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Issue 11:"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."



I strongly agree with the assertion which the speaker claims. It is necessary to build a global university to solve the world’s most persistent social problems. All nations should help support to do it. Global problem is the popular issue for every country.
I turn my first opinion to support my view is the world is more and more global in culture. As the development of television media and internet, the information comes quickly. Wherever you are, you just turn on the TV or surf on the internet. You will get the current information about everywhere and every field in the world. Human enjoy the same music and movie at the same time. Then the culture become unify. For better communicating with each different culture, we should build a global university to learn different culture and share different art. It will contribute for humans civilization. And human have better spiritual lives.

A second opinion is that we face the global environment problems. We live in the same place Earth. No matter the developed country or a development country, we never deny that pollution influence on every corner of the earth. Everyone can not avoid the environment problems. So this is a strong reason for a global university. The people from all over the world get together to solve the problem relate to every one of us. Protecting environment is not only one country’s or one person’s matter. Every one has duty to do the effort for it. Because it is relate to our lives closely. For instance, the gas released from the car engines is very poisonous. It pollutes our air and harms our health.
In industry country, burning amount of coal mine cause the lack of our resource and the carbon dioxide lead to global warming. These all are thorny problems.
We need a global university and lots of smart peoples from all over the world to study together to solve the global problems.

Finally we have realize the advantage of the global learning. For example, the World Health Organization(WHO) is built for good to all of the people. In addition, there are many international organization was built. Such as the international Monetary Fund(IMF), world trade organization(WTO) and so on. The establishing of the global organization indicates the world is global. Our lives connect with each other. The world will be “small” just like a village. As the progress of human civilization, the global university is essential.

In sum, for our lives’ requirement all nations should help support the development of the global university designed to engage students in process of solving the world’s most persistent social problem.