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AlexandooUID: 2861294

7.27 (09.01.17 NA )Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits

Do ads is the crucial effects of unhealthy dietary habits? There is no deny the fact that ads, one of the decisive factor to market profits, leads the fashion of fast food culture, couch potato, and other unhealthy habits, relying on its design and publication infiltration. In my view, bad habits hinge on ads to some extent; however, the statement should be confined in some certain respects, esp. family education and public education, overall should be considered.
At first blush the statement that ads play a key role to cause ill habits appears compelling. It is true that people are always tend to focus on the ads, for example, carbonated drink advertising—Coca-cola and Pepsi cola, ‘junk food’ advertising – hamburger, cornflakes and potato chips, with its tantalizing and attractive image and brand slogan, naturally, its ‘fast’ design, struck and ‘allure’ countless children, teenage, and working class. While they give little attention to the food nutrition, a convenient and pernicious eating habit has been cultured already, despite the fact that it account for a large percentage of the malnutrition and body resistance lowed. Thus I agree the statement insofar as advertising is one of the most important causes of unhealthy eating habits.
Beyond the concession, however, I disagree with the statement. When it comes to work and education, we should place our attention to appraise other objective extensive factors besides ads, esp. physical and environment pressure, family and public education system, to dietary changes. To witness the healthy development of mental and physical health, one needs look no further than how about the social environment and education system.
We can consider the social environment, we are motivated what we proceed and programmed. Now we live a machine world that needs more attention to obtain more profits, do the machine-like rules; namely any rational person, all hoped achieves greatest income by the smallest cost, which means the world should pursue time-cost optimization: sacrifice time for economic profits. The direct result is that time-cost optimization confuses our regular schedule, automatically, leads an unhealthy eating habit. For instance, when one has a chance to promote, by presiding a formal international academic meeting, only need to do is prepare comprehensively for almost half year, contacting professors, government, and academic sectors. He should abandon his afternoon tea, weekend dinner, and even a regular nutritious breakfast. It is naturally get into an unhealthy eating habit after half year preparing. All of what he did are only subjected to his working factor, which really did great contribution to his career, of course, to his income; nor the attention to his health now, just orientated on its economic benefits.

Or consider the education factor. Only reasonably schedule school and family eating habits can people benefits from a long-run healthy dietary management. Family education is a crucial factor to culture a normal eating habit, considering the fundamental influence brought by parents and family life. At the meantime, public education also decides the current of children’s eating habits, including nutrition balance, food hygiene, and dietary laws. All above should be used as a standard and background to evaluate the causes of ill eating habits.
To sum up, advertising is just like that everybody in the section of clothes when there is a blind conformity and convergence; however, other factors esp. social environment and education system should be took into consideration.

longxue26UID: 2687755

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我猜 您是不是gre作文大拿啊? 或是写过英文诗歌之类高难度的东西啊?

您要是这水平 用汉语水平来形容一下的话  就是写白话古文作文的那类啊!!!

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Joannalove1992UID: 2860684

首先，谢谢你的点评。
我有很认真的读你的文章（里面有好多单词不认识，我有很勤快的查字典，我也有把你的文章抄下来，反复比对，虽然我晓得那差距可能超过了天和地的距离，但我会加油向你的方向进步。）
不好意思，没能帮上你什么忙，还给您添麻烦了。