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发表于 2010-7-27 18:11:23 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由 speedychaos4 于 2010-7-29 23:09 编辑

Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take along term career.

Job security has always been a hot topicamong the recent college graduates and other young employees of different companies,especially when the financial condition of the society is not so stable asexpected. Even it would be quite necessary for young people to secure a job forthe sake of their own living, I still agree with the statement that they shouldtake the opportunity to experience various jobs before deciding a long terncareer with careful and throughout consideration.

To start with, experience is important toyoung people for it could help them be more considerable and clam when facingdifferent situations. And experience is a fortune which could only be obtainedthrough practice over different circumstances. Taking several different jobs,young people would be able to have access to different types of people and knowhow to deal with people of different personalities. This would help them to getalong better with their colleagues and the people important to them. Meanwhile,trying different jobs is also a good opportunity for young people know moreabout how different parts of the society operates, and get to know the societybetter.

Moreover, trying different jobs might alsohelp young people find out what they really want from their career. Without anydisagreements, most of the young people are not sure about what they reallylike or what they really want. By trying different jobs, one could experience alarge amount of different things and this would definitely enlarge thepossibility of him or her finding out that very career that is attractive. Forthose who claim that they really like the jobs they have right now, tryingdifferent jobs before deciding their career could also act as a important rolein testing their career decision. If they really have passion for theirdecision, it would not be difficult for them to return to the industry aftertrying different jobs. However, it would be quite beneficial for those who havemade wrong decisions without realizing, since trying different jobs provides avaluable chance for them to change their decisions before it is too late toregret.

On the other hand, although I believe thattrying different jobs is beneficial for young people, I still think that theyshould treat their current job seriously think twice before really doing so.Since the thought of trying different jobs might lead to careless attitude towardthe current job and the new job might not be able to have the expected effectsif they are picking companies randomly. But different experiences, no mattergood or bad, would still be beneficial for young people.

In sum, I really believe that young peopleshould try different jobs before taking a long term career since the experienceof different jobs would be a big fortune for them and would be definitelyhelpful in their career decision. As long as they are treating their currentjobs and futures jobs seriously, the experience would definitely offerstremendous advantages for them.

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发表于 2010-7-30 01:13:07 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由 ttuuttuu 于 2010-7-30 01:16 编辑

Job security has always been a hot topicamong the recent college graduates and other young employees of different companies,especially when the financial condition of the society is not so stable asexpected. Even it would be quite necessary for young people to secure a job forthe sake of their own living, I still agree with the statement that they shouldtake the opportunity to experience various jobs before deciding a long terncareer with careful and throughout consideration.

To start with, experience is important toyoung people for it could help them be more considerable and clam when facingdifferent situations. And experience is a fortune which could only be obtainedthrough practice over different circumstances. Taking several different jobs,young people would be able to have access to different types of people and knowhow to deal with people of different personalities. This would help them to getalong better with their colleagues and the people important to them. Meanwhile,trying different jobs is also a good opportunity for young people know moreabout how different parts of the society operates, and get to know the societybetter.

Moreover, trying different jobs might alsohelp young people find out what they really want from their career. Without anydisagreements, most of the young people are not sure about what they reallylike or what they really want. By trying different jobs, one could experience alarge amount of different things and this would definitely enlarge thepossibility of him or her finding out that very career that is attractive. Forthose who claim that they really like the jobs they have right now, tryingdifferent jobs before deciding their career could also act as a important rolein testing their career decision. If they really have passion for theirdecision, it would not be difficult for them to return to the industry aftertrying different jobs. However, it would be quite beneficial for those who havemade wrong decisions without realizing, since trying different jobs provides avaluable chance for them to change their decisions before it is too late toregret.

On the other hand, although I believe thattrying different jobs is beneficial for young people, I still think that theyshould treat their current job seriously think twice before really doing so.Since the thought of trying different jobs might lead to careless attitude towardthe current job and the new job might not be able to have the expected effectsif they are picking companies randomly. But different experiences, no mattergood or bad, would still be beneficial for young people.

In sum, I really believe that young peopleshould try different jobs before taking a long term career since the experienceof different jobs would be a big fortune for them and would be definitelyhelpful in their career decision. As long as they are treating their currentjobs and futures jobs seriously, the experience would definitely offerstremendous advantages for them.

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