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9月23日交

09.04.03NA   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers' salaries.

Admittedly, increasing teachers’ salaries contributes to the improvement of the education in a country, but it is definitely not the best way. There are so many aspects of reasons that lead to the result of education level in a country which are much more important than increasing teachers’ salaries.

To begin with, realizing the goal of education for all and constantly raising the level of education call for economic growth and social progress. The economic base determines the super structure. Education is an investment and it needs money for operation. The poorer a country is the less money it would spare on education. Just take the developing countries in Africa for example. There are still tens of millions of people in the countryside who do not yet have enough food and clothing let alone receiving education. So, in this case, merely improving teachers’ salaries will not do any good.

Moreover, salary can easily be raised, but talented teachers are hard to find. So, the emergency is to improve teachers’ quality. Teachers' training and methods are necessary to be advanced in order to improve the quality of education. There is no denying that teachers affect students a lot. Much can be learned from a good teacher. Take myself for example. I have gone through primary school, middle school, high school and now university. In our country, college teachers’ salary is much higher than a primary school. However, the number of teachers that could be marked with a good teacher in primary school is much more than those in college. It is not because of the different level of salary or education of teachers, but their mount of devotion to the career as a teacher. To improve the education of the whole society do need to change those bad relationships between students and teachers which call for much more devotion of teachers. Certainly it is necessary for us to improve teachers’ training and methods.

Finally, family education is also essential. Parents share the longest period with children. Parents’ behavior, attitude and education background unquestionably have much effect on their children. For instance, it is hard to find those children whose parents have a high education level receive little education. Also, it is much more difficulty for those children who live in a poor family and the parents cannot read or write to go to the college. Indeed, it is parents’ attitude towards education that makes the difference. Those poor parents with less education usually live a hard life and they cannot realize the importance of their children’ education, so they pay no attention to it.

To sum up, there are many important aspects need to be improved rather than only raising teacher’s salary in order to improve the quality of education in a country.

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Admittedly, increasing teachers’ salaries contributes to the improvement of the education in a country, but it is definitely not the best way. There are so many aspects of reasons that lead to the result of education level in a country which are much more important than increasing teachers’ salaries.
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To begin with, realizing the goal of education for all and constantly raising the level of education call for economic growth and social progress. The economic base determines the super structure. Education is an investment and it needs money for operation. The poorer a country is the less money it would spare on education. Just take the developing countries in Africa for example. There are still tens of millions of people in the countryside who do not yet have enough food and clothing let alone receiving education. So, in this case, merely improving teachers’ salaries will not do any good. (讲得很好~)

|Moreover, salary can easily be raised, but talented teachers are hard to find.（论点很好~） So, the emergency is to improve teachers’ quality. Teachers' training and methods are necessary to be advanced in order to improve the quality of education. There is no denying that teachers affect students a lot. Much can be learned from a good teacher. Take myself for example.（可以换个表达方式） I have gone through primary school, middle school, high school and now university. In our country, college teachers’ salary is much higher than a primary school. However, the number of teachers that could be marked with a good teacher in primary school is much more than those in college. It is not because of the different level of salary or education of teachers, but their mount of devotion to the career as a teacher.（很精彩） To improve the education of the whole society do need to change those bad relationships between students and teachers which call for much more devotion of teachers. Certainly it is necessary for us to improve teachers’ training and methods.（例子和论点好像有些不合~）
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Finally, family education is also essential. Parents share the longest period with children. Parents’ behavior, attitude and education background unquestionably have much effect on their children. For instance, it is hard to find those children whose parents have a high education level receive little education. Also, it is much more difficulty for those children who live in a poor family and the parents cannot read or write to go to the college. Indeed, it is parents’ attitude towards education that makes the difference. Those poor parents with less education usually live a hard life and they cannot realize the importance of their children’ education, so they pay no attention to it. （例子说得好像有些太极端了也不太普遍）

To sum up, there are many important aspects need to be improved rather than only raising teacher’s salary in order to improve the quality of education in a country.

LZ无论是用词还是行文结构都很棒~（羡慕啊~）很值得我学习
但感觉有些例子有些牵强或是不够贴切~~
有些句子感觉读起来不太顺畅~
希望下次LZ能写得更好^0^

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9月25日交
09.01.17 NA   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
In fact, a lack of understanding concerning advertising has often let it to be target of public criticism. Some people argue that the cultivation of unhealthy eating habits mostly due to advertising. Personally, I think bad eating habit is ingrained and it has nothing to do with advertising but everything to do with the family environment, local culture and personal experience.

To begin with, we have, it seems (though maybe we'd never thought about it), been brought up to certain eating habits no matter good or bad. There is no denying that food cooked by our mothers is special to us though maybe it tastes bad for someone else. But we like it. That is because we are familiar with it and we have learned to appreciate it since we are little babies. We can easily find many examples to support it. My uncle does not like take breakfast and often eat more in the supper meal. So is his wife that is my ant. Therefore, they usually prepare very simple breakfast and splendid dinner. For example, my uncle just take a bottle of milk and some piece of toast bread for breakfast, sometimes even just an apple. Their children grow up in this kind of family; there is no surprise that they have no taste for breakfast. Children can easily pick up their parents' eating habits. Therefore if parents constantly munch on snacks or eat improperly, their children may feel that it's acceptable to do the same.

Moreover, in recent years, some anthropologists who study eating habits in different societies have argued that it is never useful to ask question about one item lifted out of its cultural context. There are totally different eating customs throughout the world. It is generally believed that Chinese like to supply more salt to their foods, American are more enjoyed with fried food and spices would have more influence on the kinds of food prepared by Indian. Nowhere is this impatience more evident than in American eating habits. Sitting down to a leisurely meal seems to be a luxury. While the French are more likely to opt for a romantic dinner lasting for two hours or more. Consequently, people from different countries differ a lot in eating habits including those unhealthy ones.

Finally, one’s experiences also influence his eating habits a lot. When people feel under stress, they would be wise to shift eating habits. Although we all know that smoking has a great influence on our health, we also turn to smoking when we are depression. And when her son was killed in an auto accident Mrs Stevenson drank a lot of whiskey every day to try to drown her sorrows in it. It is also common to find high school students and busy workers just eating hamburgers and fries because they don’t have much time saved for lunch. And it is also true that poor dietary habits are more likely among children in lower social groups.

To sum up, actually eating habits can vary a good deal among people from different counties, diverse family and those with unlike experience. It is easy for one to slip into bad eating habits as a result of hopelessness and influences from the culture and family environment. Advertising may has certain effect on people’s eating habit, but it is certainly not the most important factor.

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