sarahshen0120的作文本，求高手猛拍~！

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这篇是第一篇写的作文，也没限时，然后一不小心就写多了。字数已经是个问题了……=_=#

由于没听过写作的班没什么材料所以就写了OG后面TEST1的题目~~
请各位带着板砖不要客气的猛拍~！！！
9.18考试，现在开始每天一篇做练习了。


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Topic:Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Whichof these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examplesto support your opinion.

Youngadults usually define themselves as the innovators, explorers and reformers.Some of them call for freedom and independence such as living alone from theirparents as soon as possible, while some others prefer conventional life style.I concede that living with families for a longer time, to some extent, hascertain advantages. However, I insofar agree that young adult should experiencethe independent life from their parents under the prerequisite that they’reable to take care of themselves rather than be independent “as soon as possible”.
Understandably,majority of young adults who choose to live with families for a longer timegenerally take financial stress into their account. Rent, daily necessities, monthlyfees including taxes are essential costs in family life which would be afinancial and mental strain for most low-income young adults. Meanwhile, toparents, especially in countries like China or Japan, educating a rational andwell-behaved grow-up is the ultimate goal of life. Parents’ rationale providesthem an excellent chance to supervise young adults and keep them from many temptationssuch as drugs, gambling and so forth. Moreover, certain amount of quality timewith family members diminishes one’s pressure.
Onthe other hand, despite of risks in financial crisis and self-lost, many youngadults insist on moving out as soon as possible for sake of freedom and independence.
Frommy perspective, living alone foster responsibility, survival skills anddecrease the number of conflicts between two generations under the same roof.Firstly, living along require a sense of responsibility, for young adults arein charge of entirely everything in their life. For instance, guarantee thehouse cleaning, do the weekly laundry, cook meals oneself, pay the bills intime, etc. Each individual has substantial or total responsibility for theevents and circumstances that befall them in their life. By living alone, youngadults are able to learn to fulfill their obligation that might occur to themlater as being a mother or a father. Learning something by hand in most casesis better than just being an observer.



Secondof all, living alone presents young adults reality. For supporting example, oneneed look no further than buying cooking materials in markets. Picking meat,vegetables or fruits contains a large amount of common knowledge. Assuming oneis shopping for fruits, banana with little black dots is sweeter than those notbut sweet ones are detrimental to human health. Mango and litchi are delicious butone should eat neither of them in summer since they can easily cause infection.Before living alone, young adults are taken care of by the elders who knowenough common knowledge imperative in daily life. In order to survive, oneneeds to learn how to tell particular vegetables, how to compose a healthydiet, how to distinguish varies meat for different dishes. In the course oflearning those skills, one has gradually mastered the survival methods.
What’smore, living alone can diminish the number of conflicts between twogenerations. When making a decision, young adults tend to take risks while theelders prefer careful plan, different attitudes impede decision-making andeffective communication.
The twogenerations even hold contradictory views on respects such as religious belief,moral standard and life styles. Both sides vie to get their message heard,which readily injure the relationship between them.
Insum, I agree with the statement that young adults should live alone, but underthe prerequisite that they can take care of themselves and be able to controltheir own lives.