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TOPIC:Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not


Nowadays,when it comes to talk about which is better,keep rooms neat or just place things casually,different people may have different choices.Those who choose the former view think that a neat room can improve their efficiency of work.Others who support the latter one argue that they can save some time for making room organized.Personally,I side with the former viewpoint. I will then reason it and give concrete evidence to support my point of view.
The first plain truth I am presenting here is that an organization room can surely save you considerable time for looking for things.Everyone may have played or heard about a sort of game about finding the head of some string coiling together.people may spend a lot of time to divide all the string apart.Commonly,after finishing this difficult task,they must feel totally upset.In some aspect,you can easily found that it is also not easy for people to find the object they want among sea of thousands of things.So,a lot of time must be exhausted during looking for objects.But ,you can definitely find all you want easily in an organized room.So you may have more time to study and prepare for success.Take LUXUN as an example.If you ever read some stories about him,you could easity find that his desk was neating from time to time.He always said that he succeeded because he save all tiny period of time to work.His key to success is because he save plenty of time to study,and a neat room can surely help you for this.
Futhermore,behind my preference lies an equally important fact that a neat room can also bring you a good mood which in some way raise your efficiency of study.In this high--rhythmical world,nothing is more helpful than high efficiency for success,that is to say,neat room is important for us in some aspect.Statistical reports from Duke University have already proved that the efficiency of people working in neat rooms is 40 percents higher than those working in disorder rooms.After realizing this several years ago,I started to keep my room clean and neat.Suprisingly,I can obviously find the changes happened to me.I can always have high efficiency now,and I am getting better and better in learning and testing.
From what we have discussed before,we can easily draw a conclusion that students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.