8月17日作业

SarahMUID: 2727281

Undeniably，both the telephone and the television have brought  such reversing effects in our daily life that hardly can one imagine what life would be like if these brilliant invetions had never emerged. However, if a comparison is in need, personally, televition has made more changes in our everyday life.
Considering the avanlance of information one can get from the large number and various fields of prigramms, television has a rather impressive advantage over the telephone in the case of the scope of information we can get. It is true that the emerge of telephone completely changed the way we communicate today and is definitly leading the major trend, with the decreasing utilisation of  mails, which is comparably unconvinient now. However, my point is, first think about what group of people that the user of a telephone contact with. Yes, mostly friends, family or colleages. We use telephone to communicate with someone who is far away to keep our relationship valid, or for an emergency situation or just for a easy and relaxing chat. But we can see that the scope of people we reach by the telephone is kind of narrow, so as the scope of infomation we make use of.However, when one turns on the television, the science programms , the history programms , the news programms and some special programms teaching you how to cook , how to do a liitle magic to the ordinary things, revising them into some special and useful new creative tools. We can learn a variety of things from the television. So, television has more effects on our ordinary life.
What's more, news that the scientists are working on  developing a new technic that make people can make visuable phonecall through the television is not that new to everyone. So we can expect that soon in the future, we can see our friends in real on the television screen and we can talk to them derictly. Isn't it exciting? With maturer and more creative technology developed on base of the televisions,we can expect them to provide us  more shocks and convinience.
Nothing is impossible, the motto of this rapid changing world, indicates that we can expect more and more excitements in our life.So watch on your

高小鱼UID: 2714619

这位同学的作文，想来没有认真写，我差点没法改下去。。

拼写错误太多；语法错误太多；最后一段只写了一半。。。

如果想认真考的话，下次的作文认真一点吧

SarahMUID: 2727281

8月24日作业~
Being young means we have more time and opportunities to experience comparably more colorful jobs than when we are in middle age or even older. To try different jobs when we are young will not only help cater to the demand of the increasingly fierce society but also help elevate ourselves to new heights.

Nowadays, what kind of talented person is in most demand, specialists or generalist? Of course the generalist, the fully developed talents. And, as is known to all, most of what we learn from the university is basic theoretical knowledge, having no close relation to the practical jobs in the real work-environment. What's more, generally, hardly can a single job train one's various abilities in all aspects. To be a salesman, one can practice his communication ability, to be a supervisor of some big scale activities, one can develop his leadership, to be a volunteering teacher, one can train their patience and the spirit of sacrifice. Therefore, to be fully developed and to be more competitive when hunting for jobs, one needs to take various kinds of jobs to be well prepared.

What's more, experiencing diverse jobs can help build up our own ability and lift ourselves to new heights. Dealing with different jobs means dealing with different tasks from which we can learn different skills; dealing with different jobs means coping with distinct people from various backgrounds, with an abundant of different characters, thoughts and belief. When contacting with people of different cultural background or different fields, one can obtain not only the experience of them, but also learn to tolerant and accept different kinds of character, which is critical for one's social communication skills and can help them to  enlarge their scope of relationships. For example, when one works with lawyers, they tend to be very smart and logical, but maybe harsh towards other issues, however, if one works with a group of teachers full of love, they are normally very genail and have better communication skills and patience.

In one word, taking different kinds of jobs barely has drawbacks, on the contrast, it is beneficial for us to be better prepared for the future and our inner world.

SundayerUID: 2855409

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

Being young means we have more time and opportunities to experience comparably more colorful jobs than when we are in middle age or even older. [url=]To try different jobs when we are young[/url][S1] will not only help cater to the demand of the increasingly fierce society but also help elevate ourselves to new heights.
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Nowadays, what kind of talented person is in most demand, specialists or generalist? Of course the generalist, the fully developed talents. And, as is known to all, most of what we learn from the university is basic theoretical knowledge, having no close relation to the practical jobs in the real work-environment. What's more,[url=] generally, [/url][S2] hardly can a single job train one's various abilities in all aspects. To be a salesman, one can practice his communication ability, to be a supervisor of some big scale activities, one can develop his leadership, to be a volunteering teacher, one can train their patience and the spirit of sacrifice. Therefore, to be fully developed and to be more competitive when hunting for jobs, one needs to take various kinds of jobs to be well prepared.! |2 A: i, i2 X% A) [" ^9 J% A, Hto b to


