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Teachers and friends are two groups of people with whom we get along for the most time during our life time. They can both teach us knowledge of diversity fields. People always deem that students are more influenced by teachers than their friends. Someone agree with it while someone may hold diverse opinions. In my prospective, I disagree with this point.


First of all, admittedly, teaching us knowledge is the vocation of a teacher. But teacher always teach us in a commanding way. They told us things should be like this, how to comprehend some phenomenon or how to write articles or even how to get along with friends. But we get all these knowledge in a way of passively putting in. We treat learning the knowledge as an assignment. We always think that we can only use them in our examinations. So we will never truly glad to learn the knowledge from teachers, say nothing of being influenced by them. On the other hand, we always spend our happiest time of our life with our friends, and things happen between we and our friends always be impressive. Besides play with them, friends can also teach us some knowledge in their special way, for example chat with you and complete some cases with you. They always have a lot of flash points in their character, because of which we like them, and we are always imperceptibly influenced by them.


May be some supporters maintain that teacher also can be a member of our friends. Forget about that absurd view point, you will never have to hand in homework to your friends and listen to their blame silence. Saying your teacher is a member of your friends is just a kind of metaphor saying of your teacher is so kind. You are after all in the relationship of teacher and student which naturally divide you two into two different groups. For this point, we can never ever be equal with our teacher. That is why teachers always give us a sense of distance. And because of the distance, we cannot be influenced more by the teachers.


To sum up, it is our friends whom influence us most in our life. How about our teacher, they do have ever influenced us, but not that lot.
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本帖最后由 水谣碧玺 于 2010-3-20 18:37 编辑

Teachers and friends are two groups of people with whom we get along for the most time during our life timelifetime. They can both teach us knowledge of diversity fields. People always deem that students are more influenced by teachers than their friends. (这里可以加点例子,说说老师的好)Someone agree with it while someone may hold diverse opinions. In my prospective, I disagree with this point(觉着句话好单薄)

First of all, admittedly, teaching us knowledge is the vocation of a teacher. But teacher always teach us in a commanding way. They told us things should be like this, how to comprehend some phenomenon or how to write articles or even how to get along with friends. But we get all these knowledge in a way of passively putting in. We treat learning the knowledge as an assignment. We always think that we can only use them in our examinations. So we will never truly glad to learn the knowledge from teachers, say nothing of being influenced by them. On the other hand, we always spend our happiest time of our life with our friends, and things happen between we (us) and our friends always be impressive. Besides play with them, friends can also teach us some knowledge in their special way, for example chat with you and complete some cases with you. They always have a lot of flash points in their character, because of which we like them, and we are always imperceptibly influenced by them.

May be some supporters maintain that teachers also can be a member of our friends. Forget(
可以这样用吗)about that absurd view point, you will never have to hand in(呈交作业给你的朋友?hand in后面不及物,若想加物,两个要分开用,就是hand sth inhomework to your friends and listen to their blame silence. Saying your teacher is a member of your friends is just a kind of metaphor saying of your teacher is so kind. You are after all in the relationship of teachers and students which naturally divide you two into two different groups. For this point, we can never ever be equal with our teacher. That is why teachers always give us a sense of distance. And because of the distance, we cannot be influenced more by the teachers.
To sum up, it is our friends whom
whoinfluence us most in our life. How about our teacher, they do have ever influenced us, but not that lot.

(你写的观点是认为朋友比老师对同学的影响大,但是感觉你一大部分都在说老师的不好,叙述朋友影响大的细节较少一些了,最好平均一下吧,或者多写一点朋友的。)意见仅供参考,加油!
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发表于 2010-3-20 19:49:34 |只看该作者
Teachers and friends are two groups of people with whom we get along for the most time during our life time. They can both teach us knowledge of diversity fields. People always deem that students are more influenced by teachers than their friends. Someone agree with it while someone may hold diverse opinions. In my prospective(perspective), I disagree with this point.
First of all, admittedly, teaching us knowledge is the vocation of a teacher. But teacher always teach us in a commanding way. They told us things should be like this, how to comprehend some phenomenon or how to write articles or even how to get along with friends.(只是说一下国外好像对排比没社么概念) But we get all these knowledge in a way of passively putting in. We treat learning the knowledge as an assignment. We always think that we can only use them in our examinations. So we will never truly glad to learn the knowledge from teachers, say nothing of being influenced by them(这太绝对了吧?). On the other hand, we always spend our happiest time of our life with our friends, and things happen between we and our friends always be impressive. Besides play with them, friends can also teach us some knowledge in their special way, for example chat with you and complete some cases with you. They always have a lot of flash points in their character, because of which we like them, and we are always imperceptibly influenced by them. 7 N" R; a; n; c" \" w/ M) F9 k
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May be some supporters maintain that teacher also can be a member of our friends. Forget about that absurd view point, you will never have to hand in homework to your friends and listen to their blame silence. Saying your teacher is a member of your friends is just a kind of metaphor saying of your teacher is so kind. You are after all in the relationship of teacher and student which naturally divide you two into two different groups. For this point, we can never ever be equal with our teacher. That is why teachers always give us a sense of distance. And because of the distance, we cannot be influenced more by the teachers.
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To sum up, it is our friends whom influence us most in our life. How about our teacher, they do have ever influenced us, but not that lot

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呵呵,谢谢~我会注意滴~大家都加油呀~~100+~ 2# 水谣碧玺

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