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pochun111UID: 2608867

I strongly agree with the statement that people should live in one city for their whole life instead of moving to different places. Nowadays, a great deal of people prefers to go around their country pursuing a more decent work or life in order to follow the step of the high developed society. However, for eliminating the grievance of the current situation we have neglected and forfeited more significant thing of our life. Therefore, living in one place reflects many advantages which can be distributed mainly in three distinct respects.

First, it would decrease a plenty of dispensable trouble for us by living in one city. We have been accustomed to our city’s lifestyle. The time of on and off duty, the discount season of every shopping mall, the favorable restaurant, all these information come from the experience and a comparatively long time of living here. The position of every corner of the city has been kept in our mind. We know how far is it and how long it would take to go somewhere in our city by which kind of vehicle or which bus.

Second, living in one place we have familiar friends and dearest family. Both our friends and family have played essential role of our life since they consistently willing to give us a hand by the time we encountering some difficulties. We can’t confide our gloom or share our sorrow and happiness without them. We have to consort new friends, which always need a long time to establish belief between the news and us when we move to an unfamiliar place. Further more, there isn’t our family by our sides. Everything is new.

The last but not the least, living in one place means this place is our home where we was born here. Our entire memories from the childhood to adulthood are all originated from here. Here we have our familiar streets and a variety of unforgettable things. The definition of home is that a place in which we spend most of our time to get along with the people there and won their love. No other places are capable of substituting it in this world. As the old saying goes, fallen leaves return to the roots, which is telling us that home is our definite destination.

In conclusion, as what I have said above, living in one place for ones’ whole life has expressed more advantages than disadvantages, which make me not hesitate to choose it.

howard_hhqUID: 2648506

I strongly agree with the statement that people should live in one city for their whole life instead of moving to different places. Nowadays, a great deal of people prefers to go around their country pursuing a more decent work or life in order to follow the step of the high developed society. However, for eliminating the grievance of the current situation(这句不太懂，你的for 要换成due to) we have neglected and forfeited more significant thing of our life. Therefore, living in one place reflects many advantages which can be distributed mainly in three(换成several更好) distinct respects.

" ~: z  n8 R3 l: s6 G4 _First, it would decrease a plenty of dispensable trouble for us by living in one city. We have been accustomed to our city’s lifestyle. The time of on and off duty, the discount season of every shopping mall, the favorable restaurant, all these information come from the experience and a comparatively long time of living here. The position of every corner of the city has been kept in our mind. We know how far is it and how long it would take to go somewhere in our city by which kind of vehicle or which bus.


/ E7 F% {. F' g: SSecond, living in one place we have familiar friends and dearest family(去掉). Both our friends and family have played essential role of our life since they are consistently willing to give us a hand by the time we encountering some difficulties. We can’t confide our gloom or share our sorrow and happiness without them. We have to consort new friends, which always need a long time to establish belief between the news and us when we move to an unfamiliar place. Furthermore, there isn’t our family by our sides. Everything is new.

  z; i, A2 L/ x/ w7 ?7 ~8 l  c- @The last but not the least, living in one place means this place is our home where we was born here. Our entire memories from the childhood to adulthood are all originated (all originate) from here. Here we have our familiar streets and a variety of unforgettable things. The definition of home is that a place in which we spend most of our time to get along with the people there and won (win) their love. No other places are capable of substituting it in this world. As the old saying goes, fallen leaves return to the roots, which is telling us that home is our definite destination.
(貌似这个比较牵强)

, Z8 C2 M, G" `! q5 d2 LIn conclusion, as what I have said above, living in one place for ones’ whole life has expressed more advantages than disadvantages, which make me not hesitate to choose it.

