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谢谢你的批改和建议~  本来每次都是有拼写检查的，只是现在在亲戚家的word没有这个功能，设置里这个功能是灰色的~  
再次谢谢

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life: B*

There is no doubt that everyone in the world dreams to success, but what is defination of success is variety according to different people. Some people hold the opnion that earn much money and living in a big house is success. Some deem one who can help others live a better life is success. Even some, not few number, make sure other people know about his strengths and accomplishments is success. Success in their eyes is others acknowledge and admit their power. In my eyes, there are plenty of kinds success, not only limited in one way, Success in my perspective is help more and more people live a better life which has cited before.

To begin with, I have to admit that make sure other people know about your strengths and accomplishments is a success. That is also what majority public are pursuing for. Of couese, to be a CEO of international financial company and earn lots of money such as Buffett is a success, to be a scientist or engineering who can build a hudge project is a success, to be a musician who can played in gold hall is a definite success. However, what I want to accent is that is not the only way to judge success.

Except for making sure other people know about one’s strengths and accomplishments, ones who help others live a better life are also success. They may not as famous as the big man who always occurs in news and TV shows. However, they also deserve public to respect and they are also successful people. One could look no further than doctors. In 2009, the H1N1 virus kill millions of people, and there are a large percentage people are doctors and nurses. When they take care of the patients, they get affected by the deadly virus. But in order to cure more patients and save their lifes, they still fights with the illness. I deem they are one of the most successful people in the world which is without any objection.

In conclusion, there are numerous way of success and plenty of judgement of success. To make sure other people know about your strengths and accomplishment is only the most common way of success. And what we pursue should be an more honorable success that help other live a better life.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children's future for them."

How to educate and cultivate children is a hot topic all the time. In most situations, parents always act the role of director and manager, teaching child since they were born and managing all the things so that children could grow happily without too much harm. There is no doubt what parents do are aim to their offspring enjoy a happy life and have a bright future. However, is that really do good to children? According to my perspective, parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their future.

To begin with, according to a statistic for children at websites and schools, children who hold the opinion that one should not always follow the order of his parents occupied 65 percent, and as the gap strengthen between parent and children due to faster and faster society development, the percentage is undoubtedly has a trend of growing. The children who take part in answering the questionnaire deem that the idea and value between two generations are totally different and what their parents’ arrangement could not suit modern society. On the other hand, parents could not catch the society development direction as sensitive as their children result from people surround them are in the same age with them. They pay less attention to the future development. Thus, what children talk and concern parents could not understand so that children should determine their future by themselves.

Secondly, although the management from parents lead children avoid of numerous failure. Parents should not arrange everything for children. Society and history are full of examples that one finally success after suffering plenty of failure. Child could learn much from failure and learn to avoid of the mistakes which cause this failure in their following life. Parents could not take company with their children all their life. When parents get old, it is time for children to take the responsibility of family. So let young people make their own choice even though it will suffer failure and pain is essential for their long term development.

Lastly, in my opinion, what parents should do is giving a good suggestion to their sons or daughters rather than make choices for them. After all, no matter in which fields, parents own much more experience than young children. Their suggestion should be an important factor for making any choices. For another reason, parents are the people who will never cheat their child. What they suggest are undoubtedly consider of your benefit rather than some friends or colleagues pay more attention on their own profits.

All in all, in accordance with what has been discussed above we can safely draw the conclusion that parents should allow children to make their own choices. In one hand, there is a big gap between two generations in many fields, On the other hand, it is do good to children's long term development.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities

As is often the case, it is much concern to a point where a wide discussion has been aroused that if students should take a part-time job while they are studying in universities. Different people hold different attitude toward this. Many people deem that due to take part-time job will cost plenty of time and energy. It is ought to be used for learning in universities. As far as I am concern, in weighting both the prospective benefits and potential risks, I side on the opposite and deem that students should take a part-time job.

There are several reasons for me to support my opinion, and I will put forward two of the most importance. As a threshold matter, one can learn much in part-time jobs. According to a recent statistic conducted by an influential web Yahoo. The number of graduate students who have intern or part-time job experience and successfully find a job occupied 80 percent in more than 3000 students who took part in these survey. And it is undoubtedly has the trend of increasing with the growing quantity of university students. Students have a working experience could easily use the knowledge that they have learned in class to daily work; they can accept new concept and tasks faster than freshman.

In addition, students take a part-time jobs could know much people and learn valuable experience from colleagues and bosses. Even some students finally turn it to a full time job and become a formal employee. To demonstrate this point, we could look no further than my classmates Wu. Wu find a part- time job in his third year in university at IBM. His responsibility is data analysis and run daily sell reports to his boss. During his work in IBM, Wu learned numerous new abilities such as how to use SAP software. Now, after one year's hard working, Wu has employed by IBM. The case is not rare; it is typical of dozens I have encountered. Therefore, taking a part-time job is good to find a job after graduating.

To extent, it is indisputable that I agree students should take a part-time job. Nevertheless, I seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that this choice faces some risks. Taking a part-time job indeed cost much time and energy. My classmate Wu who have been cited before told me, the only thing he wanted to do was sleep after a whole day company works and heavy class works. He had little entertainment in the last year and break off with his girlfriend. However, considerable drawbacks though taking a part-time job may lead to, it cannot match the advantages that bring about.

All in all, in accordance with what have discussed before, we can safely draw the conclusion that students should take a part-time job. One can learn much in the job, and unquestionable contribute to find a job after graduating. As can be seen the analysis, the merits of taking a part-time job is obviously and allow us no excuse to vote against it.

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小丸子改8.19. 不过你写的不是指定的题目哦~

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写的题目不对

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