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07/29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

The general consensus now appears to be that young people should not change different jobs frequently before they take a long term career. However, I don't agree with this issue. I think that young should give themselves more opportunities to realize which job is suitable for them. In addition, they can make more friends from different jobs. Furthermore, they can enlarge their ability form different jobs. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.
First of all, trying different jobs is not a bat thing. Young people usually change their job frequently even their parents and friends double their ability. However, I encourage them to try different jobs to find the truly interesting job. That's because that they would like to spend more time on the job which attracted them. If young people just continue to work in the same job after graduated from school but they find that they don't like this job 10 years later, it will be a disaster. Like my friends Tom, he was a engineering for 5 years. He works hard every day. However, he finds that he is interested to be a seller and he want to change his career. The situation is dilemma. He does't want to give up his salary, but he does not like this career. If he try different career after graduated, he will be in the same situation.
Second, to try different jobs is to make more friends. Young people can make more friends from different domains. For instance, I had a job in the computer store and coworkers came from computer science major. In addition, I had worked in a drink store. I make many friends when I try different jobs. If I have any question which I can’t solve, I can ask my friends who are from many kinds of domains. They can help me, and I think that young people can’t obtain this advantage if they just work in the same job after school.
Thirdly, young people try different jobs to enlarging their ability. If young people have a lot of different skills, any boss will like to use them. My brother John has much experience of different jobs. Thus, his resume displays a lot of skills. He has more opportunities than others to obtain a job. When he graduated from the university, he changed several different jobs. During that time, many friends laughed him that he had twelve bosses every year. However, he learned a lot of skills from these jobs. Now, many companies want to use high salary to hire him.
To sum up, young people should try different jobs before they take a long term career. There are many advantages. They can find a suitable job, they can make more friends from different areas, and they can enlarge their ability and resume. Young people don't waste your time, and find that you don't like that longtime job after 10 years. Trying different jobs will benefit to you.

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晚了点，不好意思。 1# ttuuttuu

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0731
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.

The general consensus now appears to be that newspapers and magazines are not the best way to learn about a foreign country. However, I am against to this issue. I still believe that newspapers and magazines are the best channel to learn about other country. That's because that people can be easy to obtain newspapers and magazines. In addition, these two sources are not expensive. Furthermore, people don't worry about there correction. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, people can buy newspapers and magazines anywhere. We don't need to go to specified stores or buy a ticket to a foreign country. People can be easy to realize that country's culture, food, and news. For example, I plan to visit my friend Tom who lives in American. I don't know what kind of weather is in his city. In addition, I need the information to tell me how to buy a suitable present. During that time, newspapers and magazines are most easy way to let me obtain the information.
Thus, newspapers and magazine are the earliest way to obtain the information about a foreign country.

Second, I don't need to spend too much money, and I can obtain the information about a foreign country. People sometime needed to spend more money to understand a foreign country before. However, people don't need to spend much time and money to realize a country. They can spend little money and stand a comfortable sofa to enjoy the information of a foreign country from newspapers and magazines. Like my young sister Aki, she really likes to read magazines about travel. Every time, I plan to travel in a foreign country. She always gives me a lot of information. However, you know what? She has never been any foreign country even never takes an airplane.

Thirdly, the source from newspaper and magazines is correct. There are many professional persons in the companies of newspaper and magazine. These persons can collect more useful information. We don't need to doubt whatever the source is correct? Some people usually like to correct the information of a foreign country from the internet. However, we don't know where the source of the internet is from? For instance, my friend John, he planned to go to Korea. He corrected any information about Korea from the internet. However, he got lost in Korea. Finally, he bought a magazine in Korea to tell him how to go.

To sum up, I agree that Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country. That's because we can buy them anywhere. In addition, they are cheap to obtain. Furthermore, the source from newspaper and magazine are useful. Thus, if I want to realize a foreign country, I will buy newspapers and magazines.

梦的弃儿UID: 2840846

改完了。
请LZ也尽快去改小夕的文~~

shiyingjingjingUID: 2858447

我今天帮你看！！不好意思 有点晚了

shiyingjingjingUID: 2858447

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.
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The general consensus now appears to be that newspapers and magazines are not the best way to learn about a foreign country. However, I am against to this issue. I still believe that newspapers and magazines are the best channel to learn about other country. That's because that people can be easy to obtain newspapers and magazines. In addition, these two sources are not expensive. Furthermore, people don't worry about there correction. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.
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First of all, people can buy newspapers and magazines anywhere. We don't need to go to specified stores or buy a ticket to a foreign country. People can be easy to realize that country's culture, food, and news. For example, I planto visit my friend Tom who lives in American. I don't know what kind of weather is in his city. In addition, I need the information to tell me how to buy a suitable present. During that time, newspapers and magazines are most easy way to let me obtain the information./ C" L( \' s2 P; d/ K
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Second, I don't need to spend too much money, and I can obtain the information about a foreign country. People sometime needed一般现在时，因为你说是有时候 to spend more money to understand a foreign country before感觉整句时态有点乱哦. However, people don't need to spend much time and money to realize a country. They can spend little money and stand 不准确的表达a comfortable sofa to enjoy the information of a foreign country from newspapers and magazines. Like my young sister Aki, she really likes to read magazines about travel. Every time, I plan to travel in a foreign country. She always gives me a lot of information. However, you know what?太口语化，最好要书面点，正式点。 She has never been any foreign country even never takes an airplane., \- G: d# @9 g. ^

