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4.6 (08.2.2)
Most people prefer having other people make decisions for them rather than making decisions by themselves

In China there is a old saying which is "People always get confused about the situations which they are involved in". It is true that people always can not fully comprehend the situations that they are also involved in, as they have considerations from all aspects. Thus I think that most people prefer others help them make decisions comparing with making decisions by themselves. Mostly, it helps people know themselves better and make a wise decision. Making decisions by other is, also, faster.

To begin with, I do not think that people really know themselves, which will make them make wrong decisions. By way of illustration I will refer to my career plan. I am a collage student majoring in teaching Chinese as foreign language. For my personality, I am optimistic and out-going. I thought I would be a teacher in the future when I was sophomore. Therefore I did some internship about teaching. I did not really like them but I did not hate either. However, all of my friends told me that teacher was not what I really wanted to and I was more suitable to do jobs about public relations due to my personality and ability. Hence I tried to accept their advice and did a internship about public relations. After doing it I found myself love this job so much and I really appreciated for the decision made by my friends. Thus it is true that others know better than people themselves under this way which people can make wise decision. Because of it, most people prefer having others make decisions for them.

In addition, making decisions by others is faster compared with making decisions by oneself, which is be more efficiently. For example, when I am not sure which clothes I should wear for my internship interview, I have two choices. First, I will try every clothes that I think is appropriate and hesitate for a long time which may spend me more than a hour. Second, I can ask my roommate who has experiences about it. Then she will give me advice and make decisions for me which takes two minutes. There is no doubt that the later one is faster and more efficient. Consequently, people prefer others to make decisions for them because it takes less time also more efficient.

In conclusion, making decisions by others can not only help people make wise decision but also spend them less time, which surly lead that most people prefer letting others make decisions for them rather than deciding something by themselves.

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Most people prefer having other people make decisions for them rather than making decisions by themselves


In China there is a old saying which is "People always get confused about the situations which they are involved in"（这句话是自己翻的还是本来就有的？如果自己翻的最好别用吧）. It is true that people always（in most cases别用的太绝对了） can not fully（completely） comprehend the situations that they are also involved（可以不要） in, as they have considerations from all aspects（as做啥解释？）. Thus（书面写作最好不用thus 换个词。这也是我犯的错） I think that most people prefer others to help them make decisions comparing with（instead of） making decisions by themselves. Mostly, it helps people know themselves better and make a wise decision. Making decisions by others is, also, faster." |9 u) w2 a) c+ Z

To begin with, I do not think that people really know themselves well（加个程度吧。不是每个人都不了解自己的）, which will make（lead） them （to
) make wrong decisions. By way of illustration，I will refer to my career plan.（这整句再看看，有点问题） I am a collage student majoring in teaching Chinese as foreign language（换个句式，后面那啥专业？）. For my personality（好像介词有问题）, I am optimistic and out-going（这句感觉不是很好）. I thought（think就行） I would be a teacher in the future when I was sophomore. Therefore I did some internship（practice更好吧） about teaching. I did not really like them but I did not hate（dislike，hate语气太强了） either. However, all of my friends told me that teacher was not what I really wanted to and I was more suitable to do jobs about public relations due to my personality and ability. Hence I tried to accept their advice and did a internship about public relations. After doing it I found myself love this job so much and I really appreciated for the decision made by my friends. Thus it is true that others know better than people themselves under this way which people can make wise decision. Because of it, most people prefer having others make decisions for them.


In addition, making decisions by others is faster compared with making decisions by oneself, which is be more efficiently. For example, when I am not sure which clothes I should wear for my internship interview, I have two choices. First, I will try every clothes that I think is appropriate and hesitate for a long time which may spend me more than a hour. Second, I can ask my roommate who has experiences about it. Then she will give me advice and make decisions for me which takes two minutes. There is no doubt that the later one is faster and more efficient. Consequently, people prefer others to make decisions for them because it takes less time also more efficient.（理由挺好~）

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In conclusion, making decisions by others can not only help people make wise decision but also spend them less time(用save time吧）, which surly（还是别用太绝对的词） lead that most people prefer letting others make decisions for them rather than deciding something by themselves.


（改到后面我才发现我好像改错了。。囧~先这样吧~~~我 应该改5号的。。实在没时间了。。sorry。。明天又是一天课）

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4.6(08.2.2)
Most people prefer having other people makedecisions for them rather than making decisions by themselves

In China there is a(n) old saying which is (goes)"People always get confusedabout the situations which they are involved in". It is true that peoplealways can not fully comprehend the situations that they are also（这边为什么要加also?） involved in, as they haveconsiderations from all aspects. Thus I think that most people prefer othershelp them make decisions comparing with making decisions by themselves. Mostly,it helps people know themselves better and make a wise decision. Makingdecisions by other is, also, faster(quicker. Faster 一般用来形容动作，如跑步之类的).

To begin with, I do not think that people reallyknow themselves, which will make them make wrong decisions(这一句好像有问题，which指代的是people really know themselves 改一下：I consider that people are alwaysconfused by themselves, which is likely to mislead them into making a wrong decision). By way of illustration Iwill refer to my career plan. I am a college student majoring in teachingChinese as foreign language. For my personality, I am optimistic and out-going.I thought I would be a teacher in the future when I was sophomore. Therefore Idid some internship about teaching. I did not really like them but I did nothate either(neitherdo I like them nor hate them). However, all of my friends told me that teacher was not what Ireally wanted to and I was more suitable to do jobs about public relations dueto my personality and ability. Hence I tried to accept their advice and did ainternship about public relations. After doing it I found myself love(ing) this job so much and Ireally appreciated for the decision made by my friends. Thus it is true thatothers know better than people themselves under this way which people can makewise decision. Because of it, most people prefer having others make decisionsfor them.

