kingarthur_lee IBT 作文互改

ggj_lllUID: 2796021

Visiting museum is the best way to learn about a country.
Whether visiting museum is the best way to learn about a country is the subject of much debate as international communication is being strengthened in contemporary life. While a definite answer has not been found, just like an old saying goes, “there is one thousand Hamlets in one thousand people’s eye”. [恰当地引用了格言，既增强了说服力，又使文章很活泼]Some people disagree the statement and believe that watching TV or going to the counrty [country]for real touch is the best way to know about a country, while others contend that museum is the best place because people just need to go to one place nearby and can obtain all information of that country. Personally, I am of the opinion that museum, undoubtedly, is the best place to learn about a country.
The head and chef [chief] aspect to support my opinion is that the most profound way to know about a country is to know its history and culture, and museum conforms [这个词用得很好]to both of the standards. For example, when I went to Amercian [American] museum in Shanghai, after visiting around I could have a whole understanding of American history, from May Flower Ship to Independent War, from Great Depression and World War II, from Independent Declaration to the speech of Martin.L.king. Then I was deeply impressed by all these historical events and how true freedom came from. I can do all these barely by going to the museum.[这个例子很有说服力，平行结构也很有气势。]
By visiting the museum, we do not need to travel around the country, thus a lot of money will be saved. It is true that if we do not visit the museum, it costs us amouts [amounts]of money to go to different places to acquire more about the country. For example, if you want to know about the art of procelain [porcelain]of China, you do not [改成needn’t ]waste money to take a plane to go to Jing dezhen, instead, [这个连接词用得好]visiting the Chinese museum will give you whatever you want to know.
Although other ways, have some advantages at the same time, like travelling [traveling] around or watching TV, people can get more real feeling. However, after advantages and disadvantages are carefully compared between them, I can safely draw the conclusion that visiting the museum is the best way to learn about a country.

ppjoyceUID: 2623631

亲爱的GTER们，我今年8月的IBT考试，刚看帖的时候在想要不要建个群...
随手建了个群，想更多的和大家交流下：） 各种各种
有兴趣哒进
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PS： 我也想参加这个作文互改小组
题目是自己选么？一周的篇数是自己决定不?

Greed_linUID: 2790722

Why do you think people attend college or Univ?
When we think about the reasons for attend college or university we can say university education can improve the well-rounded ability of a person. There are several reasons for that, such as we will acquire a lot of knowledge and it can expand our view. And many students attend university for the sake of the truth that they intend.
I believe university is a gateway to a perfect life. People in university can choose their favorite course (e.g. engineering medicine business and etc).It can enable us to get a better job and have a good income. So university is a career preparation.
In our university life we will meet many difficulties that we never expect. Sometimes professor maybe gives us a big assignment that I can not finish by myself. But luckily I am not alone I have many friendly mates, and we can finish it together. Team work substantially boosts efficiency even though it may make jobs even more stressful. We can carry out this assignment easily. It is also a golden opportunity to strengthen friends bonds during this period. Better yet, we can make different people with friends. As you know future is full of X-factors. You do not know a person will be in next day. Perhaps your mate will become a superstar in NFL MBL or NBA. So imagine it what a cool thing that a famous player is your best friend! That it has been proven that university can give us a chance to improve our team spirit. Therefore not only will people get the knowledge what they want, but they will also improve their ability both in physics and in mind.
For these reasons, we can safely conclude that attend university is too important a factor to ignore. However, university is, fundamentally a studying place, it can also lead a better life and it can help us in society and lives.

Greed_linUID: 2790722

Parents are the best teacher?
What should be the role of parents in education? I believe tomorrow’s society will be much more learning-oriented and education will increasingly be regarded as a lifelong process of adjustment, self-understanding and growth. I do not think only people who give lessons in school can called teacher. There are my reasons as follows:
To begin with, as I see it, a successful teacher’ functions not only just give students academic lessons but also they should tell the golden rules in life to students. But in reality, there has a tendency that many teachers just intend their student to be a good student only in academic, especially in China. For example, a student in a best Chinese university called Ma Jia jue killed four people and to my surprising a joke lead to this tragedy. Therefore parents, a necessary part of a child, are responsible for make up for this education weakness. Specifically parents can provide many chances to give children lessons that lead to a right way in their lives. Aside from the motto “the important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its own reason for existing.” As we all know a growing child will have a large number of questions to ask. Who can deal with those problems? Teachers are in school? To my way of thinking, it is a wrong answer. Because sometimes teacher can not answer those life question accurately, but parents can handle it easily. Although we think parents are the best teachers, every coin has two sides. It is a common knowledge that children will think their parents as role model. If parents have bad personal issue such as gambling, smoking or drinking, children will also follow those bad actions. So parents should set up a good role model in child’s heart.
There is nothing wrong with good parents are your best teachers. For the best possible learning, though, good parents are the biggest help you can have.

Greed_linUID: 2790722

人工置顶,大牛们帮帮菜鸟改改作文啊!谢谢!