狗狗的作文本

gougouhencaiUID: 2778821

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits- p3 M6 m" a* L3 i  F

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      In my point of view that advertising is not the most important cause of un healthy eating habits.
there are so nreason to cause  unhealthy eating habit  for example, addict in computer ,influence by parents and busy work It’s hardly to say which is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
     Adverting is only a kind of way to enlarge the influence of product. it’snegative influence on people’ health is limited. I think the following arethe main reasons to cause people’unhealthy
eating habits .
     First,  in the modern world  , computer is used more and more. Some people tend to use it during
the dinner. It  will do harm to our healthy. Because  this type of eat conduce food cannot be fully digested.
    In addition the ratio of our lives become fast and fast.  some people have not enough time to have breakfast.  so they  culture the habit that have no breakfast  in the morning. After a long   period , the condition of  health would deteriorate. For example , my brother has not to have breakfast from beginning work .Lately he was checked out that he has stomach disease.     he had to live in the hospital to be cured.
      From the above you might think that advertising is only a commerce behavior .Its negative influence on people health is less than the other
reasons we discussed .

dy008UID: 2284812

略改了一下

starbigstarUID: 2855966

:)嗨~同学，你的作文我改好了，但是直接回复在这，那些颜色什么的都没了，还会出现乱码...另外我发帖数不够，所以，我也不能够带附件回复你，如果你上线了群里吼我一下，我把WORD文档传给你，因为我在群里美找到GOUGOUHENCAI...我的QQ308829408~ 哈哈~ see you

starbigstarUID: 2855966

刷了好多贴 终于可以添加附件了~

gougouhencaiUID: 2778821

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.

  When it comes to the balance of salary and vacation .Some people think A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better . others claim that the opposite is true. It’s hardly to say which is better. It depends on people’ seek. Some people pursue Satisfaction of mental and others seek enjoyment of  material . I’ll give my opinion as follows:
Someone is pursue a kind of easy life , including the happiness with families , vacation in abroad, and so on . They think that time of life is short , so enjoy the happiness of life is most important.  For this kind of people , money is only to be used meet the need of normal life. Satisfaction of mental is what  they seek. Money is very useful but it cannot buy good-fellowship  and love. The time with family and friends is the most happiness in the world.

     Nowadays more and more people have a view that money is most important . They give up the time of rest instead of work to pursue material lives what they desire. A cool car the beautiful house of seaside and a comfortable life all need lots of money. As an old saying goes: Money is the key that opens all doors. Money is the fundamental to achieve some dreams of their childhood. Photography  sailing and climbing need lots of money to buy expensive equipments.  Also,Work hard can bring them honour and promotion .

The discuss about the enjoyment of material or mental is continue. Which is better depends on people’s seek. The culture and sense of worth of peoplefrom different parts of the worldare different . View on the balance of the money and vacation is hardly to unify.

wjinli519UID: 2766563

word文档改好了丢了。。。直接这里说了。
还是不要套模板吧，平时自己写。逻辑关系可以更清晰一点，前后的句与句之间要有逻辑关系，建议多分析分析范文。病句还是比较多的，多练练吧。

wjinli519UID: 2766563

我也没考过。。没有发言权。。多积累多写吧，看个50篇范文，背背单词，写个10篇文章，必然会提高的。。。我英语和以前的语文作文一直很差。。。大家一起努力吧

gougouhencaiUID: 2778821

8.5作业

niunianUID: 2864048

8.3  实在不好意思，刚发现8.3给你改的竟然忘记传了，对不起啊~~~


8.5的一起传了  ，再次抱歉

gougouhencaiUID: 2778821

8.7

cairen1986UID: 2599310

8# gougouhencai

不好意思啊，昨天有事去了，没有及时的给改作文，今天不上了 请见谅啊

by cairen1986

白菜学英语UID: 2731720

不好意思今天才回复

因为上不到网 所以只有每天上午到图书馆来蹭网

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8.10

fanfan1247UID: 2591669

修改好啦
~~by fanfan1247

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