4.10作业

bruce520UID: 2634940

Although people in increasing number are beginning to double that can grades always play a correct role in cultivating students, it is an indisputable that grades contribute directly to encourage students to learn. However, in my opinion, despite the advantage of grades, it is not without its problem, which should pay more attention when our universities or middle schools still have to use this traditional way to spur students to learn.

As an undeniable fact that grades really contribute greatly to the students' learning, the importance which grades hold can never be ignored. In order to make a competition environment for the students, the education system adopts grades as a method to impulse learning process. With the press of grades, most students will study more hard, which is very significant for students more positive to learn knowledge.

The problem of encouraging the students to learn hard by grades has provoked more and more controversy. As the guide of the goal of achieving a high mark in the exams, students always put themselves into the environment within courses and exams, they even do not care about the outside world. Therefore, the skills of communication are been ignored, which is do very harmful to the children's both mental and physical development. This phenomena is very popular in China of the last decades. However, as the revolution of the education, the bad effects which brought by the single encourage method have been reduce to the minimum.

In the final analysis, although with its problems, grades or marks can not be displaced because there are not other more effective ways can be adopted to solve the current issue. However, instead to think out a new method to replace the old method, more other accessorial measures may suggest assisting the traditional single means.

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Although people in increasing number are beginning to double that can grades always play a correct role in cultivating students, it is an indisputable that grades contribute directly to encourage students to learn. However, in my opinion, despite the advantage of grades, it is not without its problem, which should pay more attention when our universities or middle schools still have to use this traditional way to spur students to learn.2 A9 p% \: Y( W: N# e" h+ n* A9 X
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As an undeniable fact that grades really contribute greatly to the students' learning, the importance which grades hold can never be ignored. In order to make a competition environment for the students, the education system adopts grades as a method to impulse learning process. With the press of grades, most students will study more hard(hard就一个元音，不管是从语法还是习惯角度来讲只能用 harder), which is very significant for students more positive to learn knowledge.(more positively 我觉得放在后面会更地道一点）' x& z7 f4 ]4 u$ W+ F' _' x4 W

. `3 G9 o" y$ m: I2 ZThe problem of encouraging the students to learn hard by grades has provoked more and more controversy. As the guide of the goal of achieving a high mark in the exams, students always put themselves into the environment within courses and exams, they even do not care about the outside world. Therefore, the skills of communication are been ignored, which is do very harmful to the children's both mental and physical development. This phenomena is very popular in China of the last decades. However, as the revolution of the education, the bad effects which brought by the single encourage method have been reduce to the minimum.+ m. `3 ~# O" J3 ^, t

2 _/ [7 j  T+ }: H. W2 IIn the final analysis, although with its problems, grades or marks can not be displaced because there are not other more effective ways can be adopted to solve the current issue. However, instead to think out a new method to replace the old method, more other accessorial measures may suggest assisting the traditional single means.

楼主行文不错，缺点么，论述过多举例过少，老外就喜欢看例子，越简单的例子越好....另外我觉得第三段不是很切题，题目问的是评分制度能不能促进学习，你写的是评分制度让学生忽视全面发展....

bruce520UID: 2634940

4.11的作业
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Renewable sources of energy (sun,

wind, water) will soon replace fossil fuels (gas, oil and coal).

