issue 130

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130. "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
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主题分类：现实和理想   支持现实



提纲：
儿童的社会化→社会命运：
Generally，I agree with the assertion that the way of socialization of children more or less determine the destiny of the society.
Argument1 The way of children be socialized is part of the culture of a society which actually establish the characters of a society.
Argument2 the Education is complicated task which is not easily to be designed by people in one time.
Argument3 Occasionally, especially for some individuals, the no fault education cannot certainly bring a character favored by the society.
Argument4 Many factors, besides education, actually influence the development of a nation.


Generally, the elementary education influences the development of a nation more or less. Even if we claim this point with no doubt, it is uneasy for a country to design a perfect education institution to make everyone be suitable for their country. As for individual, the problem becomes even more complicated. And we also have to notice education is not the only factor which absolutely determines the society’s future. Therefore, I agree with the statement on most its points.
The way how children are socialized is a vital factor for the development of a society. It actually teaches them how to be with others and be used to their society. After all, people cannot live without their society. To learn how to cope with others, how to communicate with others or how to work together is crucial for them to constitute their cooperation which in fact establish the country.

Even if we admit the importance of the education mentioned, it is difficult to envisage a perfect education system to largely promote their country’s future. Because education is more of an inherited tradition than a well-calculated work, people cannot easily get rid of their heritage. Nor can they predict where their country goes so as to ensure what is the most needed characteristics in the future.
As for every single person, growing up is too complicated to analyze. Numerous causes affect the whole process of an individual. Education is only one of them. Having a good family background and being well education, some people will still become an anti-society character, say, Theodore Kaczynski, the post bomber. And we are also reminded of those people, especially for those talents, with different disposition from born, whose behavior cannot be adjusted with ease.
And there are also numerous factors, besides social problems, are related to the destiny of a society, say, technology, or international environment. In other words, with the well organized citizens, an ideal situation will not be necessarily waiting for the country. More often than not, in the history, almost every civilization have been interrupted or interfered by out force, natural disasters, epidemics or all the other catastrophes, not matter how profound it is in humanism, which can guide bulks of people obey the rule. So we have no reason  to regard the edcuation on children as the only force.
In all, albeit the statement has highlighted the positive relation between the education of socialized and development, but it overemphasized its power. Because people themselves are more than a set of all kinds of contradictories, which cannot be easily understood. Education has its limitation to influence people. Also society situation is somehow unestimatable. In spite of helping youth be used to society is not a tough task, to optimize the education from social reasons is more than convoluted.

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Generally，I agree with the assertion that the way of socialization of children more or less determine ［determines］the destiny of the society.

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