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10月2日交
08.12.07NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress

The general consensus now appeals that spending time alone is not the best way to release stress. However, I don't agree with this issue. That's because that I can have more time to figure out why I have stress when I spend time alone. In addition, if I stay alone, I can enjoy my interests to decrease the pressure. Furthermore, spending time with other people will cause more stress. Thus, spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, I can enjoy my interests to release the pressure when I am alone. I prefer to listen to music and reading. Therefore, when I have the pressure, I like to enjoy the cafe, appreciate classic music as well as read a novel. If I stay with other persons, I can't focus my habits. For example, I had one important project last month. During that time, I became so stressful. Therefore, I planned to spend one weekend to release my pressure caused by this project. However, my friend wanted to stay with me to overcome this stage. However, he just told the stories about him and his girlfriend during two days. It destroyed my previous plan. Thus, I prefer to stay alone to relieve stress.

Second, staying alone can help me to figure out how to overcome the pressure. Any stress is influenced by some factors. There, I can think out what causes the stress and how to deal with it when I stay alone. Last year, I had a difficulty. During that time, many friends gave me distinct opinions and suggestions. However, they didn't know the detail about my difficulty. Therefore, I spend one week to think how to solve the problem. After that, I felt relax and energetic because I found the way to save it. Thus, staying time alone usually can help people to relieve their stress.

Third, spending time with friends might cause more stress. If you as well as your friend who both have problem talk with each other, you may become more upset. That's because people have negative thinking when they feel stressful. Therefore, staying with friends is not a good idea when you have stress. John, who is one of my best friends, is nervous with his exam. He discuss with his friend who also has the same exam. After they talk, both of them just feel more nervous and depressed. It doesn't entirely help their exam.


To sum up, I agree that spending time alone is the best way to release stress. That's because that I can enjoy my interests to overcome the stressful life. In addition, I can have more time to deal with the stress when I stay alone. Furthermore, spend time with others may cause more stress. Thus, spending time alone will help me to release my pressure.

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10月5日交  by ttuuttuu

09.01.17 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

The general consensus now appears that advertising is the most important cause of healthy eating habits. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because that advertising includes too many contents about unhealthy food. In addition, people obtain a lot of information from advertising. Furthermore, advertising encourages people to eat unhealthily. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, people obtain many information from the advertising every day. They trust the contents from the advertising. Therefore, it has a lot of responsibilities for unhealthy eating habits of people. For instance, my young sister saw a advertising about fried chicken this summer. It displayed how juice that chicken was without any alarm. She enjoyed fancy fried chicken many times this summer. After this summer, her weight enhances 20 pounds.

Second, advertising contains too much about all kinds of unhealthy food. The health research reports mentions that over 60% advertisings are about much unhealthy food in our live including soft drink, fried chips, fries. It causes that people are easy to buy these unhealthy food when they are hungry. Like me, I got the advertising about pizza every weekend. It shows that I can obtain one 8 inch pizza for free when I buy one 8 inch pizza on Friday. Therefore, I find that I usually order a 8 inch pizza every day because of this advertising. Nevertheless, I become fatter than previously after I eat pizza every Friday.

Thirdly, advertising encourage people to eat unhealthily. Some famous restaurants about fries and hamburger have the advertising which displays that people buy meals can obtain toys. In addition, about famous advertising of ice cream, if people can finish the huge ice cream in 3 minutes, they can get free pass for one month. These contents teach people eat unhealthily, and they affect people's health. John, one of my best friends, joined the activity about free ice cream pass when he saw the advertising. However, he needed to go to hospital at the same time when he won the free pass. That’s because he ate too fast to harm his stomach.

To sum up, I agree that advertising is the most important factor of unhealthy eating habits. That's because that people approach the advertising every day. Second, the contents of the advertising are related to all kind of unhealthy food. Furthermore, advertising encourages people to have unhealthy behaviors. Thus, I entirely believe that advertising has most important responsibility for people's unhealthy eating habits.