It is undeniable that energy depletion is one of the biggest problems that our human encountered. However, with the development of the science and technology renewable sources of energy appear in our life. So many people share the belief that the renewable sources can displace the old one soon. As far as to me, I firmly consist that the renewable sources of energy will take place the traditional ones because of their lower or even no pollution and larger storage one day, but not soon.
Most important of all, the outstanding advantage of low even no pollution destines that the renewable sources can displace the old fuels one day. As we know, at the time the traditional sources bring us the bright industry civilization, they also produce the negative problem of pollution. Most types of pollution such as the air pollution, water pollution are directly contributed by the burning of coal and oil. However, the new sources can avoid of those issues. Another famous example of the old sources’ problem may be the depletion of the ozone. Nowadays, few things are as likely spark public interest as that involving the ozone depletion. Due to some fuels with florin are been burn, make all the living being of the earth expose to the harmful ray.
Nevertheless, if we use the new sources some like the sun, wind or water, this problem will not be existed. For the second, the large storage of the new sources makes a necessary condition that they can play the main role of the fuel consumption for the future society. The traditional sources of energy get a problem of shortage, which become more and more serious, making most countries both the developed and developing are beginning to search some new ones to solve the problem. According to an official statistic data, all the storage of coal of the world can only last for thirty years. Envision the terrible things that the factory run without coal, house burn without coal to warm, new and sources’ great role in the future cannot be deniable.
Nonetheless, as the limited technology advancement, the process of the clear sources taking place the traditional ones completely is a long time walk. Although the demand of new clear sources increases so rapidly, the modern technology cannot make all the usage of new sources to meet the increased requirement. For example,
the most way to use water to produce energy are the generating electricity and decomposing water, however, another significant way which have been considered for long periods by the scientist is not been realized, using the energy of the wave.
In the final analysis, the future of the renewable sources is very promising for both their two major advantages low even no pollution and great storage. However, due to some limit of technology, it is need time for the new sources to replace the old one. Maybe our society should invest more attention to.

bruce520UID: 2634940

As people's standards of living are being improved steadily, traveling becomes more and more popular. Spark by the potential market of tourism, the number of companies which provide the tour guide for the group tour increase rapidly. Consider the service supplied of the tourism corporations, many people choose to travel in a group by a guide for convenience. Nonetheless, I prefer to have a do-it-yourself (DIY) tour.

Most important of all, with more freedom, the DIY tour allows us to design our travel plan more distinct. Firstly, making a DIY tour usually cost less than following a group with the guide. As we know, travel with a group according to the fixed route, not only we should pay the tourism company, but also should join some arranged activities which are usually charged. Secondly, DIY tour may save us more time of the traveling. If we go with the group, we should spend some time to check and wait all other the group members when we begin to move a new sight.

Moreover, people can enjoy more in a DIY tour than a group. For one thing, DIY tour can enhance peoples' abilities to adapt the natural environment. Nowadays, people who spend money and time to have tour outside are amid to enjoy the nature. Hence, the DIY style without some commercial factors can make our best to have an experience of the beauty of nature.

However, there are also some problems for the DIY tour, such as the people have to spend much more time to search enough information about the route. If we pay more attention, those problems can be avoided.

Although with some problems, it is not without its advantages. Therefore, if get a chance to travel, I prefer the DIY tour most for both I can design the routes myself and the precious alone travel experience.

bruce520UID: 2634940

这个问题我觉得要是考试遇到就惨了，实在不好说
建议以后多练这种题 7# jbc88

bruce520UID: 2634940

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.

Free issues are as likely to remain highly contentious as that involving land. We should save land for our human beings or for endangered animals? Some environmentalists hold that human are too greedy to possess too much sources such as the land, and more land should be saved for the animals. As far as I see, we should save the land for ourselves for the first consideration, the reasons are as following.

Most important of all, the most difference between human and other animals lies in the powerful ability and intelligence to conquer and restore the nature, even improve the living condition for other animals. After human appear in the earth, the history of this planet have been modified many times. Especially as the revolution of the industry, the productivity of the modern society has rised rapidly, which lead the human civilization and progress. Therefore, we should save more sources such as land to meet human. Besides, only the requirement of us been satisfied, there will more energy to care about our neighbors.

Moreover, as the increasing of the population, the demand of land for the consumption of human’s activities such as housing, shopping, and production is far weight the animals', which suggest that we should save more land to solve the current problems of ourselves. For example, as the adverse effects of consumerism have become a focus of attention, more and more people dream to hold a better living condition, which creates a huge demand of the land. If we donnot pay more attention on this problem, many others negative effects may affect the harmony of our society. Hence, we should consider those current problems firstly.