In addition, making decisions by others is faster(quicker) compared with makingdecisions by oneself, which is be more efficiently. For example, when I am notsure which clothes I should wear for my internship interview, I have twochoices. First, I will try every clothes that I think is appropriate andhesitate for a long time which may spend me more than a hour. Second(on the other hand), I can ask my roommate whohas experiences about it. Then she will give me advice and make decisions forme which takes two minutes. There is no doubt that the later(latter) one is faster(quicker) and more efficient.Consequently, people prefer others to make decisions for them because it takesless time also more efficient.

In conclusion, making decisions by others can notonly help people make wise decision but also spend them less time(cost us less time), which surly(surely) lead that most people preferletting others make decisions for them rather than deciding something bythemselves.

想问一下，这个是在30分钟之内写完的吗？我刚开始练作文，下个月就考了……我写一篇文章一般在45分钟左右，但字数也是比较多的，所以准备过几天将时间控制在30分钟之内~全篇觉得主要问题是句式需要精炼，有些地方可能会让别人比较难理解，当然也可能是我水平不够啦~有不对的地方还请多多指教~
ps:始终不知道怎样传附件……

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4.82
Human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.

Nowadays, more and more animals are facing the situation that they maybe extinct in the near future. Due to it, many people think that human beings should give up some lands of farming, housing and manufacturing for those endangered animals to live in. However, I think it is not necessary for people to do that, as it can not help endangered animals fundamentally. They can use other ways to help those endangered animals except saving lands for them. Also, human's demand for land is extremely serious.

To begin with, saving lands for endangered animals can not help them survive. According to the theory of Darwin, the nature will choose the animals which adapt to it during the evolution. The endangered animals are not adapting the environment currently so that they facing the situation of dying out. Even if human save lands for them, we can not help them survive fundamentally. By way of illustration I will refer the example of southern China tigers in my country. They are recognized as endangered animals and rare animals by government several decades ago. Consequently, the government saves a large forest for them to live in. While after so many years, they still die out and no one ever find them again. This experience tells us, saving land for those endangered animals are not so important.

In addition, for the repaid growth of population of human beings, land become a more and more important problem. Especially in some developing countries, the situation is serious. For example, in Shanghai which I live in, many people can not even afford for a small apartment. In most families, all their salaries are not enough to buy one square meters in the downtown area due to the high price of housing. Therefore, I think it is important for people to develop more lands for housing. What's more, in order to improve people's living conditions, the demands of farmland and factory are also quiet high. As a result, human needs for the land are more important than saving lands for animals.

I am not denying that the endangered animals are not important. Human can use other methods to protect them, such as building zoo for them and using scientific technology to help them raise offspring. These ways are more useful than just saving lands.

In conclusion, comparing with saving lands for endangered animals, human needs or farmland, housing, and industry are more important. Otherwise, many human would have to live a hard life also those animals can not survive in the end. Human can come up with other methods to help the endangered animals fundamentally.

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19# Frankie0616

我一般都是35分钟左右 每次给自己卡时间 可是总是超过 这个还蛮惆怅的 因为真正考试的时候 只能将没写完的作文传上去了喔~我后天考 更紧张啊....呵呵 关于附件的话 好像是点高级回复 发帖数量到一定程度就可以添加附件了~

Frankie0616UID: 2763738

4.82
Human needs for farmland, housing, andindustry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.

Nowadays, more and more(也可用an increasing number of)animals are facing the situation that they maybe(may) extinctin the near future. Due to it(this case/reason),many people think that human beings should give up some lands of farming,housing and manufacturing for those endangered animals to live in. However, Ithink it is not necessary for people to do that, as it can not help endangeredanimals fundamentally. They can use other ways to help those endangered animalsexcept saving lands for them. Also(on the contrary),human's demand for land is extremely serious.

To begin with, saving lands for endangeredanimals can not help them survive. According to the theory of Darwin(evolution theory), the nature will choose the animalswhich adapt to it during the evolution. The endangered animals are not adaptingthe environment currently so that they facing the situation of dying out. Evenif human save lands for them, we can not help them survive fundamentally. Byway of illustration I will refer the example of southern China tigers in mycountry. They are recognized as endangered animals and rare animals bygovernment several decades ago. Consequently, the government saves a largeforest for them to live in. While after so many years, they still die out andno one ever find them again. This experience tells us, saving land for thoseendangered animals are not so important.（这个例子举得真好啊~）

In addition, for the repaid growth ofpopulation of human beings, land become(s) amore and more important problem. Especially in some developing countries, thesituation is serious. For example, in Shanghai which I live in, many people cannot even afford for a small apartment. In most families, all their salaries arenot enough to buy one square meters in the downtown area due to the high priceof housing. Therefore, I think it is important for people to develop more landsfor housing. What's more, in order to improve people's living conditions, thedemands of farmland and factory are also quiet(quite)high. As a result, human needs for the land are more important than savinglands for animals.

I am not denying that the endangeredanimals are not important. Human can use other methods to protect them, such asbuilding zoo for them and using scientific technology to help them raiseoffspring. These ways are more useful than just saving lands.

In conclusion, comparing with saving landsfor endangered animals, human needs or farmland, housing, and industry are moreimportant. Otherwise, many human would have to live a hard life also thoseanimals can not survive in the end. Human can come up with other methods tohelp the endangered animals fundamentally.

第二次改你的作文了，感觉你的作文功底很深啊~非常佩服你，以这种水平去考试一定能有高分的啦~明天考试吗？祝你明天考试顺利啊！加油~