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The general consensus now appears that advertising is the most important cause of healthy eating habits. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because that advertising includes too many contents about unhealthy food. In addition, people obtain a lot of information from advertising. Furthermore, advertising encourages people to eat unhealthily. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.(每一句感觉都挺短的，读起来有些不顺口，最好能长短句交错吧)
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First of all, people obtain many information from the advertising every day（信息不完整）. They trust the contents from the advertising. Therefore, it has a lot of responsibilities for unhealthy eating habits of people. For instance, my young sister saw a advertising about fried chicken this summer1. It displayed how juice that chicken was without any alarm. She enjoyed fancy fried chicken many times this summer2. After this summer3（连续出现了3次）, her weight enhances（这个词用得有些不恰当） 20 pounds.(这段首句和例子想要阐述的意思好像联系不起来)

Second, advertising contains too much about all kinds of（夸张了） unhealthy food. The health research reports mentions that over 60% advertisings are about much unhealthy food in our live including soft drink, fried chips, fries. It causes that people are easy to buy these unhealthy food when they are hungry. Like me, I got the advertising about pizza every weekend（？）. It shows that I can obtain one 8 inch pizza for free when I buy one 8 inch pizza on Friday. Therefore, I find that I usually order a 8 inch pizza every day because of this advertising. Nevertheless, I become fatter than previously after I eat pizza every Friday.(句子和词语有些贫乏）



Thirdly, advertising encourage people to eat unhealthily. Some famous restaurants about fries and hamburger have the advertising which displays（重复，且不恰当） that people buy meals can obtain toys. In addition, about famous advertising of ice cream, if people can finish the huge ice cream in 3 minutes, they can get free pass for one month. These contents teach people eat unhealthily, and they affect people's health.（连接词缺） John, one of my best friends, joined the activity about free ice cream pass when he saw the advertising. However, he needed to go to hospital at the same time when he won the free pass. That is because he ate too fast to（“为了”？） harm his stomach.


To sum up, I agree that advertising is the most important factor of unhealthy eating habits. That's because that people approach the advertising every day. Second, the contents of the advertising are related to all kind of unhealthy food. Furthermore, advertising encourages people to have unhealthy behaviors. Thus, I entirely believe that advertising has most important responsibility for people's unhealthy eating habits.
说理不太清楚，且每段论述末缺少段落总结。需要加强基础练习，丰富下句子和词语的表达，增加些长句。总之，大家一起加油吧~

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by 猫儿脸
The general consensus now appeals that spending time alone is not the best way to release stress. However, I don't agree with this issue. That's because that I can have more time to figure out why I have stress when I spend time alone. In addition, if I stay alone, I can enjoy my interests to decrease the pressure. Furthermore, spending time with other people will cause more stress. Thus, spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.* r. |: M% w1 u9 r6 z( \

First of all, I can enjoy my interests to release the pressure when I am alone. I prefer to listen to music and reading (read). Therefore, when I have the pressure, I like to enjoy the cafe, appreciate classic music as well as read a novel. If I stay with other persons, I can't focus (on) my habits (maybe you can use interest). For example, I had one important project last month. During that time, I became so stressful. Therefore, I planned to spend one weekend to release my pressure caused by this project. However, my friend wanted to stay with me to overcome this stage. However, he just told the stories about him and his girlfriend during two days. It destroyed my previous plan. Thus, I prefer to stay alone to relieve stress.
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Second, staying alone can help me to figure out how to overcome the pressure. Any stress is influenced (maybe you can use caused)by some factors( such as…). There, I can think out what causes the stress and how to deal with it when I stay alone. Last year, I had a difficulty (difficult time). During that time, many friends gave me distinct (a little awkward, maybe you can use useful, excellent) opinions and suggestions. However, they didn't know the detail about my difficulty. Therefore, I spend (spent) one week to think how to solve the problem. After that, I felt relax and energetic because I found the way to save it. Thus, staying time alone usually can help people to relieve their stress.4 N0 y" V" |. ^5 e# `8 Q
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Third, spending time with friends might cause more stress. If you as well as your friend who both have problem talk with each other, you may become more upset. That's because people have negative thinking when they feel stressful. Therefore, staying with friends is not a good idea when you have stress. John, who is one of my best friends, is(was) nervous with his exam. He discussed with his friend who also has the same exam. After they talk, both of them just feel more nervous and depressed. It doesn't entirely help their exams.（时态, 建议过去时态) 7 ]# o! (shiX( shi

