2010年独立作文互改小组 招新（胡汉三回来了！）

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9.29  attending university

After graduated from the high school, we are supposed to be admitted to the university. Why? Isn't the knowledge and the intellectual acquired in the high school enough for the everyday life? The answer is no. Generally, we go to university to experience a new life, to acquire new knowledge, to prepare for the individual career.
     The life in the campus is much different from what we were accustomed to in the high school. Mostly we live in the dorm with classmates coming from other places of country instead of go home under the surveillance of parents. And it provide various activities which we can participate in. Whatever interested us, we can try.
     The campus is fulfilled with intellectuals, who can give us a new perspective to the outside, improve our abilities to think independently, help us build up a complete learning system. As an undergraduate, I usually attended lectures given by well-known scholars who largely broader my vision. In that time, studying constantly was put in my mind.
     Finally, the main reason that we attend the university is laying the ground work for our future career. Studying, communicating, examining in relative course help us establish consolidate structure about the knowledge needed in our practice.

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新人报道

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什么时候能回复呢

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1219成绩平平··欲求再战，加入小组给自己一点动力！Fighting···！

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https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1212669-1-1.html
请帮我看看吧，非常感谢

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新人来报道！
不知道还有没有活动了，只可惜没来早点。。。
至少我写了， 大家帮忙看看好吗？
非常感谢
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1260644&extra=

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嘻嘻~~~不好意思哈，新人老来报到了。我今天晚上写了篇2011年大概是六月份地机经的独立写作题，希望不管是高手还是新手帮我这个菜鸟批改批改。谢谢了！！！！
   花了将近50分钟写了这篇作文, 表示我英文打字速度真的挥常的慢！！！
Answer:  Do you agree that the professional athletes such ai the football flayer and basketball player deserved high salaries to be paid?
  My writing:
     When it comes to the the fact that nowadays the professional athletes are paid high salaries, to some degree, I don’t agree with the idea that the professional athletes deserve high salaries.
     First, it is not fair for other people who contribute to our society but get the low salaries. Just take Chinese workers as an example, we Chinese workers devote their all things to the construction of our county, which lead to our county’s amazing development that have not happened ever before. And even our Chinese workers’ image have been printed on the cover of TIME so that the whole world can see the power of our Chinese workers. Accordingly, we should be proud of them. However, what they get don not equal to what they give. They are paid low salaries and lead a hard life. In contrast, those athletes get high salaries and enjoy a very free life. There is no denying that some of them gain glories for our county, but others who don not still get the same high salaries. That is what I can not accept.
     Also, it will raise an illusion that as long as I am a professional athlete, it is not necessary to work hard. Obviously, it is wrong. If all athletes have such thoughts, there is no double that our country’s athletic will fall behind other countries. So, instead of giving the high salaries, it is maybe usefull to increase athletes’ salatries by measuring their achievement in their own fields. For example, as we all know, Lina won the championship in the tennis comptiton, which becomes our Chinese pride. In this condition, I think she should be paid high salaries. That is ,she deserves it. So, if the professional athletes can not exert their effort, they don not deserve such high rewards.
       Finally, it will increase the gap between the rich and the poor. If we don not take it under the control, the rich will be richer while the poor will be poorer. What is worse, the bad condition of the poor can not arouse the sympathy of most of the rich. As a result, it eventually  has a enomous effect on our country’s development.
      According, I am really objected to the notion that the professional athletes should be paid high salaries.

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新人求批改 希望还有人
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People would spend less time on cooking in the future.

     Many people think cooking food by themselves will make them very happy. They feel that cooking food is like a kind of family game. Every morning, one of the family members will get up early to buy raw material from the market. And after coming back from the companies, they will begin to prepare the food for the dinner by whole family. But they never realize that they spend a lot of time on cooling food. Actually, after they finish the dinner, they even have no much time to spend on another things such as watching TV, preparing tomorrow's works or else. With the development of the economy, time become more important for people, especially for the young people. As students, they should use those time to finish their homework or preparing their test rather than to cook their food. As young adults, they may even be not able to go back home on time to cook food, because they often have to work overtime. So they have no time to cook food by themselves.
     However, some people may still believe that cooking food by themselves is a good choice. They say that restaurants are so expensive for people, especially for young adults. Have food in restaurant will waste a lot of money.  But I think it's just opposite. For example, I am a young adult. When I graduated from university, I worked for a factory. At that time, I always went to the small restaurant to have my dinner. And I never felt that was expensive for me. Young adults don't need to go to those big restaurants which are decorated very beautiful. We can just go to those simply restaurants or Fast food restaurants. It's very cheap. On the other hand, when young people save lot of time, they can spend those time on works. They will really be paid a lot of money like me. When I worked in that factory, I always spent my night in the factory. I even just lived in factory. And, I got a good salary for my hard work at that time. So saving the time of cooking will help us to earn much money rather than to waste money.
     To sum it up, stopping to waste time on cooking food can contribute to saving time and earning more much money for people. So in the future, I think more and more people will spend less time on cooking.