剑桥雅思3作文练习2（求拍）

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剑桥雅思3， test2 中两篇作文，求拍

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From the charts, it can be seen that Britain is the biggest consumer on the six goods, personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys, and photographic film. Moreover, except tennis racquets, Britain spent far more money on the consumer goods than the other three countries, Italy, France and Germany.

Compared with Britain, Germany spent much less on consumer goods. It spent the least money on consumer goods, except tennis racquets, among the four countries. In the case of tennis racquets, France spent a little less than Germany.

Italy and France were middle spenders. In the case of personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, Italy spends more than France. As for CDs, photographic films, France spent more than Italy. Italy and France spent the same on toys.

It can be concluded that there were many differences among the four countries in the consumption of the six consumer goods listed above.

2. As the developing of technology goes, a lot of traditional skills and ways of life die out. Are there any necessities for us to try and keep them alive? Some people think it is pointless. However, in my opinion, some of the traditional skills and ways of life should be kept alive, for they represent the culture, while some others can be replaced.

Along with the developing of science and new technologies, our lives have been greatly improved. For example, it is easier for us to connect with our friends by using computers and the internet. Therefore, less and less people would like to write letters to their friends, which is common before the invention of the internet.

During the process of developing, many traditional skills are replaced by modern ones. Take the typing machine for example, they are replaced by computers, which are more convenient, easier to use. In my opinion, things, like computers, are the improvement of our whole society. Therefore, they can be the replacement of the old machines and technologies. But there are still lots of traditional skills and ways of life should be protected. For example, the traditional celebrations should be passed through generations. Many young people even do not know Chongyang, one of the traditional days in China. Since those traditional celebrations are an important part of our traditional culture, they should be kept alive. Moreover, the traditional celebrations can absorb in a big amount of capital to our country, and improve the development of economics.

In conclusion, although many traditional skills and ways of life seem not necessary for our modern lives during the development of technology, we should protect some of them, because they are part of our culture. Meanwhile, some of the traditional technologies should certainly be replaced by the newer ones to improve our lives.


看了剑三后面的范文，觉得大作文的思路不可以理解，雅思大作文的重点是什么呢？覆盖全部题干？还是针对中心点，提出自己的意见？

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As the developing (development)of technology goes, a lot of(an increasingly number of) traditional skills and ways of life die out. Are there any necessities for us to try and keep them alive? Some people think it is pointless. However, in my opinion, some of the traditional skills and ways of life should be kept alive, for they represent(reflect the enssence of our culture) the culture, while some others can be replaced.


Along with the developing (development)of science and new technologies(technological innovations), (the standard of )our lives have been greatly improved(enhanced). For example, it is easier for us to connect with our friends by using computers and the internet(the information high way).Therefore, less and less people would like (are willing )to write letters to their friends, which is common before the invention of the internet(Internet).

During the process of developing（重复）, many traditional skills are replaced by modern ones. Take the typing machine for example, they are replaced by computers, which are more convenient, easier to use. In my opinion, things（modern equipment), like computers, are the improvement of our whole society.(I my view,such modern equipments as computers,whcih are utilized by we humen being from agriculture to space exploration,can actually boost our society's advancement.)Therefore, they can be the replacement of the old machines and technologies. (Therefore,there are no substitutes ,just like traditional tools,for computers to aquire so much success in our history.这些是不是应该和上面一段和在一起）But there are still lots of traditional skills and ways of life should be protected. For example, the traditional celebrations (mores)should be passed through generation by generation. Many young people(youngsters) even do not know Chongyang, one of the traditional days in China. Since those traditional celebrations are an important part of our traditional culture, they should be kept alive. Moreover, the traditional celebrations can absorb in a big amount of capital to our country(traditional celebrations lead our country to acquire great financial interests, and improve the development of economics(improve 这个词用的人太多，换boost,enhance,promote).

In conclusion, although many traditional skills and ways of life seem not necessary(seem to be unnecessary,如果用redundant替换更好) for our modern lives during the development of technology（重复）, we should protect some of them, because they are part of our culture. Meanwhile, some of the traditional technologies should certainly be replaced by the newer ones to improve our lives.
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