To sum up, I agree that spending time alone is the best way to release stress. That's because that I can enjoy my interests to overcome the stressful life. In addition, I can have more time to deal with the stress when I stay alone. Furthermore, spend time with others may cause more stress. Thus, spending time alone will help me to release my pressure.
1．        句式简单，
2．        感觉说服力不够
3．        感觉句子重复太多， 很多句子从开头用到结尾
4．        建议多看范文

huirong2009UID: 2669542

你的文章有乱码， 不是我的错， 呵呵，，，，

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9月5日修改

ttuuttuuUID: 2299729

狠批狂批~~這篇我寫不好~
10月7日交
09.03.21NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success


The general consensus now appears that achieving success is important than remaining happy and optimistic when people fail. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because that remaining happy and optimistic is important for everyone. In addition, to remain happy and optimistic can decrease negative feeling caused by their fail. Furthermore, it is more extremely that people keep passive attitude to face their difficulty than their success. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, people need to keep happy and optimistic any time. Most doctors usually suggest people to keep passive attitude any time. Therefore, to keep happy and optimistic becomes more important when they fail. For instance, my young sister failed the midterm test last semester. During that time, she felt upset, and couldn't do anything. I encouraged her to keep happy and optimistic when she met problem. After the final test, she did well on the test and obtain A plus score.

Second, keeping optimistic and delight can overcome negative feeling. When people fail, they often produce negative feeling and become depressed. Therefore, to keep happy and optimistic can make their mind to release stress easily and recover energetic readily. The research of successful people displays that 60% successful people have suffered difficulty and failed before they success. However, if they choose to use passive attitude to face the problem, 90% people can become success. Thus, it proves that remaining happy and optimistic fail plays a important role, when people fail.

Third, people keep passive attitude to conquer their difficulty more extremely than their success. We can't deny that achieving success has an important stage for human life. However, there are many problems and difficulties to wait for them, before they obtain success. Therefore, only keeping passive attitude can make people to overcome their suffered problems effectively. John, one of my best friends, is a lawyer. Before he passed the license exam of lawyer, he failed many times. However, he kept energetic feeling and passive feeling to face his failure. Now, he is a successful people, and makes a lot of money.

To sum up, I agree that remaining happy and optimistic when people fail is more important than achieving success. That's because that people need t keep happy and optimistic any time. In addition, keeping passive attitude can overcome negative feeling influenced by their fail. Furthermore, successful people always own happy and optimistic. Thus, to remain happy and optimistic when people fail is more important than achieving success.

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1012作文  by  ttuuttuu

10月12日交
do you agree or disagree, students will not use printed books anymore.


The general consensus now appears that students will use printed books in the future. However, I oppose this viewpoint. That's because that students need to respect books' editors. In addition, reading books in other ways is better than using printed books. Furthermore, buying original books are cheaper than printed books. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, books are the produces from editors. In addition, they spent a lot of time to finish a book which includes much information and knowledge. In addition, it makes students save time to collect the source which they want to learn. For me, I always buy books without printed version. In addition, I can obtain editors' signatures when I go to conferences and meet editors. It is exciting for me.

Second, there are many distinct ways to reading books. That's because that many students prefer to read books through their laptops. In addition, reading books in the computer is clearer than printed books which usually are unclear. Furthermore, stores always provide variety of discounts for electronic books. For me, I always buy book through ITunes. It is cheaper and convenient.

Third, printed books are more expansive than original books. Most students choose printed books because of original books' price. However, there are many discounts for original books in the campus book store. In addition, printed books cost more money because printing store raises the printing fee. My friends bought a printed book last semester, and its contents are not clear. In addition, the price of original in Amazon is the same as printed books. Therefore, buying original books are cheaper than printed vision.

To sum up, I entirely agree that student should stop to use printed books. That's because that students need to respect editors. In addition, reading book in different ways is convenient and save money. Furthermore, printed books cost more money. Thus, buying original books will have many benefits.