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7.20的

Businessmen are only motivated by desire of money. Do you agree or disagree?

Are people who work in business area only chasing after the money? It is commonly believed that money is an important motivational fact of business activities. However, I strongly agree with the idea that there are other important reasons than treasure to influence the businessmen’s behaves.

Businessmen, considered as human beings, definitely need something beside money as all us do. It could be so many reasons that why people are doing business. Some may enjoy the feeling of be respected, some may want to achieve great success in their favorite area, and someone may just following the commitment he made to his past father. Thousands of people could have thousands of answer on this. And the profit they earn is just part of their desire.

On the other hand, as part of our society, people who are doing business also need take their responsibilities. Profit is not the rarely factor they have to keep in mind, since there are always something they have to do or not allow to do. For instance, a wine seller should never sell alcohol to a teenager, even he can get much more cash by doing this. Also, a inventor should not open a manufactory if he has been noticed that it could bring with a highly damage to the local environment. So we can draw a conclusion that certain restricts on business, such as laws or moral consideration, make them think more about the next step.

Although, we cannot deny that money is one of the most important motivations of various business operations, it will still be unwise to just think about money. For example, a man sacrifices every weekend to do business in order to fund his family. Yet, once he may realize that the money is not worth because he lost the connection with his family. When people are obsessed with treasure, they are blind to the basic truth: Money is nothing but a tool to achieve their goals. We feel like to own a large amount of money is because of what it could bring to us.

Summing up, someone who works on business should not and would not to take the money as the target of their motions. If some businessmen do consider the money as the unique motivation, it will be a great lost for them, not to mention the harmful effect it could have to the society.

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修改好啦~~~~

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改好了，意见不一致的地方欢迎交流啊。

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童鞋，你给我改的还是没附件啊！

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7.22的作业~Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.

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您好，作文已修改，请查收！如有不妥，请告知。谢谢！

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7.22的作业~Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.
xcviva 发表于 2010-7-22 19:48

GOD, 不是我偷懒，是我水平低，我真找不出什么要改的地方。 ：（  “一屋不扫……” 倒是想到了，不找到怎么翻，学习了