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改作文迟了这么多  实在不好意思~！

看了你的修改 获益匪浅！  多谢多谢~~！

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0913 daily writing  

看好哈～ 第一篇是独立写作，第二篇是综合写作～

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很厉害了 几乎没啥问题

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我的综合也写完了 请指教哦
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继续独立写作  9月14

2009. 10. 17 NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.

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2010年9月14日  
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9.14 改

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20# luoln


2009. 10. 17


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.
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Movies and televisions are common forms of media that almost every one watches them to receive some information. For this influence, people who work out the films, advertisements or programs have to consider the principle that the public can accept. So there is no doubt that in the scene, good people are being rewarded and bad people have to be punished finally.

It is the nature of human beings that to be a kind person is an intrinsic behavior. Audience tend to prefer a favorable ending for what the makers appeal to fill the requirements. In the cartoon Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, the kin-hearted princess who treats everyone so warmly, even talk politely with the old witch who gives her the poisonous apple to eat, is a feature of beauty and virtue. She goes through her hard time and in the end have a happy life with the prince in the castle. Relatively, we can see that in the series Superman, all villains can be discovered by Superman and then desert the punishment. Countless of examples can be recited to show that there is a rule in the story told in films or television. People are always like to bless a couple stepping into happy marriage like the princess and the prince, and also they bluff other bad persons that Superman will fight for justice. How far-reaching the principle medias offer to influence people.


When I was a little girl, for the reason of limited age, few people I had ever contacted and little experience I had ever had. Every time I watched TV, one of the questions that I would always like to ask my parents was that: who was the bad person in this show? My mom usually told me, " honey, look at the scene carefully, the man who is killed by the other man with the sword is the guilty." So in my memory of childhood, I recognize the immoral people or the crimes easily, depending on whether they get a punishment or when they are dead every one cheers. By the influence from my childhood to my adolescence as well as my growing up years, I have never changed my standards of judgment for kindness and evilness.

To sum up, when observing the attitudes people give to the shows of which ending is in the rule that good people are praised and bad people are punished, we can conclude that that kinds of shows are in our range of access.

楼主语言不错。觉得第二段的论证可以再深入一点，说，电影，电视节目会对孩子的成长造成很大的影响。所以，影视节目应该善恶分明。

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想问LZ为啥改了我们组另外一个不改我的TAT
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