Final, saving more land for human activities does not means to ignore the other living beings' requirements. The other animals are the necessary members of the earth village, which contribute greatly to the balance of the ecosystem. So, with a well solved of problems of ourselves, we should focus more on the animals.

To sum up, after taking into account the tradeoff of land requirement between human and animals, we should treat ourselves firstly, then the others.

mj23-26UID: 2551804

Free issues are as likely to remain highly contentious as that involving land. （第一句话读起来特别别扭，）We should save land for our human beings or for endangered animals? Some environmentalists hold that human are too greedy to possess too much sources such as the land, and more land should be saved for the animals. As far as I see, we should save the land for ourselves for the first consideration, the reasons are as following.

Most important of all,（没见过这样的用法，first of all） the most difference between human and other animals lies in the powerful ability and intelligence to conquer and restore the nature, even improve the living condition for other animals. After human appear in the earth, the history of this planet have been modified many times. Especially as the revolution of the industry, the productivity of the modern society has rised rapidly, which lead the human civilization and progress. Therefore, we should save more sources such as land to meet（很少见的用法 “满足” 很不错） human. Besides, only the requirement of us been satisfied, there will be more energy to care about our neighbors.

Moreover, as the increasing of the population, the demand of land for the consumption of human’s activities such as housing, shopping, and production is far weight the animals', which suggest that we should save more land to solve the current problems of ourselves. For example, as the adverse effects of consumerism have become a focus of attention, more and more people dream to hold a better living condition, which creates a huge demand of the land.（举例很好~） If we donnot pay more attention on this problem, many others negative effects may affect the harmony of our society. Hence, we should consider those current problems firstly.

Finally, saving more land for human activities does not means to ignore the other living beings' requirements. The other animals are the necessary members of the earth village, which contribute greatly to the balance of the ecosystem. So, with a well solved of problems of ourselves, we should focus more on the animals.

To sum up, after taking into account the tradeoff of land requirement between human and animals, we should treat ourselves firstly, then the others.


我的水平不是很高 如果有改错的地方 见谅啊~~~

bruce520UID: 2634940

4.14
Few issues are as likely to draw a widespread attention as likely involving the problem of students’ study. As the same as the view above, some people hold that a long learning year some like eleven months will benefit the students study. As far as I see, it is fraud to take a such long period of one year for the students’ study for the following serval reasons.

Most important of all, as the society members, both the students and teachers need a time more than one moth each year to deal with other necessary things. Firstly, the students, especially the non-audits, call for enough time not only to learn some konwledge from school but also to culture themselves to be a man who get heath of both physcial and mental. For example, kids need to play with their friends when they young because they should learn to relate with others, which is very important for the cultivation of a child. And for the
more old students, they also need some private time to cope with his or her own interpersonship, some like
to communate with their future boss even their married parter. For the second, the teachers also need some free time to make a conclusion about their educational work, and only in this way, can the better, more efficent education be provided.

Moreover, a resonable and a long enough period of rest time is extremely important for both the teaching and studying. On one hand, studying is a circle process, which demand both students to listen carefully in the class to receive the information and to digest it during the free time. On the other hand, the teachers can also not to spend pratically all their time in the class, maybe they need to get a training to learn some latest knowledge for the following work. Therefore, the eleven months plan is not sutiable for the school.

Finally, it is not been justied that paying more time can obtain a better education result. As we know, a beeter outcome usually determined by two factors, the energy you focused on and the efficiency of you work. There is a tradeoff between two of them, so it is fraud to deem that
the elenve months plan can prduce a better, more efficent education.

In the final analysis, we should consider more before we decide to adopt the the elenve months plan for the school students because it is unwarranted to achieve a better, more efficent education.

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