除了最后一个理由，其他都很好，感觉你的表达能力很好，逻辑性挺强，绿色的都是比较好的表达，红色的就是有问题的

summeralwaysUID: 2704210

I strongly agree with the statement that people should live in one city for their whole life instead of moving to different places. Nowadays, a great deal of people prefers(prefer) to go around their country(少个介词吧，我感觉，用for怎么样？） pursuing a more decent work or life in order to follow the step of the high developed society. However, for eliminating the grievance of the current situation we have neglected and forfeited more significant thing of our life. Therefore, living in one place reflects （个人感觉用boasts会搭配一点，或者直接has)many advantages which can be distributed mainly in three distinct respects(aspects).
First, it would decrease a plenty of dispensable trouble for us by living in one city. We have been accustomed to our city’s lifestyle. The time of on and off duty, the discount season (seasons)of every shopping mall, the favorable restaurant（复数）, all these information come from the experience and a comparatively long time of living here.( 这里可以用个连词，Furthermore )The position of every corner of the city has been kept in our mind. We know how far is it and how long it would take to go somewhere in our city by which kind of vehicle or which bus.
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) ~7 y0 ?- `0 }. M/ x2 {Second, living in one place(缺点东西。。可以加个，allow us to have,去掉后面的WE ) we have familiar friends and dearest family. Both our friends and family have played（感觉play比较好点吧，是个事实) essential role of our life since they (are)consistently willing to give us a hand by the time(when) we encountering some difficulties. We can’t confide our gloom or share our sorrow and happiness(感觉happiness在这里有点突兀，前面都是不好的东西。。要不去掉？） without them. 这里可以加一些连词，因为下文你要说搬到其他地方的缺点了。。We have to consort（是consult吧？） new friends, which（感觉which用在这里不对，前后两句话没什么关系，建议改为，we have to ...,but it always demands a long time to establish relationship with the local people） always need a long time to establish belief（为什么用belief?relationship怎么样） between the news（local people 怎么样，因为加入我们搬过去的话，我们算是新人，不过新人好像不是用news吧？） and us when we move to an unfamiliar place. Further more, there isn’t our family by our sides. Everything is new.
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The last but not the least, living in one place(好像前两个点都是以这个短语为主语的，可以改变一下句式哦） means this place is our home where we was（were) born here(here去掉）. Our entire memories from the childhood to adulthood are all originated from here. Here we have our familiar streets and a variety of unforgettable things. The definition of home is that a place in which we spend most of our time to get along with the people there and won their love. No other places are capable of substituting it in this world. As the old saying goes, fallen leaves return to the roots, which is telling（tells) us that home is our definite destination.
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In conclusion, as what I have said above, living in one place for ones’ whole life has expressed more advantages than disadvantages, which make me not hesitate to choose it.
感觉和楼上相同，最后一个观点不是很充分哦，你的很多词用的很棒哦，向你学习了，加油哦。不好意思，评晚了，我以为没被分组呢，今天才看到sorry啦

pochun111UID: 2608867

3.19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Printed books have greater effects on society than television has.
As a citizen of china, I have the honor to see the rapid development in the nearly past twenty years of my country. People's life and think have experienced tremendous changes from simple to a more complex situation for the reason of the development of the TV shows and the movies' industry. However, the printed books have ever been projected long time before, which didn't let us to follow the pace of the world in time. Therefore, I will not hesitate to draw this conclusion that the TV shows have greater effects on us than the printed books, which is oppose to the statement.
On the first place, TV shows and movies give us opportunities to get to know this world and further more let us to keep pace with it. TV shows contributes to establish an international information web, by which we are able to get the news instantaneously. The speed of distributing of information becomes more rapid. For instance, entertainment news of our favorite superstars, prevalent tide of  vogue, occurrence of our country are all come on the screen by the time we open the television. However, despite the printed books are capable of letting us comprehend the culture and fashion, it is too slow to catch up with the step of  TV, what's more, the newer changes have happened while the books are relatively printed out.

On the second place, TV shows and movies offer the particular group of people who are illiterate a stage to understand the news. They are able to know what happened around the world by the way of seeing these vivid images and through the oral interpretation and expression of the TV shows. It is difficult for this kind of people to read books, not mention to comprehend what the book said. Thereby, the entire people have won the opportunity to get the news.

Last, TV shows and movies have simplified people’s life as well. The fanatic of peeking opera can see it via the opera channel instead of going to the theater. The youth who have an enthusiasm for fashion can hold it by seeing on fashion channel instead of buying magazines. Further more, this advantage can be reflected when it comes to reading books, we can see television while we are doing whatever things. And this will make us feel relax and release our burden.

In conclusion, it is no doubt to say that the TV shows have influence our society greater than printed books not only just at the respects I have said above but also in many other ways.

pochun111UID: 2608867

3.21
To solve problems present and future is it necessary to understand the past.

Follow the step of this high developed society, a issue whether understand the past is essential for our present and future or not have been mentioned out. A great deal of people holds the opinion that it is indispensible for us to understand it while the extra ones sustain the contrary perspective. From my perspective, a profound understanding of the past is positive and significant in solving the problems afterward when take this issue into account extensively.

