6.17 Independent Writing-June

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Do you think success is important, or it is more important to remainhappy and optimistic when you fail?


To be success or to be optimistic when youfail, which one counts more? As for me, a person's attitude itself is far moreimportant than the outcome.

Maintaining happy and optimistic evenfailure occurs will bring people to succeed in the end. As a prevalent sayinggoes, attitude determines everything. I cannot agree with it anymore. It istrue that a correct attitude will bring people to success in their life in theend. Because people who keep optimistic will never lose their enthusiasm andgive up, no matter what kinds of obstacles occur. With such passion,persistence and believes to support them, optimistic people will achieve successin the end.

Actually, a good attitude towards life is suchan essential treasure that people who own it have already won the game. What isthe meaning of life? Many philosophers have pondered on the eternal questionfor thousands of years. Does it lie in the properties we gained, or the fame,or the power? In my opinion, one essential treasure in our life is happinessand passion for living. Even for the King who have already got countlessproperties, land, power and immortal fame, if he is upset at life, distressedall the day and night, how can we say he lives a meaningful life? Thence, anoptimistic attitude towards life already makes a person win the game of life.

Furthermore, success as an outcome happensin people's life for too many times, as well as failure.
Also, as a result from many inner and outsidefactors, it also contains too many uncertainties. Thus, to ensure a meaningfullife, what a 'successful ' person has for sure is their attitudes towardsthemselves as well as the rest of the world.
Only with a positive attitude can a personmake efforts in seeking a better environment and never get fed up or loseconfidence in doing so. Without the propeller of the positive believe, a personwould be easily knocked down by the uncertainties of life.

In a word, compared with the success as anoutcome, it is more essential for people to keep a positive attitude even whenthey fail.


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不好意思 看球赛去了 来迟了 不要介意

Tobe success(successful)or to be optimistic when you fail, which one counts more? As for me, a person'sattitude itself is far more important than the outcome. (简洁明了
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Maintaininghappy and optimistic even failure occurs will bring people to succeed(success) in theend. As a prevalent saying goes, attitude determines everything. I cannot agreewith it anymore. It is true that a correct attitude will bring people tosuccess in their life in the end. Because people who keep optimistic will neverlose their enthusiasm and give up, no matter what kinds of obstacles occur.With such passion, persistence and believes to support them, optimistic peoplewill achieve successin(successfully)the end.

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Furthermore,success as an outcome happens in people's life for too many times, as well asfailure.


' g2 _' s8 I0D, \4 r, sAlso,as a result from many inner and outside factors, it(这个it是指什么) also contains too manyuncertainties. Thus, to ensure a meaningful life, what a 'successful ' personhas for sure is their attitudes towards themselves as well as the rest of theworld.

- V, P2 u. K) \/ L( |Only with a positive attitude can aperson make efforts in seeking a better environment and never get fed up orlose confidence in doing so. Without the propeller of the positive believe(believes),a person would be easily knocked down by the uncertainties of life.

Ina word, compared with the success as an outcome, it is more essential forpeople to keep a positive attitude even when they fail.

（作文语句不大顺畅，论证过程说理比较多，详细的例子比较少（不好意思啦，我自己也是这样子的），可能是作文比较难写，还有就是用词不是很丰富，楼主的问题我自己也是这样子的，一起加油吧！）有说的不好 请谅解 :)