本帖最后由 海王泪 于 2010-3-28 00:27 编辑
1.关于字数
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=923452&highlight=
2.关于语言
语言的问题很虚幻,首先要清楚表达自己的意思(自我感觉良好不代表别人真能看懂),并且减少语法错误等等。
然后再来才考虑用词、句式等等。 你可以比较以下各分数段ETS关于语言的评分标准。。
比如说:ISSUE
6分• expresses ideas fluently and precisely, using effective vocabulary and sentence variety,demonstrates facility with the conventions (i.e., grammar, usage, and mechanics) of standard written English but may have minor errors
5分• expresses ideas clearly and well, using appropriate vocabulary and sentence variety, demonstrates facility with the conventions of standard written English but may have minor errors
4分•expresses ideas with reasonable clarity, generally demonstrates control of the conventions of standard written English but may have some errors
3分• has problems in language and sentence structure that result in a lack of clarity,contains occasional major errors or frequent minor errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics that can interfere with meaning
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等等等等,请自行查查AW INTRO的GRE Scoring Guide
3.关于行文结构
其他观点一带而过的同时,请注意你的文章是否会忽略下面这一点
think about it from several points of view, considering the complexity of ideas associated with those perspectives.
不认真考虑各种观点之间的异同、矛盾等复杂性,无疑是犯了ISSUE的大忌。 当然,不知道楼主所指的“纵向、深入完成一个主要观点”是通过什么样的方式完成?Development如果结合反方观点深入地写出Complexity,也应该是OK的。。。
P.S. ANYWAY, 你的问题应该能自行在AW INTRO中找到答案~去翻翻看会很有收获的!^_^
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