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发表于 2010-9-6 22:39:05 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
我的作文比较弱智型望大家见谅.  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win . Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people may think a game is interesting as they win it , while others may enjoy simply to play . If ask me my view , I will say I just like playing game and  I appreciate the game procedure for several reasons. Let me tell you why .


Above most things, people can make a lot of friends with various background through playing a game  with others, and it has nothing to do with win things. When people plan to play a game  ,such as a volleyball game ,a ping-pong competition or a card game , they  will bring their  own friends to make the game more intensified and make the atmosphere more alive . Thus , there will be more chance for  them to make new friends. In a conclusion , the chance for making friends is a crucial factor that I like playing game  .


Playing game can not only help us  broaden our cycle by making friends , but also can help us  have in-depth knowledge of our friends by contacting with them .  In peacetime ,we may be all busy with working or studying  , therefore , have no time to exchange information , idea and thoughts .  Taking some time off for a game  can help us to relax and to communicate ,as a result , our friendships will be strengthened . Take my experience as an example , when I was in high school , I like dancing a lot , while I don’t know someone who have the same interest with me so I have to practice dancing alone . But , at a interval of a volleyball game , I chat with my friend Emma .we talked about our hobby besides volleyball ,and we found wonderfully that we both like dancing . After that time ,we always practice dancing together and at last be a couple of best friends.




Moreover , I think playing a game is fun because we  can get rid of all annoyance . As a university students with a dream to study abroad , I have to make full use of time and devote myself to study.  Sometimes , in order to be a better applicant ,I will do an internship to broaden my experience. When I feel bored or tired  , I will plan a card game with my friends or my sisters . Soon there will be laugher and voices .
Undoubtedly that wining the game will make me happy , but it is not the only reason . A game can bring us a lot of fun ,during which success and failure are non-essential . In a indifferent society , a opportunity for  disinterested communication  is precious , playing a game is obviously a good chance for us to off guard to have pure happiness.
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发表于 2010-9-7 23:44:16 |只看该作者
9.7作业,这篇憋的好惨啊~,憋出来的惨不忍睹,大家将就着看~~~
In 1996, there was a survey conducted by the World Professional an Executive Association revealed that 78.5% of the successful people make big choices all by their own , while 21.5% of the high achievers make eventful decisions by asking for their parents’ opinion. Of course, I am one of the majorities .


For one thing, the views of parents are not always true , some of them even kind of outdated. Parents are more or less have their subjective wishes for us , which are not always adapt to the tendency to the social society . For example , my friend Sammy, her mother want her to be a financial analyst ,however, the financial crisis make this kind of job hard to find. If one’s situation like my friend’s , I suggest that he/she should make a decision without asking for his/her parent’s opinion ,so that he/she could based on his/her own interest and the trend of the present day without hesitation .


And, making choices by ourselves will help us cultivate our ability to analyze and look ahead. As we all know , before making a decision or choice , we will have to analyze many stuffs ,such as data, some reports , even some people’s dictation . If we do this process of analysis all by ourselves , our analytic abilities will affirmatively be upgraded.  Additionally , we will have to make choices with expectation . For instance , financial investors need to expect which one of the current project has the smallest risks and the highest profit ,and then make the wisest choice . In this procedure , investors will gain more and more experience by making different choices facing various situation , thus their abilities of foresight will absolutely increased.



Undoubtedly , asking our parents for help may be safer for us because they have more life experience. With more life experience , they may had went through what we are going through , therefore , they can help us to make the best choice . Even they didn’t have the same experience with us , they may have more mature or complete perspective which can assist us in making decisions.

In a conclude , a child should learn to make choices by himself/herself . As it is known to us , making choice independently has lots of positive impact on our life . We should learn to grow up ,to face unknow.

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发表于 2010-9-9 22:07:01 |只看该作者
It is undeniable that movies have already participated one part of our life . Every year the movie industry make billions of dollars of margin . Are they all come from life-taught  movie? In other words , are all the customers only choose to watch movies that can teach us about life ? Apparently , no . There are many other kinds of movies worth to watch , such as comedy , animation , and science fiction film .

To start with ,  comedy can bring us something that life  movie cannot bring . As is known to us , life movie always reflect our real life , which is familiar to us , but kind of boring . We may have something in common with the character , whose courage and hardworking foster us to keep chasing our dream . However , sometimes , we don’t want to experience the “ real world” in the movie , we just want to have a cup of coffee , laughing when the character make faces or  make a show of himself . It isn’t worth watching ? Imagine that you have a whole day of working or study , then a comedy was broadcasted on the screen ,which is full of joke and make you cant stop laughing , will you forget all the tiredness ?

Also , science fiction film is worth watching for a large number of people . For the science’s and technology’s sake, there are many things we can not experience in our real life. Science fiction film can let us get in the future life or space life. I remember several month ago , I went to the movie centre to watch the 3-D movie called Avatar . I was totally appealed by the amazing scene and felt myself was at the Pandora. Everything seems to like in front of me , I can touch them anytime . I even feel kind of scared because the monster seems to run towards me. I have to admit that the science fiction film is another type of movie that can bring us to the scene designed by those talented and creative director.  


Undoubtedly , movies about real live are worth watching , but it is strict to say that they are the only type of movie worth watching . As stated above, science fiction and comedy also can bring us a lot of fun .

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发表于 2010-10-2 23:39:16 |只看该作者
1002作业 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress?

Obviously, in many cases ,staying alone is a good way to relieve stress. Because we don't have to endure the pressure of dealing with people. However, it is a little bit absolute to say that spending time a lone is the best way to relieve pressure.


First of all, spending time alone while a person is under immense pressure may not help him to release and sometimes even increase the pressure on him.  For some people or people in particular situation, staying alone will cause their cranky imagine. For example, pregnant women, if they always staying alone with random thinking, they are prone to have depression. And there will be bad results for some particular people ,too. It is known to us that when we face pressure alone, we will feel more weak, thus contribute to adding our feeling of pressure and helpless. And for some one who is introverted and pessimistic , that will cause unthinkable consequence. Thus, spending time alone to ease pressure can't work in some cases.


Moreover, in general,staying alone is not the best way to release stress.  As we all experienced, we may want to talk with our friends about all of our stuffs, including of course our pressure, our puzzle. Undeniably, this is a good way to relieve stress. Because we can reveal our idea to our friends ,therefore, they can give us advice and comfort us. Taking myself as an example, last semester I was preparing for the GMAT. To be candid, I was very nervous about that test , because GMAT is acknowledged as one of the hardest exam.  As the exam getting close , I feel more and more nervous and stressful. Then, a friend of mine, who had taken the test comfort me that this exam is not difficult if I don't imagine it to be hard, in turn, if I afraid of it , I certainly will be "defeated". Her words help me calmly face the examination. Therefore, talking with friends or family is a better way to ease our tension and pressure sometimes.


Staying alone, nevertheless, without disturbs from others , we can try our best to relax . We can do what we want to relieve pressure. Actually, talking about our problem with others will make us feel tired, while we need a true relax and rest when we face pressure. Under this circumstance, we may prefer to spend time alone.


In conclusion, the saying that spending time alone is the best way to ease pressure is relatively weak.

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发表于 2010-10-3 13:40:06 |只看该作者
我没办法上传附件,把修改后的10.2作业发到你的QQ邮箱了,注意查收^^

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发表于 2010-10-5 11:02:10 |只看该作者
4# zoe412 水平有限,如有不当,请谅解~

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