First, having a good comprehension of the past is capable of making ourselves cherish the life. No matter which point of view, the peace, the high level of life or scientific development, it from, we have no excuse of don’t appreciate and love our life. Since there is a huge gap between past and now, which have reflected the difficulty of fighting for happiness. For instance, one of the most astonishing things of our history, World War II, brought agony to hundreds of thousands of people who unfortunately lost their family and home. Such a life today seems so precious when it comes to compare the unsteady society of past to our serene life.

Second, it will help us to conclude defects logically and accumulate more experience in order to establish a more developed society by understanding the past. Plague/epidemic disease caused by various kind of virus had been overcome through the invention of the vaccine. Economic depression could be interceded efficiently for the reason of the experience obtained in the past several depressions. What’s more, the leaders could consult the past incident for making decisions. All those breakthroughs originate from a desire of eliminating the grievance of the condition at that time.

Third, understand past offering us a stage of learning the spirit of legendary people who have brought us a convenient and expedient life as well. These extraordinary people’s feat has not only put a step stone in our way to develop, but also given us opportunities to go along their idea to contrive more advanced technology. Furthermore, their irreconcilable spirit which is elite for succeed is also a good sample for us to imitate.

In conclusion, past plays as significant role as if it is the root of a tree. Therefore, as what I said above, I will not hesitate to champion the opinion that it is necessary to understand to past in solving the problems and in developing the society.

lawrencelanUID: 2173940

To solve problems present and future is it necessary to understand the past.


Follow(ing) the step of this high developed society, a issue whether understand(ing) the past is essential for our present and future or not have been mentioned out. A great deal of people holds the opinion that it is indispensible for us to understand it while the extra ones sustain the contrary perspective. From my perspective, a profound understanding of the past is positive and significant in solving the problems afterward when take this issue into account extensively.(这一段太模版了：）)

First, having a good comprehension of the past is capable of making ourselves cherish the life. No matter which point of view, the peace, the high level of life or scientific development, it (is) from, we have no excuse of don’t appreciate and love our life.(of don't... I am not sure it is grammarly correct and this kind of expression is a little Chinglish) Since there is a huge gap between past and now, which have reflected the difficulty of fighting for happiness. For instance, one of the most astonishing things of our history, World War II, brought agony to hundreds of thousands of people who unfortunately lost their family and home. Such a life today seems so precious when it comes to compare the unsteady society of past to our serene life. (You didn't talk about solving problems this paragraph totally)

Second, it will help us to conclude defects logically and accumulate more experience in order to establish a more developed society by understanding the past. Plague/epidemic disease caused by various kind of virus had been overcome through the invention of the vaccine. Economic depression could be interceded efficiently for the reason of the experience obtained in the past several depressions.(I don't think so. Take a look at the most recent ecomony downturn.) What’s more, the leaders could consult the past incident for making decisions. All those breakthroughs originate from a desire of eliminating the grievance of the condition at that time.

Third, understand(ing) past offering us a stage of learning the spirit of legendary people who have brought us a convenient and expedient(I don't this is a correct adjecent word here) life as well. These extraordinary people’s feat has not only put a step stone in our way to develop, but also given us opportunities to go along their idea to contrive more advanced technology. Furthermore, their irreconcilable spirit which is elite for succeed is also a good sample for us to imitate.

In conclusion, past plays as significant role as if it is the root of a tree. Therefore, as what I said above, I will not hesitate to champion the opinion that it is necessary to understand to past in solving the problems and in developing the society.

