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[未归类] IBT——独立写作小组作业by Zachary [复制链接]

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发表于 2010-8-3 19:35:29 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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8.3作业,求狠狠狠狠狠狠狠狠狠狠的批,此为本人第一篇independent writing,水平有限,请谅解,多提提意见哈~
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time

Obviously, people like to entertainment themselvesnot only for the human nature but also for the life style. To my point, a jobwith more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a highsalary but less vacation time.

It’s is very important for people to learnhow to live a better life in a certain circumstance. We are not the birthlabor, we need entertainment. Let’s take an extreme case for example neighborof my work hardly throughout all his life just for a flat for his son for marriage.He made it. But after that there is only a flat in his life without happymemory.

Another reason is that less work may contributeto a healthy body. As we all known, stress has been a killer in human’s life.More stress you have, more disease you will own. Disease lead to a sad life aswell as a high cost on medication. So it’s doesn’t mean a people who with highsalary will earn more money than a people with low salary overall life. Peoplelive in Tokyo with a huge stress, the mental disease and the suicide is verycommon.

Finally a life full of free time can makeyour life variety which can extent your knowledge and broaden your horizon. Youcan travel more places and make more friends which can make you’re a betterlife.
In conclusion, I think a job with morevacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but lessvacation time.Money is not the god in life.

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发表于 2010-8-4 00:49:31 |只看该作者
改好了哦,麻烦楼主有空也帮我修改下哈~先感谢:p

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本帖最后由 fannie227 于 2010-8-4 16:49 编辑

楼主,改好了!加油
改得不对的地方请见谅

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本帖最后由 Zachary_lz 于 2010-8-8 18:12 编辑

8.7作业

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楼主改好了

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既然選擇向前看,就不要動搖!

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