Thirdly, the sources from newspaper and magazines is correct. There are many professional persons in the companies of newspaper and magazine. These persons can collect more useful information. We don't need to doubt whatever the source is correct是句号。 Some people usually like to correct the information of a foreign country from the internet. However, we don't know where the source of the internet is from? 是句号For instance, my friend John, he had planned 去看看虚拟语气语法吧to go to Korea. He had corrected any information about Korea from the internet. However, he got lost in Korea. Finally, he bought a magazine in Korea to tell him how to go.是用什么方式走，应是 Where to go.
To sum up, I agree that Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country. That's because we can buy them anywhere. In addition, they are cheap to obtain. Furthermore, the source from newspaper and magazine are useful. 这句可以整合成单个一个句子把Thus, if I want to realize a foreign country, I will buy newspapers and magazines.

同学，我就觉得语法方面要注意下。总体是挺好的~！！加油啊

ttuuttuuUID: 2299729

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.

The general consensus now appears to be that a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. However, I disagree with this issue. That's because that I need more money to buy much stuff. In addition, I am a energetic person and enjoy my job. Furthermore, I don't think how people who have the low salary enjoy their vacation. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, a high salary job is important for me. I am a young person. I need to make a lot of money to buy several stuffs such as a car and a house. My parents spent much money to support me. I can obtain my degree because of my parents' fund. In my mind, I plan to buy a house for them when I start to make money. Thus, a high salary is very important for me.

Second, I love to work. I am an energetic person. If I have more time without working, I will feel sick and have no idea what to do. When I work, I enjoy the job and have more inspirit. Last month, I had a huge project. During that month, I worked until AM 01:00 every day. Because of that, we won the project award, and my boss gave me one week vocation. However, I don't know where I could go and what I could do during that time. I feel like a zombie. After returning my job, I feel energetic again. That's why I don't like more vacation time.

Third, people can't enjoy the vacation with a low salary. I don't think that how people with a low salary enjoy their vacation time. That's because that anything costs money. Like my friend John, he has a low salary and more vacation time. Last week, he planned to travel to Korea for two weeks. However, he found that his low salary was just enough to support one week travel fee when he summarized the total fee. You know what? During that time, he just hated his low salary sp much. After that, he chose to change a high salary even less vacation time. He said that he can't enjoy the vacation with a low salary. However, if he had a high salary even less vacation time, he can buy anything whatever he like and enjoy the vacation truly.

To sum up, I am against to the issue. I think a high salary with less vacation time is better that another. That's because that I need more money to make my dreams to be true. In addition, I will be sick if I don't work. Working makes me energetic. Furthermore, enjoying vacation need a salary to support. With a low salary, people can't enjoy the vacation authentically.

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The general consensus now appears to be that a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. However, I disagree with this issue. That's because that I need more money to buy much stuff. In addition, I am a energetic （an energetic ) person and enjoy my job. Furthermore, I don't think how people who have the low salary enjoy their vacation. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint. （开头段建议不要用那么多Furthermore之类的，有点罗列和累赘的感觉）

     First of all, a high salary job is important for me. I am a young person. I need to make a lot of money to buy several stuffs such as a car and a house. My parents spent much money to support me. I can obtain my degree because of my parents' fund. In my mind, I plan to buy a house for them when I start to make money. Thus, a high salary is very important for me.（为了凸显多样性，建议首尾两句不要完全重复，至少important 换成significant之类的吧）

Second, （secondly) I love to work. I am an energetic person. If I have more time without working, I will feel sick and have no idea （about） what to do. When I work, I enjoy the job and have more inspirit. Last month, I had a huge project. During that month, I worked until AM 01:00 every day. Because of that, we won the project award, and my boss gave me one week vocation. However, I don't know where I could go and what I could do during that time. I feel like a zombie. After returning my job, I feel energetic again. That's why I don't like more vacation time. （例子挺生动的）

Third, （thirdly) people can't enjoy the vacation with a low salary. I don't think that how people with a low salary enjoy their vacation time. That's because that anything costs money. （此句啥意思？貌似没写完整）Like my friend John, （Take my friend John as an example会好点) he has a low salary and more vacation time. Last week, he planned to travel to Korea for two weeks. However, he found that his low salary was just enough to support one week travel fee when he summarized the total fee（summarize改成sum up). You know what? During that time, he just hated his low salary sp much. After that, he chose to change a high salary even less vacation time. He said that he can't enjoy the vacation with a low salary. However, if he had a high salary even less vacation time, he can buy anything whatever he like and enjoy the vacation truly.

