take my English teacher for example(take my English teacher as a example). Mr. High(?? Mr. High? 高先生？Mr. Gao?)
is one of the most impressive professors in our university. He is very precise(strict)with his scientific research and also pays much attention to keep his office methodical. We can always hardly to find a piece of ash in his office(a piece of ash?这样说不合适吧？), and all the documents he has are all organized by their(去掉their） categories.（最后一句有些啰嗦，建议能改成这样：All the documents he has are organized  by different categories and we cannot find a trace of dust in his office.)


In addition, a disordered and messy space would have several bad influences for us on the contrary. Just like noise and offensive odour, a dirty space can（may)
drive us crazy after living in it for a long time. Living in a disordered room would slow down our pace of life and efficient of work. It would take us a lot of time to find the staff we need, while others have already finished their job. What’s more, a messy place can erode our motivation about life. We always see this kind of case in films, a person who is brokenhearted with his or her lover, always locked himself or herself in the lonely room and mess it. However, this action does not have a positive influence to relieve the sadness, the messy room makes the person disappointed about the messy life as well and to be more uncomfortable in this room./
To sum up, environment is a vital factor for our development. A neat space makes us clearly about where we are and where we should go. （这句表达有点不清楚）However, a mass room is a obstacle on our way to succeed which decrease our life pace.
文章不错哦，脉络清晰，但是论证如果能突出“一家不扫何以扫天下”会更好，感觉LZ 的长句还是有些小问题，很容易引起歧义，建议LZ有空能再看看，呵呵~~

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

3-27 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries.

During the evolution of human kind, we have exploited numerous resources and invented lots of new objects and methods. The most important character of this period are those scientists, who play the irreplaceable role in this process, their discoveries and inventions propel our society forward in an amazing pace. However, we have to notice that the force of scientists is not always positive, some of their discoveries actually have obviously bad influence on our society. For this matter, while others only take notice of the scientist’s contribution, from my perspective, we should also pay attention to their responsibility to resolve the negative impacts of their discoveries. They cannot shift their duty to the society and to ordinary civilians.

To begin with, we have to recognize the inevitable fact, that almost every new invention of our society has some bad affection for us. That’s because every object in our world has a double face, it is an angel when we treat it kindly and make a reasonable use of it, however, it would turn to an evil and punish for our greed. There are several examples to illustrate this statement, let us take the painkilling drug for example. We have to admit that pain-killer is a valuable invention for the patients who struggle with serious diseases and stand for exquisite agony. It serves temporary quite and rest to the suffers and help them to recover their healthy condition. However, without limitation, several druggies, specially teenagers, use the special medical ability of this medicine to make a fantastic illusion for themselves. This behave not only has a bad affection on the society but also does harm to their own health.

For the problem we mentioned above, scientists, who give the birth to these inventions, should take their responsibility to help the civilian make a good use of their discoveries and to prevent negative impacts of these things extending in the society. There are many reasons for why scientists must stand out. Firstly, the most familiar person of those discoveries is the scientist and they have comprehensive and accurate understanding of what they make. Moreover, ordinary person always take scientist as their role model, the reputation of the scientist make them willing to follow scientist’s step. As a result of this, scientists are the most suitable person to take this main duty. There are a lot of work they can do, including persuading the government to stop their invention on nuclear weapon and deterring the birth of clone mankind.

To sum up, though we cannot ignore the positive affection of scientists, we have to ask them to take their responsibility to fight with the negative influences of their inventions. Stopping us use their discoveries inaccurate and giving us an essential direction is also a part of their work.

yxb_25UID: 2758094

During the evolution of human kind(our mankind), we have exploited numerous resources and invented lots of new objects and methods. The most important character of this period are those scientists, who play the irreplaceable role in this process, their discoveries and inventions propel our society forward in(forward 在这里感觉怪怪的，forward in没有这个用法) an amazing pace. However, we have to notice that the force of scientists is not always positive, some of their discoveries actually have obviously bad influence on our society. For this matter, while others only take notice of the scientist’s contribution, from my perspective, we should also pay attention to their responsibility to resolve the negative impacts of their discoveries. They cannot shift their duty to the society and to ordinary civilians.6 w. L5 e2 k  ]( o0 F1 V+ R0 l9 F
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To begin with, we have to recognize the inevitable fact, that almost every new invention of our society has some bad affection for us. That’s because every object in our world has a double face, it is an angel when we treat it kindly and make a reasonable use of it, however, it would turn to an evil and punish for our greed. There are several examples to illustrate this statement, let us take the painkilling drug for example. We have to admit that pain-killer is a valuable invention for the patients who struggle with serious diseases and stand for exquisite agony. It serves temporary quite and rest to（for)
the suffers and help them to recover their
healthy condition(感觉啰嗦了点）. However, without limitation, several druggies, specially teenagers, use the special medical ability of this medicine to make a fantastic illusion for themselves. This behave not only has a bad affection on the society but also does harm to their own health.

