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8月29号写的作文——Do you agree or disagree that improving schools is the most important factor to successful development of country?

I agree that improving schools is the most important factor to successful development of country.

Above all, improving schools means improving the essential part of national education.On some degree, improving schools is rebuilting the future of a country. For instance ,after the World-War-Two, the rebuilding of schools and education scheme is the first step of the reconstruction in Japan and German. Then a growing number of creations and inventions emerged, while famous scientists and scholars come out by companion.The economy resurgence of these two countries prove that the action is likely and timely. So we also have reasons to believe that this is a powerful demonstration of the statement, improving schools is the vital element to develop a country.

On the other hand, improving schools means a growing number of opportunities for the prospective students who are dropping out and quitting school. As the booming increase of population reproduce and the widening gap between the rich and the poor, more and more schools are needed, especially better and stronger schools. So many school-aged children of peasants' and unemployed workers' are half-self-study, or even totally leaving school for life. We need improve schools to give them a hand, which is trend and an actual requirement. For example, the Hope Project in China mainland has been established and evolved for decades, which has the purpose of helping the dropouts back to schoolyard. More programmes like that is what the country need.

And my third reason , a better school always means a better schooling. That means a better school always provide us to own better job opportunities, to have a wider horizon, to lead a happier life. The happiness of one indivdual relate to one family, while the happiness of millions individuals relate to a icountry.

In conclusion, human society base on belief , love etc. some essential qualities and knowledge. All of these are learned, and most of person beings do the learning by system from school. It means opportunities, happiness and the strength of a country, especially the future of a country. Improving schools is meanful and there is no doubt that it is the most important factor to successful development of country.

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独立： 8月30号写的的作文

       Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Some people think making sure that others (influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed, if you do not do this, you won’t have a successful life.

I won't agree with the statement, especially the latter part going like "if you do not do this, making suring the influential or potential people know about your strengths, you won't have a successful life". It's seemed too absolutised to adress such a hypothesis.

First of all, be known or not is not the essential part of becoming successful. Why not have some patient and wait for a take-off but go after a swarm? It is the talent and strengths one processes which lead people a successful life rather than the known part.Through innumerable successful persons, the moments of the distinguished capacities being showed around the world are often after their big shots.Such as Lincon, whose strengths in political and military come out step by step after he became a president, especially during the Civil War,is a great example.  

Another reason is the well-known accoplishments always attract envies and being aroud with jealousy doesn't always lead us to a success. It means that the be-known things are double-edged sword, while they attain both fine and bad rusults. It means though it is quite crucial being in admiration of bosses, you still will have and desire a brilliant future if you're not. Desite in movies or our real life, the talents and accomlishments are just the reasons that bad guys trap the young talents at moments. Strengths cause envy, and envy leads to troubles.

My third reason is it is a wide definition for "a successful life". We might not judge somebody else succeed by something it has or not.In my humble opinion, a hapyy life is the big success in life. Obviously, even though some influential people or potential emloyers know your strong points quite well, it is almost nothing to do with your happy family life directly.

Inconclusion, whereas we could explain "success" within a extrmely wide range, the hypothesis and conclusion in the title actually do not ralate to each other. And though with the secular definition, they don't process much surpport form each other. In a word, Success is complicated so that we might not tie it with some certain factor as well.

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作文给你改好啦~

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8月31日作文——Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.　　(Family)
I will give my vote to children. I prefer that children make their own choice.

First of all, for children, practising to make wisdom choices is quite an essential staff. Everyone has to make choices independently at last, which is not so easy that one might begin to practise as early as possible. And childhood seem to be a golden age. For instance, Jane Alan wrote in her autobiography, a passage effect to that children's choices at the beginning of a lifebreath, it is an original motive to make right choices that distinguish right from wrong. Not only will they Learning to make choice by  kids themselves always give the vital lessons that how to recognize, how to make a win-win situation, how to gain, how to pain. What is more, that teaches how to take the responsibilities.

On the other hand, to parents, this kind of parents' allowance shows seemingly supreme trust, respect and love. Children make mistakes, and most serious pains of parents' are the pain of their kids.  Hendrik von Loon said that:"Fear, I repeat it, is at the bottom of all intolerance." This is human nature. Therefore,supporting that children make choices by themselves shows big trust and big love.Eventually the self-determination kids will understand more and appreciate their parents much more.

Therefore my third reason is, it will improve the society atmosphere and family atmosphere more open , making-sense and reasonable. Parents respect kids, while kids thank moms and dads. It will gain a win-win pattern and will fill the whole family with understanding air, not to mention the tolerance and forgiveness.So does the society.Between former and latter generations in firms, government offices, studies, it would be more convenient and efficient.      

In conclusion, it worth trying that allow children to make their own choices rather than be decided by parents.

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3# superchaos 谢谢你的话~~改得真是超好的。。^^#

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5# 静和

楼主，没有9.1号的作文啊~

shadowranUID: 2864083

我也没看见9.1的独立，下次有机会再互改

静和UID: 2371073

我错了。。我没写。。谁来帮我改改0831的。。我改Yuki大姐的作文，坚持到两点多也按时改了。。她却。。呜呜