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to be …. One can … 感觉有点口语化，而且用的过多了，没产生那种效果、、
topic中讲的是young people 。。你为什么不用young people，而用 one 呢，one太大，有走题之嫌、、
What's more, experiencing diverse jobs can help build up our own ability and lift ourselves to new heights. Dealing with different jobs means dealing with different tasks from which we can learn different skills; dealing with different jobs means coping with distinct people from various backgrounds, with an abundant of different characters, thoughts and belief. When contacting with people of different cultural background or different fields, one can obtain not only the experience of them, but also learn to tolerant and accept different kinds of character, which is critical for one's social communication skills and can help them to  enlarge their scope of relationships. For example, when one works with lawyers, they tend to be very smart and logical, but maybe harsh towards other issues, however, if one works with a group of teachers full of love, they are normally very genail（genial） and have better communication skills and patience.'
你很喜欢用动作做主语啊，可以用，但是不能全篇都这样子丫、、应该多注意下句式变化、
In one word, taking different kinds of jobs barely has drawbacks, on the contrast(contrary), it is beneficial for us to be better prepared for the future and our inner world.
当谈到Agree or Disagree 的时候，一般而言都会有一部分AG，一部分人DIS，为了保险起见，最好两方面尽量兼顾，主体说自己的主要观点、、

[S1]直接写different jobs。。其实有些动词可以用名词代替、



[S2]他的存在有些别扭，尽量不要多个修饰副词罗列

SundayerUID: 2855409

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

Being young means we have more time and opportunities to experience comparably more colorful jobs than when we are in middle age or even older. [url=]To try different jobs when we are young[/url][S1] will not only help cater to the demand of the increasingly fierce society but also help elevate ourselves to new heights.
这里写的try different jobs 的好处，间接说明你倾向于这个，不过我建议你表明自己观点的时候直接一些。。
Nowadays, what kind of talented person is in most demand, specialists or generalist? Of course the generalist, the fully developed talents. And, as is known to all, most of what we learn from the university is basic theoretical knowledge, having no close relation to the practical jobs in the real work-environment. What's more,[url=] generally, [/url][S2] hardly can a single job train one's various abilities in all aspects. To be a salesman, one can practice his communication ability, to be a supervisor of some big scale activities, one can develop his leadership, to be a volunteering teacher, one can train their patience and the spirit of sacrifice. Therefore, to be fully developed and to be more competitive when hunting for jobs, one needs to take various kinds of jobs to be well prepared.

to be …. One can … 感觉有点口语化，而且用的过多了，没产生那种效果、、
topic中讲的是young people 。。你为什么不用young people，而用 one 呢，one太大，有走题之嫌、、
What's more, experiencing diverse jobs can help build up our own ability and lift ourselves to new heights. Dealing with different jobs means dealing with different tasks from which we can learn different skills; dealing with different jobs means coping with distinct people from various backgrounds, with an abundant of different characters, thoughts and belief. When contacting with people of different cultural background or different fields, one can obtain not only the experience of them, but also learn to tolerant and accept different kinds of character, which is critical for one's social communication skills and can help them to  enlarge their scope of relationships. For example, when one works with lawyers, they tend to be very smart and logical, but maybe harsh towards other issues, however, if one works with a group of teachers full of love, they are normally very genail（genial） and have better communication skills and patience.'
你很喜欢用动作做主语啊，可以用，但是不能全篇都这样子丫、、应该多注意下句式变化、
In one word, taking different kinds of jobs barely has drawbacks, on the contrast(contrary), it is beneficial for us to be better prepared for the future and our inner world.
当谈到Agree or Disagree 的时候，一般而言都会有一部分AG，一部分人DIS，为了保险起见，最好两方面尽量兼顾，主体说自己的主要观点、、

[S1]直接写different jobs。。其实有些动词可以用名词代替、



[S2]他的存在有些别扭，尽量不要多个修饰副词罗列