For the problem we mentioned above, scientists, who give the birth to these inventions, should take their responsibility to help the civilian make a good use of their discoveries and to prevent negative impacts of these things extending in the society. There are many reasons for why scientists must stand out. Firstly, the most familiar person of those discoveries is the scientist and they have comprehensive and accurate understanding of what they make. Moreover, ordinary person always take scientist as their role model, the reputation of the scientist make them willing to follow scientist’s step. As a result of this, scientists are the most suitable person to take this main duty. There are a lot of work they can do, including persuading the government to stop their invention on nuclear weapon and deterring the birth of clone mankind.5 ?4 {' d9 K$ r
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To sum up, though we cannot ignore the positive affection of scientists, we have to ask them to take their responsibility to fight with the negative influences of their inventions. Stopping us use their discoveries inaccurate and giving us an essential direction is also a part of their work.


写得很好，思路很清晰，观点举例也很充分，句子表达也清楚，没什么大问题，学习学习

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

3-28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests.

When we were a small child, playing sports was an irreplaceable action in our leisure time. We can indicate that without sports we would not grow up health and intellect. However, nowadays, there is another debate about which we gain from playing sports is important- fun or the spirit of competition. Some people would argue that we should let our children learn the deeper meaning of the sports that is the friendship we make and the fun we have. On the contrary, other would hold a different point that the most important reason why we take part in the sports is the process of contest with each other. This action would teach lots of valuable things beside the enjoyment and the friendship. From my perspective, I agree with the latter statement for the following reasons.

First of all, sports birthed in the ancient time were result from the competition between our ancestors and those nature factors, such as climate, animals, limit resources and so on. The basic characteristics of sport is that it obtains all the abilities we need to fight with the nature, like running, boxing, swimming and other basic action like these. As a result of this, we can figure out that the main idea contains in sports is competition. And as the participants of sports, the main thing we should learn from it is fighting as well. In the modern period, the meaning of fighting has changed a bit, it is fighting with our weakness and timidity, rather than fighting with nature factors.

Furthermore, competition in sports can teach us a lot of principles of our future life. As for children, before we take part in the real society life, the sports help us to prepare a lot of necessary abilities though contest. The principles we learned are so numerous, we would only take one example of it into account. A child, who plays football with his buddies, would understand only well cooperate with his team-member could lead them to win the game. The principle is similar for his future life and career, that only a person who can work together with the coworkers would finish the duty in time and the spirit of cooperation is a crucial factor to measure before your boss makes the decision about your promotion.

Examples like we mentioned above are so many, and we indeed gain a lot of valuable principles from playing sports. Besides the simple enjoyment and friendship, competition in sports can tutor us to have all the necessary qualities we need in our future life.

shouwang1UID: 2787309

24# Cincybk
Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests.9 }4 R  ?0 v5 j  X$
When we were （a） small child(children), playing sports was an irreplaceable action in our leisure time. We can indicate that without sports we would not grow up health and intellect（副词）. However, nowadays, there is another debate about which we gain from playing sports is important- fun or the spirit of competition. Some people would argue that we should let our children learn the deeper meaning of the sports that is the friendship we make and the fun we have. On the contrary, other would hold a different point that the most important reason why we take part in the sports is the process of contest with each other. This action would teach lots of valuable things beside the enjoyment and the friendship. From my perspective, I agree with the latter statement (?)for the following reasons.
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First of all, sports birthed in the ancient time were result from the competition between our ancestors and those nature factors, such as climate, animals, limit resources and so on. The basic characteristics(characteristic) of sport is that it obtains all the abilities we need to fight with（against） the nature, like running, boxing, swimming and other basic action like these. As a result of this, we can figure out that the main idea contains in sports is competition. And as the participants of sports, the main thing we should learn from it is fighting as well. In the modern period, the meaning of fighting has changed a bit, it is fighting with our weakness and timidity, rather than fighting with nature factors.

