七月十五日作文贴

darkathrunUID: 2813505

Date 15/07
Topic: people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place.
Nowadays we can see a lot of people are rushing towards several far-away big cities, leaving their own hometowns behind. It’s crucial for us to seek for a better understanding why this phenomenon more and more commonly happens. First and foremost people are leaving for a batter chance to be promoted. There is no doubt that it’s easier for people to find a better employment in big cities, considering the fact that the differentiating situation in different cities. Besides, moving to another city is rather a challenge to oneself, with which supposedly we go and look for our limits. Nevertheless we can have a better career future if we choose big cities, remote from our hometown.
However, going to the major cities may not be a good idea. To begin with, we should repay our hometown for its payment. Homeland is where people begin their living, and it have devoted itself to bringing us up. We should have a further understanding towards our homeland. In addition, for the sake of career development, we should choose our hometown instead of big cities. We have our root here, and we can do something much easier via our friends who have developed further understanding of us since childhood than via strangers, who’s indifferent and greedy. Last but not the least, big cities now is overcrowded due to the feverish pulling-in of people from every corner in this country, and this make finding your very own room in big cities rather a coincidence.
Taken what concerns me into consideration, I firmly hold the idea that we should stay in the city or country throughout all life. Finding a right place in a big city is not a easy job to undertake. Stick with what keeps you accompany since your birth, and you’ll find it much better to moving to another place.
不好意思同组的同学昨天晚上我出门了，这是我第一次发帖，我在这里为我的延迟致歉。

darkathrunUID: 2813505

求各位走过路过给点意见TAT。。。写这篇的时候感觉词汇太匮乏了，写都写不出来。。。

giserUID: 2844945

改稿见附件，坚持写作，加油

darkathrunUID: 2813505

3# giser
感谢giser同学啦~~~~~~~~~不过小声补一句，我是阿枼不是啊菜。。。

darkathrunUID: 2813505

3# giser 多谢了~刚刚看了，很有启发，一针见血啊！