总结：同学的结构比较清晰，但是论点论据有点偏题。另外这篇文章遣词造句有待加强，建议多练习。

caoxuemeiUID: 2629828

fujian

pochun111UID: 2608867

3.27
I partially agree with the statement that it could be one reason for people don’t work. However, the speaker’s excessive stress on it has neglected the other reasons slovenly. Nowadays, people who considered working as an efficient method to get a desirable life would like to choose it, nevertheless, of course, A tremendous amount of people not hesitate to choose not going to work for various kind of reasons.
On the first place, of course, that the speaker’s assertion on people who get enough money are rarely happy is capable of explaining this question. A great deal of people always sacrifices their time, energy and interests to earn money result in feeling unhappy and hectic. Therefore, this phenomenon has caused many people wouldn’t like to go work in fear of losing happiness. People hope to earn enough money fulfilling their desire of having anything they want at once, which would bring them a wealthy and relax life. But, the subsequent consequence always approve that this dream is out of their reach and reality is ruthless. Therefore, it is ordinary to choose living a non-sacrificing life instead of going to work.
On the second place, having a tedious feeling of the work, thoughts of being unbecoming work for oneself are both reasonable reasons for people don’t work. A routine job would let some one feel comfortable while make the other one a contradictory feeling of stogy. This group of people needs a more competitive job to motivate their potential capability of creating. They would rather relinquish the opportunity to do this kind of unchangeable job. On the other hand, there is no apace for rising in the future is the rational reason for people don’t work either.
The last but not the least, the reason that people would like to cultivate their interests is responsible for this issue. They will to have a rest in the way of traveling around the world, in which they could reduce the pressure. What’s more, putting family in the first place is a good answer as well. Someone aspire to take care of their family which consists of small children and old parents heart and soul. This kind of people would feel more successful in looking for their family than that in obtaining achievements in job. Thereby, they would stay at home instead of working absolutely.
In conclusion, people don’t go to work have different reasons rather than just the only one which the speaker said in the statement. We should considered this issue in distinct respects ignoring none of them.

chailybaiUID: 2741896

I partially agree with the statement that it could be one reason （？不懂。。这。。这是什么意思啊？）for people who （don’t） work. However, the speaker’s excessive stress on it （it指代的是？）has neglected the other reasons slovenly.（没有很理解这句话，但是语法肯定是有错的，而且这个speaker又是指谁？是这题干的这个statement吧。。这句话我还是没理解=。=） Nowadays, people who considered working as an efficient method to get a desirable life would like to choose it（it 又是指啥？）, nevertheless, of course,（连词一个就够了） A tremendous amount of people （will）not hesitate to choose not going to work for various kind of reasons. 1 x3 w! G5 @- ^7 _5 \, u8 _4 ~
On the first place, of course,（连词太多） that the speaker’s assertion on people who get enough money are rarely happy is capable of explaining this question. A great deal of people always sacrifices their time, energy and interests to earn money result in feeling unhappy and hectic.（这句不错） Therefore, this phenomenon has caused many people wouldn’t like to go work in fear of losing happiness. People hope to earn enough money fulfilling their desire of having anything they want at once, which would bring them a wealthy and relax life. But, the subsequent consequence always approve that this dream is out of their reach and reality is ruthless. Therefore, it is ordinary to choose living a non-sacrificing life instead of going to work.（这段理由阐述的不明确啊，最好在第一句话就把TS亮出来）
On the second place, having a tedious feeling of the work, thoughts of being unbecoming work for oneself are both reasonable reasons for people don’t work. A routine job would let some one feel comfortable while make the other one （one去掉）a contradictory feeling of stogy. This group of people needs a more competitive job to motivate their potential capability of creating. They would rather relinquish the opportunity to do this kind of unchangeable job. On the other hand, there is no apace for rising in the future is the rational reason for people don’t work either.

The last but not the least, the reason that people would like to cultivate their interests is responsible for this issue. They will to have a rest in the way of traveling around the world, in which they could reduce the pressure. What’s more, putting family in the first place is a good answer as well. Someone aspire to take care of their family which consists of small children and old parents heart and soul. This kind of people would feel more successful in looking for their family than that in obtaining achievements in job. Thereby, they would stay at home instead of working absolutely.
In conclusion, people don’t go to work have different reasons rather than just the only one which the speaker said in the statement. We should considered this issue in distinct respects ignoring none of them.