Furthermore, competition in sports can teach us a lot of principles of(in)our future life. As for children, before we take part in the real society life, the sports help us to prepare a lot of necessary abilities though contest. The principles we learned are so numerous, we would only take one example of it into account. A child, who plays football with his buddies, would understand only well cooperate(cooperating) with his team-member could lead them to win the game. The principle is similar for his future life and career, that only a person who can work together with the coworkers would finish the duty in time and the spirit of cooperation is a crucial factor to measure before your boss makes the decision about your promotion. ) f9 b% r* v) b

Examples like we mentioned above are so many(有点chinglish), and we indeed gain a lot of valuable principles from playing sports. Besides the simple enjoyment and friendship, competition in sports can tutor us to have all the necessary qualities we need in our future life.

文章句子用词都很好，不过是不是没有仔细审题，题目不是一个选择性问题，而是agree或者don’t agree，这个题目只有一个观点，所以第一段最后点明主题说选择latter是不是有点问题？希望交流一下。

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

3-30 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
Most people prefer having other people make decisions for them rather than making decisions by themselves

As we all know, there are numerous decisions we have to make during our lifetime, the decision may as small as which cloth we wear today, or as important as which career we would take part in. And at this stage, we have a heated discussion about how to make the decision. Whether we should make it all by ourselves or we should ask other people to make decisions for us. While most people prefer having other persons make decisions for them, I, on the contrary, would like to choose the first choice to make decision by myself. People should make their decision by them own, and there are several important reasons for this.

At the first, we have to make it clear that most decisions we have to make are all about ourselves, about our future, our choice and our inclination. All of these factors indicate that how well a decision is based on measuring of how well it fit our situation. Meanwhile, we cannot deny the person who is most familiar to ourselves is us own. We can understand our condition more clearly than others, which is crucial for making a suitable decision. A misunderstanding of the condition would lead to a weak decision, which would be dropped up more easily.

And, what’s more, when we have just made a decision, the following and the most important step is to implement the very decision. At this time, only by making the decision by ourselves, we would have more motivation to taking it into action. Such as the following example, if it is a child’s decision to join in a piano class in the leisure time rather than parents’ order, he or she would be more willing to continue this class every week instead of finding excuse to quit it.

However, when we make the decision, we should inquire other people for their suggestion in some certain situations as well, and this is better for us to make the most suitable decision. Other people could give us valuable advices base on their own experiences and could figure out our faults as well. With their helpful suggestions, we can avoid many unnecessary actions to save our time, money and resources.

All in all, when it refers to making a decision, the best we for us is to make it ourselves, which will help us to make the most suitable decision and incent us to make it come true. Of course, at the same time, we cannot ignore the important effects of consulting with other people.

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

25# shouwang1
呵呵，开头段我一般的按模板写的，不过可能受之前考G的影响，我是把一个话题写成正反两方观点，然后写同意一方，我也不知道这样究竟好不好诶~

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

3-31 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.

As a result of the development of technology, we can equal our era with the period of television and other means of entertainment visional methods. There a general discussion over the influence of television recent days, and one of the questions under debate is whether movies and television have more negative effects than positive ones on young people. Though many people do not give their support to this statement, from my perspective, I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.

At the beginning, I have to point out is that watching too much television is a waste of young people’s time. Nowadays, we have more and more crucial problems associated with spending too much time in front of the television. Among these problems, several ones are not only harmful for their study but also threaten to their physical fitness. Taking one of my friend’s son for example, who spends all most his spare time on television programs. This unlimited action not only makes him have a bad grade on his study, but also suffers him from several diseases such as adiposity and myopia.

In addition, we cannot ignore the bad influence of several television programs on young people about their life style. This is a matter we cannot afford to ignore. We find out more and more students follow the way of life in those television programs, which is not suitable for them and would make them lose their affection of ordinary daily life. We have many examples related to this problem, the bad influence of a hot play named gossip girl is one of them. All characters in this play live in a luxury life, they have fan in every party and make a complex relationship with all of their fellows. It is just like they spare no effort to enjoy their lives rather than study and working. However, we must make it clear that all of these are fictional, and do not worth us to take as our life model.

However, before making my conclusion, I think it is important to have a look at the opposite side of this argument, that movies and television do have some positive effects on young students we cannot deny. Thanks to those movies and television we can have a broad view of life, we can have a glance of cultures, the traditions and other life styles of several different countries from. And what is more, by this mean of connection with the outside world, we can even have full view of the whole universe as well.

