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1# muyitong Advertising is full around our life, in the street, shoppinghall, TV, even on the wall of the office building. Sensuously ,we cannot go out of the advertising at all. In the end, people can only live in this atmosphere, let us thinking about that if the advertising can domestrate the reality of goods.最好首段就要提出你明确的观点 同意 还是 反对Some people suggest that most advertisements exaggerate their products’ effect, but I think we can’t make this conclusion simply. The advertising maker and productor hope it could exhibit the best side of the product, which will make the product out of other same types. But there’s no marks indict that the advertising is cheaping people. Although it may have some pictures and sentences which entice people to buy it, the final decision should be made by the customers themeselves. Each company do hope the advertisement could absorve more customers, if they make people think that the reality of the goods is better than what the advertisement said, then are they find someway to kill themselves?  最好别这么说您这段要说啥?On the other hand, there are hundreds of advertisements are more extended, even some has these situation that misleading viewer and deceiving pople. For example, it has several details which the production is not have, but to occour in the advertising. Others it said there are so many effections that the production does not have at all. In fact, if the effection of the advertising is very different from the production, the productors would make some obvious marks on it. Otherwise, according to the Advertising Law, these types of advertisements might be banned.Personally，I bielieve that although single advertisement could mislead the consumers, most of the advertisements are reality. However, people should learn about how to judge the reality of the advertisement. Of course the advertisement which deceive people blatantly should be punished by the law.字数够没够 我没数 感觉有点不够还有就是 观点不明确 这个很重要论证也比较弱 没有说服力 例子没有 语言上没有什么问题 挺好的多看范文吧