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题目Some people think children should obey rules and do what the teachers want them to do.Others think controlled children are not well-prepared for children's adult life in future.

Perhaps no issue has sparked such endless debate as whether children should be controlled does.People in increasing number hold the idea that teachers should give children rules to obey,while some individuals think it radiculous and will do great harm to children's adult life in future.From my perspective,I can never persuade myself to support the latter one.I think it is necessary to make children obey rules.

To start with, no one can deny the self-evident fact that only when children obey rules can they cultivate good habits which are really important for them.For example,my cousion Anne,who is the only child in her family,used to do anything she liked,especially she just ate the food she liked and never touched those she disliked.As a result,she often got ill.Then her parents had to make rules for her to eat in a healthy way.Due to the rules,she graually got the good habit of eating and became much stronger than before.

What's more,we should never neglect that obeying rules can decrease the crime rate of teengers.I just saw a nationwide investigation on the Internet,which showed there was an significantly upward trend in teengers' crime.The amount of teengers breaking laws has nearly tripled,compared to the year 2000.According to the investigation,those yong people were nearly all growing without any rules . they were not sure what they should do or not so that they were most likely to break laws.

On the other hand,let's take a glance at the drawbacks of controlling children.For one thing,it is controlling that sometimes may destroy children's sense of creativity.For another,children will feel unhappy or stressed .
To sum up,according to the aforementioned factors,we can safely come to the conclusion that children should obey certain rules as well as they can grow freely and happily.

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