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发表于 2010-4-16 23:45:20 |显示全部楼层
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这是今天4.16作文

09.12.4北美
题目Do you think people should buy things made in their own country, even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else

From my perspective, the topic is partially correct.
Buying things made in people's own country does make contribution to the development of country economy. However, i believe people buying products that are same or similar which are made somewhere esle is also reasonable. There is really no point in

purchasing the own-country-made products in a higher price.

For me, i am just a student, so i don't have any salary and i depend on the tuition fees both from my school and my family. Apparently, if i want to buy a new type calculator i will probably search for the price of my ideal calculator in e-bay or Amazon and note down the price. Then i may go to several shops so as to compare the price. If the price in the local shop is equal to or even less than the one on net, certainly i will choose the local calculator. But when the product on net is much economical, no matter where it was produced, definitely i will pay for the one on net.
I am always thinking that though the country economy must be supported by every of us ,
the nation finance is the fundamental base of our individual economy and the individuals should know how to manage their saving properly first. Only the residents all become thrifty, and there will be less waste in money ,so that
people may use the money that spared from one product to buy other useful product. Like me , to utilize fully my pocket money, i use the money saved in buying the same but cheap calculator to buy a book on chemistry.
It is wise to make full use of the money for earning money is not a piece of cake.


Contrary to someone's viewpoint that buying all things in our country regardless of their price is patriotic, i insist a patriot is not like this.
To be honest, without comparing the price between same thing, just keeping identifying the place where it was manufactured is really ridiculous and unwise. A real patriot should be rational to his country and be responsible to the erroneous points in his country.


To sum up , i  am in favour of the idea that people should buy things made in their own country, but i disapprove the point that people ought to buy products when the price is higher than same things made somewhere else.

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发表于 2010-4-17 23:27:26 |显示全部楼层
4.17 Do you agree or disagree the following statement? Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Nowadays, with the rapid development in all aspects in contemporary society and also the prematurity of young people, a debate over whether it is imperative for young people to be in capable of plan and organize emerges. As a teenager, personally i am in favor of plan and organization is crucial for young people.

To begin with, the age of successful notables tends to decline in terms of a recent survey.  For instance, the founder and the CEO of the world-famous social net Facebook is a 23-year-old young guy called Mark Zuckerberg who has been graduated from Harvard as well as has assets of at least ten billions. Mark established Facebook since he was in university. It is evident that Mark's ability of planning and organizing engender him to success. And also we can see Mark has owned these indispensable qualities when he was just about 20. I f you are not satisfied with the example, let's take a look on another prestigious person----Bill Gates. It is generally known that Bill Gates quit Harvard at his twenties, but few people consider what cause him to determine to abandon his such a superb university. However, from my perspective, Gates was judicious and he knew what he desire to pursue in his life. He proposed a bold plan and organized, accomplished perfectly though he has met a myriad of problems.

Furthermore, how long is a human's life?  Just about eighty years. I paraphrase that a human's heyday's inception is when he is young , the spring is pivotal of a year likewise. If a person does not plan for himself and organize his decision prudently , will he be able to succeed? Or even will he content himself ? Definitely not! No matter how the ambiance around or welfare a young man have , he must have a clear mind about his future and not keep wandering at a superficial level.

To sum up, young people necessitate for the ability to plan and organize, for this kind of faculty plays an critical role in future , even in everyday life.

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发表于 2010-4-20 22:26:46 |显示全部楼层
17号的作文不好意思,我改的时候看的分组就我和Nowords俩人,就和她互改了。。。这几天没写作文也没去帖子看,刚才看到分组后来改了加了你进来。。。所以,你的作文我今晚帮你改~不好意思哈
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发表于 2010-4-20 22:36:48 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-4-20 23:55:02 |显示全部楼层
4.17 修改 By 暧暧

PS:你修改给我的,发错了,不是我的作文,而且是篇16号的。

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