文章没有很看明白，总感觉楼主有点写跑题了。。写的感觉是人们为什么不去工作。。但是题目强调的是那些不去工作就有很多钱的人会觉得不开心。。建议重写一下吧

语句词汇什么的还是不错的，逻辑有点乱，总之我看的一头雾水啊，有点看ibt阅读的感觉囧。。。

nexthopUID: 2744929

I partially agree with the statement that it could be one reason for people don’t work. However, the speaker’s excessive stress on it has neglected the other reasons slovenly. Nowadays, people who considered working as an efficient method to get a desirable life would like to choose it, nevertheless, of course, A tremendous amount of people not hesitate to choose not going to work for various kind of reasons.(一上来就表达观点，但是观点完了却来了nowadays…有点奇怪，呵呵)

On the first place, of course, that the speaker’s assertions on people who get enough money are rarely happy is capable of explaining this question.（第一句话最好直接给出这段话的论点）A great deal of people always sacrifices their time, energy and interests to earn money result in feeling unhappy and hectic. Therefore, this phenomenon has caused many people wouldn’t like to go work in fear of losing happiness. People hope to earn enough money fulfilling their desire of having anything they want at once, which would bring them a wealthy and relax life. But, the subsequent consequence always approve that this dream is out of their reach and reality is ruthless. Therefore, it is ordinary to choose living a non-sacrificing life instead of going to work.

On the second place, having a tedious feeling of the work, thoughts of being unbecoming work for oneself are both reasonable reasons for people don’t work. A routine job would let some one feel comfortable while make the other one a contradictory feeling of stogy. This group of people needs a more competitive job to motivate their potential capability of creating. They would rather relinquish the opportunity to do this kind of unchangeable job. On the other hand, there is no apace for rising in the future is the rational reason for people don’t work either.（这一段你想表明什么观点呢？没看明白）

The last but not the least, the reason that people would like to cultivate their interests is responsible for this issue. They will to have a rest in the way of traveling around the world, in which they could reduce the pressure. What’s more, putting family in the first place is a good answer as well. Someone aspire to take care of their family which consists of small children and old parents heart and soul. This kind of people would feel more successful in looking for their family than that in obtaining achievements in job. Thereby, they would stay at home instead of working absolutely.

In conclusion, people don’t go to work have different reasons rather than just the only one which the speaker said in the statement. We should considered (consider) this issue in distinct respects ignoring none of them.

感觉结构还是稍微有点点混乱，而且审题也出现了一点问题。要紧扣题目中的 工作、钱、快乐 三点来说，至少第三段里只是在说工作，和另外两个没关系了。这样明显是跑题了。
继续加油~

pochun111UID: 2608867

3.29
Some people think one's working is more important than being with one's famly."

Here is come to the issue that either working or taking care of family is more essential for people. Different group of people would maintain various points of view. From my perspective, I would strongly agree with the statement that working is more vital than staying with family after scrutinizing this two alternative choice meticulously.

To begin with, the accumulation of experience involving method of getting along with people and transacting issues through working have not only given us a hand of controlling all kinds of instantaneous things but also offered us sufficient skills in communicating with people sophisticatedly. By consorting a great deal of people we would have the recognition that different group of people prefer to talk in which elaborative manners. It is beneficial for establishing relationship with others. Moreover, amassing experience via working has made us capable of solving problems which would be encountered in the future. Succeed in going through dilemma producing by work would win appreciation of boss and colleagues. Both of these achievements either relationship or appreciation come from the experience of working.

On the other hand, working gives us opportunities to live in a condition in which we always have assignment to do. We would never stay in boring life caused by accumulation of too much no-intention time. Choosing work means having a hectic life instantaneously. Our attention must be paid on work since the superior would continuously distribute assignments. Therefore, we got an intention of completing our work perfectly, by which we would never lose spirit of fighting. Further more, we will be enraptured by obtaining affirmation in our work. It is a significant thing of our life.

In addition, working is a good method for us to implement our goal of proving ourselves and getting anything we want, since we can taste success and earn money through work. Our value could be absolutely reflected by contributing to our company. We could use the money we have earned to travel around the world, to buy anything we want and to taste whichever delicious food. As the old saying goes” No pains, no gains”, we could enjoy our life only through hard working.

In sum, even though our family is indispensible part of our life, working is the only way of realizing ourselves and integrating us into this society. Just as what I have said above, working has impressed many extraordinary advantages. That’s why it is valuable for us living in this world, isn’t it?

zhezhe1011UID: 2656203

我发不了附件啊。。。在WORD里改的。。你要不加我Q试试，我直接传给你，好么？

QQ：110641849

pochun111UID: 2608867

It better to use own knowledge and experience to solve queation, or ask other people for advice.