All in all, because of the factors we discussed above, we can safely draw our conclusion that the negative effects of movie and television are overweight their positive influences for young people. We should pay more attention to avoid our students to spend too much time on them.

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

28# 老王家的小猫

As a result of the development of technology, we can equal our era with the period of television and other means of entertainment visional （methods重复）. There a general discussion over the influence of television recent days, and one of the questions under debate is whether （movies and ）television has more negative effects than positive ones on young people. Though many people do not give their support to this statement, from my perspective, I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.; S8 _" Q1 M# @" H! _/ b% ^* A

/ u- d0 x9 G2 E+ R" I9 uAt the beginning, I have to point out is that watching too much television is a waste of young people’s time. Nowadays, we have more and more crucial problems associated with spending too much time in front of the television. Among these problems, several ones are not only harmful for their study but also threaten to their physical fitness. Taking one of my friend’s son for example, who spends (all) most his spare time on television programs. This unlimited action not only makes him have a bad grade on his study, but also suffers him from several diseases such as adiposity and myopia.
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In addition, we cannot ignore the bad influence of several television programs on young people about their life style. This is a matter we cannot afford to ignore. We find out more and more students follow the way of life in those television programs, which is not suitable for them and would make them lose their affection of ordinary daily life. We have many examples related to this problem, the bad influence of a hot play named gossip girl is one of them. All characters in this play live in a luxury life, they have fan in every party and make a complex relationship with all of their fellows. . It is just like they spare no effort to enjoy their lives rather than study and work(ing). However, we must make it clear that all of these (some like that)are fictional, and do not worth us to take as our life model. ; }1 K' z2 G+ z
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However, before making my conclusion, I think it is important to have a look at the opposite side of this argument, that movies and television do have some positive effects on young students we cannot deny. Thanks to those movies and television we can have a broad view of life, we can have a glance of cultures, the traditions and other life styles of several different countries from. And what is more, by this mean of connection（connect） with the outside world, we can even have (a) full view of the whole universe as well.
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All in all, because of the factors we discussed above, we can safely draw our conclusion that the negative effects of movie and television are overweight their positive influences for young people. We should pay more attention to avoid our students to spend too much time on them. enjoy their lives rather than study and working. However, we must make it clear that all of these are fictional（绝对化了）, and do not worth us to take as our life model.

我觉得写的很不错……我没改出来几个错误

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
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As we all know, there are numerous decisions we have to make during our lifetime, the decision may as small as which cloth we wear today, or as important as which career we would take part in. And at this stage, we have a heated discussion about how to make the decision., Whether we should make it all by ourselves or we should ask other people to make decisions for us. While most people prefer having other persons make decisions for them, I, on the contrary, would like to choose the first choice to make decision by myself. People should make their decision by them own, and there are several important reasons for this. & }" p/ v: i: v

, I2 |* a* C6 l7 g/ @At the first, we have to make it clear that most decisions we have to make are all about ourselves, about our future, our choice and our inclination(决定是关于我们的选择，我们的爱好？？不懂。。应该是based our choice and our inclination吧。). All of these factors indicate that how well a decision is based on measuring of how well it fit our situation. Meanwhile, we cannot deny the person who is most familiar to ourselves is us own. We can understand our condition more clearly than others, which is crucial for making a suitable decision. A misunderstanding of the condition would lead to a weak decision, which would be dropped up more easily. 0 H  K1 B& |6 m* B% ]: c3 D" E
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And, what’s more, when we have just made a decision, the following and the most important step is to implement the very（very 去掉） decision. At this time, only by making the decision by ourselves, we would have more motivation to taking it into action. Such as the following example, if it is a child’s decision to join in a piano class in the leisure time rather than parents’ order, he or she would be more willing to continue this class every week instead of finding excuses to quit it. / |  K' ~) f4 H; C9 y% }
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However, when we make the decision, we should inquire enquire other people for their suggestion in some certain situations as well, and this is better for us to make the most suitable decision. Other people could give us valuable advices base on their own experiences and could figure out our faults as well. With their helpful suggestions, we can avoid many unnecessary actions to save our time, money and resources.
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All in all, when it refers to making a decision, the best we way for us is to make it ourselves, which will help us to make the most suitable decision and incent us to make it come true. Of course, at the same time, we cannot ignore the important effects of consulting with other people（错误很少。。。唯一感觉就是第一段缺少点亮点。。哎。。我也是这个毛病，可是总感觉要是想出来亮点了，时间就不够了。）.