To sum up, I am against to the issue. I think a high salary with less vacation time is better that another. That's because that I need more money to make my dreams to be true. In addition, I will be sick if I don't work. Working makes me energetic. Furthermore, enjoying vacation need a salary to support. With a low salary, people can't enjoy the vacation authentically.

整体来说，小错并不是很多，那个人觉得LZ的主要问题在于句式太简单了，缺乏变换，大部分都是些短句。还有就是词汇建议可以做做同义词积累，多变化一下，考官看到就会觉得LZ词汇量大啦  哈 嗯 小小建议，加油加油~！

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0805
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.

The general consensus appears to be that education issue is interesting. Some people deem that young school children should study math, science, history as well as language. However, others prefer that young school children should be required to study art and music. In my opinion, I prefer the later one. That's because that young children during this stage are suitable for learning anything. In addition, they can make friends and discuss with their young classmates. Furthermore, art and music are not suitable for every child. There are several reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, young people are able to learn math, science, history and language. Scientists prove that the brain of young people is like a sponge which can absorb any information. Thus, this stage's young people can learn anything. Parents should give them much knowledge during age five to ten. For instance, my sister has two children who have different situations. One is John, and another is Mary. John liked reading as well as studying, but Mary didn't. John read a lot of science magazines and learned a lot of things including math and language. However, Mary liked sleeping, and she was not interested in anything. After 15 years, Mary is a coworker now. But, John is a professor. Thus, I think young school should education young people more knowledge not just art and music.

Second, they can make more friends with more knowledge. When young people learn more knowledge, they can have more topics to discuss with friends. Some children like language, and some prefer math. By giving more domains’ education, parents can observe what subject their children like. I think that this is a good way to realize their children's development. Like my young sister, she had read a lot of history books when she was 7 years old. During that time, she introduced many history stories to her friends.

Thirdly, I think that not every child likes art or music. If young school just educates young children art and music, they will want to escape the boring school. We can know that some wise young children need more training. For example, there is a famous World Olympic Mathematics test. Most contestants are educated and trained when they belong young ages. If they didn't educate these domains of knowledge, their parents have been impossible to find their ability.

To sum up, I don't agree that young children school should educate just are and music. That's because that young people can learn anything during this stage. In addition, they can use much knowledge to make friends. Furthermore, art and music are not suitable for every young child. Thus, I think that younger school should education more knowledge.

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还不错

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2009.9.11NA  agree or disagree it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life

The general consensus now appears to be that watching movies that can teach us something about real life is not only worth. However, I don't agree this viewpoint. That's because that it is convenient way to obtain the knowledge from watching movies. In addition, I can learn all kinds of culture and language when I watch movies. Furthermore, the information from movies is correct and arranged. Thus, i think that watching movies is only worth, and we can learn something about real life from it. There are several viewpoints to support it.

First of all, we can save time and money to obtain a lot of knowledge about real life from watching movies. People usually need to spend much time and money to realize something. However, movies editors collect abundant ideas even they spent several years to do it, and display the information on the movies. We just come to the theater and obtain the information from movies. It is really convenient for people to realize about our real life. Several years ago, a movie, named an inconvenient truth, impressed me. The movie showed that people need to realize and respect our environment. In addition, global warming will influent our life deeply. In the recent years, people pay attention to this issue, and start to decrease the amount of garbage and use of electric

Second, watching movies is easy way to learn culture and language.  Movies always include all kinds of culture and language. Thus, we can realize different culture and learn distinct language. For instance, I always watched movies every Sunday when I prepare the iBT toefl test. From movies, I can realize what people who live in United States wear, and what kind of food they prefer. In addition, I find that my abilities of listening and speaking are enhancing after I continue to watch movies for several months.

Third, information from other source such as the internet or television show is not always correct. Maybe some people prefer to obtain knowledge about real life from the internet. However, the information from the internet sometimes is not correct and arranged. Last year, John who is one of my best friends wanted to visit to a friend who has lived in Japan for 5 years. After he surfed in the internet, he felt confused about which information is correct. I told him everything which I realize from the movie which introduces Japan.

To sum up, I believe that watching movie is only worth which people can learn something about real life. That's because that it is easy to obtain the information and knowledge from the movies. In addition, watching movies is convenient to learn all kind of different culture and distinct language. Furthermore, the information from movies is correct and arranged. Thus, I agree this issue.

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改好了，加油哈
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