A tremendous amount of problems would be encountered by us while we enjoying our life. Here comes to the issue that either utilize own knowledge and experience or ask for proposal from other people is more expedient way of solving questions. We keep cultivating our capability of independence and accumulating knowledge and experience with age, which make it possible to resolve most of issues in our life. Therefore, I confess that I inclined to champion the perspective that it is better to use own knowledge and experience to solve questions than ask for suggestion from others after scrutinize the advantage and limitation between these two methods simultaneously.  

On one hand, solving problems by using our own knowledge gives us a good opportunity to utilize and practice what we have learned, which contribute to a well comprehension of the knowledge and the recognition of knowledge deficiency. The value of our knowledge and experience could not be expressed completely without exploitation. For instance, one day, I found my experimental plants grow in an unhealthy way in the Lab. I detected them and thought about the causes which the professor has emphasized on in the class of triggering this kind of problem. Then I change the experimental plan which makes the plants go through the bad condition. I have a good analysis of growing plants, which attributes to use my own knowledge.

Further more, our knowledge of deficiency could not be realized without utilization. Hypothesize that I still couldn’t find the causes after have used all of my knowledge and experience in solving the plants’ disease. That means there is a serious flaw of my knowledge system in the realm of tissue culture and plenty of knowledge still should be learned. That is the advantages of solving problems by using own knowledge.

On the other hand, it would not trouble the other people by the way of solving problems without asking for advice. Sometimes, most of people are hectic in doing their own things. There is not sufficient time for them in completing their own assignment, not to mention giving you some valuable suggestion. What’s more, the condition is always not fit and convenient enough for us to ask recommendation. We may be trapped in the condition of the absence of the people we want to ask for, while the problem ought to be solved instantaneously. The deadline is coming and would not be delayed. In order to finish the assignment, it is better to concentrate our energy and wisdom on it by using our own knowledge and experience. Both of these conditions which I have supposed above have reflected that it is better for us to utilize our own knowledge and experience in solving problems.

Admittedly, sometimes asking for advice would have positive effects which could be reflected not only in the realm of extensiveness of information collection but also in abridgement of time expense in solving problems, since our knowledge and experience are limited. However, all of these advantages are valuable only under the condition of we have endeavored to solve them ourselves already.

In conclusion, as what I have said above, although asking for proposal has certain merits on a limited condition, utilizing own knowledge and experience in solving problems has exposed more advantages. We should have a good knowledge of using all of these resources.

124245581UID: 2764151

刚改完有点晚··不好意思呀··

pochun111UID: 2608867

Students at university or in college should choose the most difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades (marks) in them.


There are many compulsory courses and selected courses for university students who major in distinct discipline to select each term. Here comes to the issue that whether students at university or in college should choose the most strenuous course even if they are incapable of getting top grades. From my perspective, I inclined to disapprove the statement after scrutinize the negative effects of doing so meticulously.

On the first place, it would destroy our confidence in study while we are not qualified to handle the arduous course. There is no doubt that confidence plays one of the most significant role in our way to success. How difficult it is to reconstruct our confidence after experience a strike resulting from being incapable of comprehending classes. Once the accumulation of the incomprehensive knowledge increase into an unacceptable extent, some students would rather give up this course than endeavor to conquer it, since they have no confidence in doing well in it. This situation is an undesirable consequent of education, which is oppose to the rudimentary purpose to choose it.

On the second place, it is a waste of time and energy to choosing the most difficult courses in condition of the course have not much to do with the students’ majors. There are tremendous amount of knowledge we have to learn every day. The intention of getting a good analysis for each professional course could be guaranteed by ensuring sufficient time of working on them. We must distribute our time and energy to the difficult but subordinate courses rather than concentrate our attention on the most essential ones, which would make a consequence of getting bad grades in most of courses.

The last but not the least, the bad grades getting from the strenuous courses would not only impact our application of scholarship but also give a bad impression to the professor. A bad grade would follow us in the future, which make us unable to obtain more opportunity from the professor to take part in the practice we desire to. Further more, it is not a persuasive record for us to hunt for a decent job, since almost all the corporations hope to employ an extraordinary staff rather than a employee maintaining bad records during college. Therefore, choosing difficult courses would have the opportunity cost risk of getting bad grades which have a negative effect for us future life

In conclusion, although sometimes the difficult courses would encourage us to study hard, I will not hesitate to disagree with the statement for the reason of a series of disadvantages.