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发表于 2010-7-27 18:11:15 |显示全部楼层
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(09.01.17 NA )Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits8 G/
It is no denying that our living standard is improving recent years. But our healthy standard is descending. In other words, we have more and more money to buy something which is not necessity. For example, dessert cookies and so-called junk food. For the purpose of attracting people’s attention ,companies are willing to spend an army of money advertising. So many people believe that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habit. I can deduce from following reasons.


To begin with, the majority of food advertisements is fast food. It is well-known that fast food is relatively unhealthier than common food. The recommendation is based on the result of the survey made by Beijing university , a famous university of China. It says that 67 percentage of food advertisement is for fast food. And fast food, more or less, keep pace with the high repaid of the social development. But it ,by no means, is healthy food.


In addition, an outstanding advertisement gives an enterprise a competitive edge. Hence, many companies want to improve their popularity through advertising. They hire top advertisement making term to help them design and produce advertisement. They even invite celebrities to play as an important role of the advertisement. As the old thing goes love me ,love my dog. In China ,a famous food industry hire a beautiful actress to make an advertisement. She told audiences that it is enjoyable to eat the instant noodles at tea-time. It is delicious and healthy. If you eat the instant noodles you will have a good mood. Many fans of her run to buy the instant noodles and try to eat an tea-time. How ridiculous it is!


The last but not least, it is well-known that advertisement cost much money. So many enterprises have nothing to do but to decrease the funds which once invested on increasing the quality of production. And media sometimes misleads people, coverage fraudulent contents.


In sum, it is very likely that people will be able to arrive at the same conclusion that advertising is the most important cause unhealthy eating habits.
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发表于 2010-7-28 01:50:43 |显示全部楼层
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