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subjects such as art, music and drama should be a part of every child's basic education.


Rencently, there is a public debate that subjects such as art, music and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education. Some think child should concentrate on science, math, reading and writing subjects to get a high score in examination since they believe artistic courses are useless in the fierce competition nowadays. However,others hold different opinions. Their reasons are various and I can’t agree it any more with three primary reasons to improve child’s sense of beauty, to develope child’s hobbies as well as to lend child a touch of elegance.

The achievement of art will contribute a great improvement of sense of beauty. Child who acquire such subjects Art, music and drama courses will frequently have chance to contact with master-pieces, which are always refined works of masters accompanied by romantic spirits. Obtaining such courses helps child redefine their life and the world around by.

The development of hobbies can be the primary reason of artistic subjects. Only take those courses can child explore their interests in art. They can make fun of painting, singing and playing roles, subsquently fall in love with such activities.

Child who take art, music and drama course behave much more gentlely and elegant in daily life. They are more dramatic, more romantic and often filled with affection of the world and everything. for the reason that they touch elegance and grace everyday, are deeply influenced by them.

According to the listed reasons above, I agree that artistic courses should be taken by child in his basic education.