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Issue 144
“It is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value.”

From the above statement, partly speaking, it is no doubt that artist holds the capability to present many spectacular scenery and give us visual impact as much as possible through our daily life. Nevertheless, the statement alleging that critics do not have influnence on the society to give us lasting vaule is the viewpoint that I'm reluctant to agree with in that
critics may have merits to our value concept and thoughts variety.

Initially, it is universally admitted that artists who own some special prospectives or some intellectual view to this comos frequently experience a mysterious capacity to bring us some good feelings with their abstract image presenting on their papers. That is to say, to make us understand the desire of beauty is every artist's dream especially da Vinci with his prominent drawing opus "Mona Lisa" which being us lots of imaginary respects to get a meditation. On the other hand, beholding at some celebrated articles could also bring people deep consideration about their lives and societies where they strive to be mixed into. Such us several noted novals written by Mark Twain who are anticipated to send prominent value to us.

However, opposed by the statement, from my viewpoint, there is no fabulous subsititute to replace the function of critics. Given that cultivating some abstract art works as well as interpreting recondite meaningful version, they just play a vital role to help us to hold a
better understanding about those profound obstacles. Especially about the proview which is bound to be written by specialized critics has a very simple generaliztion to lead us experence a partly observation about it. Simultaneously, nothing can be more chiefly recognized that beauty is in the eye of the beholder so that lasting value is varying from our visual effect. That is to say, it is based on the spectator rather than the aritist particularly collecting postcards, in that it present us lasting value in our hearts.

alternatively, In spite of such advantages of critics, quantaties of hazardous impact which astonishes us is also poisonous.
Especially as when our art have the necessary to experience a revolution, critics always have the kind of possibility to hamper progression of the art, at the same time time, their weekness are easilly to be taken advantages of in order to be maken used by some hostile politics. Taking
Mark Twain as example, some sensitive partion that assailing to the current government in his novel was criticised by some crtics, but some celebrities in power used the perception given by critics to contridict his novel.

As far as I'm concerned, we can get the direct
feeling through visual impact from artists as well as indirectly witniss several critics' essaies which potentially interpreting suggestion or compliment. They are all of important significance for us to bring us presentation of beauty of art to pass a perception that beauty such as nature, cosmos, humanity ultimatly transports in our deep hearts, and that's just the way we think, regardless of external elements.




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