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[未归类] 8月14号考,求批作文ellishu,可狂拍砖(大家看哪方面还有模板的影子) [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-8-7 15:02:34 |只看该作者
87日交 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.

Nowadays, there are a growing proportion of contemporary college students who devote most of their spare time on the part-time jobs. However, a great many people live under the illusion that it is not judicious for them to spend tremendous energy on them due to the occupation of time. As for me, I firmly believe that taking part-time jobs would be advantageous to the university students because they not only enhance what they have learned from the school but also provide prize job experiences.

To begin with, part-times could serve as ways to put the professional knowledge into practice so that they can make people have a comprehensive view towards their majors. Conditions of the universities are such that it is impractical for the teachers to teach more practical uses of the fundamental courses and their influences on our daily life, yet after taking part time jobs, students could easily grasp the essence of the class. Taking my friend Kevin, whose major is engineering as an example. He used to complain that it was different to imagine the detail process of how the gears in the machine are worn down. Then his professor suggested him to take a part-time job in the local car company as a common worker and now he even becomes a teacher assistant of the course of Mechanical Principle due to his affluent practical skills acquired from the job.


In addition, another significant merit of the part-time jobs is that they provide students plenty of work experiences, which is contributable for them to find suitable jobs. With the tense job-market and the continuous growing number of graduates, so saturated the positions are that the employers now are prone to hire people with sufficient work experiences. Such is human nature that everyone would believe those people are more likely to adapt themselves to the new environment quickly, thus the companies would be able to save huge sums of training fees. This can give rise to obvious benefit to individuals as it does in the case of my uncle. It is three different kinds of part-times jobs mentioned in his resume that makes his manger hold the point that he is a versatile and quick-learned person and give him the job opportunity instead of another one graduating from a famous university.

However, there is no denying that taking a part-time job is bound to occupy some of our study time. The time we are subjected to in the school is so limited that the part-time job may even compound our burden of dealing with so many activities. Thus it is necessary for us to balance our finite time on both our study and the jobs.

After ruminating over all these factors, now we can safely draw the conclusion that under no condition can we ignore the significance of taking a part-time job, for it plays an essential role of both enhancing our study comprehension and offering our job experiences. After all, it is beneficial to the students in more than one factor.

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发表于 2010-8-9 10:02:17 |只看该作者

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other

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In the 20th century, contemporary people now are exposed to various kinds of TV programs including both the foreign and the domestic movies or plays. Plenty of people are prone to watch the program made by their own country due to the easy comprehension of the programs which greatly reflect their local culture. However, as far as I am concerned, I believe the problems of the foreign counties would be more interesting, for they not only enhance us to understand different cultures but also pay more attention on the technology which makes them feel more realistic.

To begin with, by watching the foreign program, people could experience a totally new life style or ideology, which could add some colors to our boring life. Such is human nature that after watching plenty of domestic movies, we are likely to become tedious with the unchangeable life style or contents in the movies made by our own, The foreign programs, on the contrary, could bring out a fantastic enjoyment of both the material life and the spirit of other counties. Taking my famous movie A WALK TO REMEMER as an example, the movie just demonstrates the detail life of a normal middle school student in America such as the special school activity which remarkably differs from the one of our country, the punishment of making a mistake for the senior student and so on so forth. Not only have I grasped the main essence of the ways of education of another country but I entertain myself as well.

In addition, there are advanced technical element in a foreign movie, which cannot be enjoyed by any movies made by ourselves. Conditions of the society are such that the more technology in the movie, the more attractive it is. Due to the inhibition of the economical development of our own country, we are not proficient to produce such big box-office movies which have to be invested tremendous sums of money. Watching a foreign movie, however, is just supplementary to this empty. For example, Avatar, one of the most famous movies made by America with three dimension skill have come to fashion during the past half a year among a great many students and most of them claim that it is more funny than any domestic movies.

However, there is no denying that movies and TV program can also serve as a significant entertainment due to the similar ideology and background between the those programs and local poeple. What is more, these programs are more likely to focus on the issue which people of their countries are interested in.

After ruminating all the mentioned factors, I firmly believe that the foreign programs and movies are far more interesting than those made by our country if we give some consideration of the fact that they can both provide us new cultures and enjoy more technology. After all, they could serve as a better entertainment.

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发表于 2010-8-10 23:10:51 |只看该作者
请问楼主如何在30分钟内完成大作呢   我发现完全不够时间……

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发表于 2010-8-11 12:27:08 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 joy1025 于 2010-8-11 12:41 编辑

楼主你给的那个链接,找的好辛苦。。。

水平有限,望楼主见谅~希望楼主有空也帮我修改下,也马上考试啦^_^

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