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2009.9.11NA  agree or disagree it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life

Movies are one of the main forms of entertainment in modern society. Different movie influences people differently, therefore, what kind of movie is worth watching has became a wildly discussed topic among people. Some people argue that only the movies about real life are worth reading. However, in my opinion, valuable movies are limited within the realistic one. In fact, other kinds of movies such as science fiction movies and fairy tale movies are also valuable ones.

First of all, realistic things are not all the aspects we should be concerned with in our life. Actually, the unrealistic thought could be sued(used) to relax our nervous life. People are surrounded by all kinds of realistic things, such as making money, dealing with relations with different people(这句话读的怪怪的，可不可以改成dealing with different people among relations), working hard for individual promotions and so on. Most of us have experienced the tired caused by these real life issues. When you are really tired about the work on hand, what will you do? I think many people will choose to watch a science fiction movie or a fairy tale movie. At this time, seldom people will choose the real life movies, this is because they are too serious for people who would like to release themselves.

Moreover, I’d like to say that there are many important things in our life, such as moralities, emotions and spirits, which can be reflected not only buy(by) the movies about real life, but also by those imaginative movies. If you are a fun of movies, you will find that many unrealistic movies are on the morality and motional topics. They try to show people decent inspirit, love, and care, even though they have the background of science fiction or fairy tale. The famous movie Avatar, although describes the whole story in the future, are aims to show people that we should care about the world, pursue for peace, love and understanding people. So do other famous movies such as Star Wars and Lord of the Rings.

From the above analysis, we can see that there are many kinds of good movies which are worth watching besides the ones about real life. Although some movies such as science fiction movies and fairy tale movies are not related with reality very much, they can still be very meaningful and beneficial for people’s life.


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执着的丸子 发表于 2010-9-14 17:29

When people are hunting for a job, one important consideration is what kind of job should they (they should) choose, the one being high secure is usually with low paying, while(or) the one with high salary sometimes is easy to lose. Many people think that the first kind of job is better than the later one, however, I think it is too hasty to draw such a conclusion. In my opinion, what kind of job should one person take depends on his or her individual condition.

For the people who are pursuing for a peaceful and ordinary life, I think it is better for them to choose a high secure job, although the pay is generally low. This kind of people always hold the idea that the most important thing is not money but comfortable and relax. Therefore, the job with high secure is quite suitable for them. In fact, these people usually do not eager for much money. Take my parents as an example. Both of them are over 50 years old, the age and the health condition make them feel tired easily. I, the only child of them, have completed almost all the education, which cost most of their money(感觉这句定于从句可以换成so they no longer need to pay for my education. 从前文来看，毕业了所以不需要他们再支付学费了，减少了他们的负担). In addition, they have collection(collected，我查了下collect money是集资,筹资的的意思，感觉不太合适，不知换成earn如何？) enough money for their future life. Therefore, they don't have to make much money now, instead, they would like to enjoy a quite, slow and easy life. So if they plan to change their job, they definitely will choose one with a low paying but high secure.

However, for the people who are energetic and ambitious, is it better for them to choose the job with high salary but being easy to lose compared with the former one(?). In this society, the job with high salary is usually more exciting, difficult and challenging. This kind of job is possible to provide the employee more chance to promote and help them improve themselves (个人感觉有点冗长，不如换成promote themselves简洁点) in a relatively short time. The job as an internet engineer is a good example to illustrate this. Many missions included in their job need them to work fast and intensely, such as building a website, repair (repairing) a system destroyed by internet virus. Sometimes they even have to work all through the night, because time is money to the owners of these websites and systems. If they can not finish their job in a short time(前面出现了一次，可以换个词timely), they may be fired, in other words, their job is easy to lose. However, this kind of intense work will help these engineers improve their skill and experience fast. If they can solve many problems well, they can get a quick promotion. Moreover, this kind of job is very exciting, which interested many young people. Although this kind of job is easy to lose, people with energy and ambition can find another one, and take the former one as a valuable experience.

To sum up, I would like to say that it is hard to judge which kind of job mentioned above is better than the other. One job can be suitable for one kind of people but not for others. People should choose the proper kind of job base on their own conditions, such as their own expectation, age, financial condition and energy.
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