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9，Sep，2010
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agree or disagree it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life.


There are various entertainment ways in modern society, like listening music, doing sports, and watch movies, etc .Different people have their own preference. As far as for me, watching movies is my favorable things in daily life.

Firstly, watching movies can broad our views and open our mind. Every country has their own culture and civilization, which can be reflected by their movies. Seeing different movies, you could understand and find something different. Movie just like a window through which you can see the whole world.

Secondly, the contents of a movie often connect to the real world's life. The directors show their opinions and attitudes from the movies. You can learn and understand others' thoughts by watching a movie. This is an effective and interesting way to get closed to the real world. For instance, you could know what are the British sense of humor and the romantism of French. That is far interesting than any other ways to get in touched with the real life.

At the end, you also could find common topics with different people around the world. A lot of famous movies are known by the whole world, like Titanic, Harry Potter, Transformers, etc. By talking these famous movies, you can increase your interpersonal ability.

From above discussions ,we can easily get the conclusion that watching movies is beneficial to everyone.

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agree or disagree it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life.


There are various entertainment ways in modern society, like listening music, doing sports, and watch(watching) movies, etc .Different people have their own preference. As far as for me, watching movies is my favorable things(thing) in daily life.

Firstly, watching movies can broad our views and open our mind. Every country has their own culture and civilization, which can be reflected by their movies. Seeing different movies, you could understand and find something different. Movie just like (likes)a window through which you can see the whole world.

Secondly, the contents of a movie often connect to the real world's life. The directors show their opinions and attitudes from (in)the movies. You can learn and understand others' thoughts by watching a movie. This is an effective and interesting way to get closed to the real world. For instance, you could know what are the British sense of humor and the romantism of French. That is far interesting than any other ways to get in touched with the real life.

At the end, you also could find common topics with different people around the world. A lot of famous movies are known by the whole world, like Titanic, Harry Potter, Transformers, etc. By talking these famous movies, you can increase your interpersonal ability.

From above discussions, we can easily get the conclusion that watching movies is beneficial to everyone.

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9.11 Government should more support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities, such as swimming pool or play ground;


It is generally accepted that our society has been dramatically changed with the economic development.New technology makes our life more convineous.Large commercial buildings, supermarkets, parks,swimming pools, and all kinds of other life facilities have been built in the recent decades.Compared with these material properties,the steps to construct spiritual property is slower.People often complain that they could not find a good way to relax their minds.Therefore,when government keep to increase the prosperity of ecomonic,they should also pay attention to flarish citizens' spiritual life.Building some art museums and music concerts are all good advices to improve our spiritual life.


Everyone knows that arts could contribute to people's psychology health.Listening music,painting and dancing all can cultivate people's spiriture. For example,listening music can easily relax one's pressure.You can see that many people use MP3 to listen music everywhere.However, the common music halls are fewer.Goverment has the responsibility to build some music halls.Then,the citizens could have more chances to listen music concerts together.


At the same time,many parents have no idea where they can go with their children during the weekends and holidays.It seems that they have no other places to go excepting parks or gyms.If there were some art or history museums in the city, parents would have more choice to go together with their children.


From what have been discussed above, it is advisable to support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities, such as swimming pool or play ground.

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9.11 Government should more support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities, such as swimming pool or play ground

It is generally accepted that our society is changing dramatically with the growth of the economic. New technologies make our life more convenient. Large commercial buildings, supermarkets, parks, swimming pools, and all kinds of facilities have been built in the recent decades. Compared with these material properties, the progress of pursuing the spiritual property is much slower. People often complain that they could not find a good way to relax their minds. Hence, when government keeps the prosperity of the ecomonic, it should also pay attention to the flourish of the spiritual lifes of citizens--Building art museums and concert halls could be a good suggestion.

Everyone knows that the arts contribute to people's psychological health. Listening to music, painting and dancing can cultivate people's spirits. For example, listening to music can easily relax one's pressure. You can see that people listen to music with MP3 players everywhere. However, the number of concert halls in the city is insufficient, and goverment has the responsibility to build more concert halls. The citizens could thus have more chances to listen to concerts together. Meanwhile, many parents have no idea where they can go with their children during the holidays. It seems that they have no other places to go except parks and gyms. If there were more art/history museums in the city, parents would have more choices for holiday-plans with their children.

From what have been discussed above, it is advisable to support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities, such as swimming pool or play ground.

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9.16 homework


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.

Everyone hopes that kind people could abtaion happiness and eveil people would be punished in the daily life.As what is shown in the movies and televisions,the endings of a story usually keep accordence with people's hopes.
First of all,in order to cater to public's expectations,movie editors and directors have to design the happy ending to good people and sad ending to bad ones.During our daily life,the people who are willing to help others are praised by everyone.In contrast,the ones who always keep distance with other people are usually not welcomed by public.For instance,a theif often get the most curses and everyone hope that he/she could be put into jails as soon as possible.Therefore,when a theif was shown in a movie,he/she usually was punished at the end.

Secondly,the contents of media like movies or televisions ofen have a direct impacts on public's attitudes,especially to young people.Positive story endings that like good people are rewarded will bring good effects to the society.For example,the image of heros like superman often encouraged children to help other peers.Try to have a think,if the superman were punished in television, how we would explain the reasons to our children?

From what have been discussed above，good people being rewarded and bad people being punished in movies and televisions are correct and normal.

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9.18 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sports teach
people more lessons about life


Life is fancinating because everyone could find something new and
different everyday.Reading books,chating with various people or doing
sports all contribute to teaching us experiences and lessons of our
life.However,it is not completely true to say that sports teach us
more lessons.

First of all,the main function of sports is to increase physical
healthy.In order to keep fit,people may choose to take exercise
during their spare time.But there are many people who didn't do
ansport in their daily lives.For these ones,how they obtain their own
life lessons? Obviously,they could get these knowledge from different
ways,like reading books in schools or working at job market.Seldom
people get their knowadges from sports.Only for those professional
athelets whose job is taking sports,life lessons may mainly have been
teached from sports.

Secondly,the lessons we got from sports is much less than other
activities,like reading books.Everyone widely accepted that reading
teaches us a lot about the world.Our ancestor record life experiences
and lessons in the books,which could instruct today people's
life.Reading these books could help people to avoid doing some
uncorrect things and make them understand the world more effectively
and quickly.

Life is meaningful.The people whom we met,the news which we touched
,the places where we arrived,all can afford life experiences to
us.One in word,all kinds of life experiences can teash us a lot of
lessons.Doing sport is just a so small piece of the whole life's big
cake.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.

With the development of our society, educational resources are more and more plentiful.Various classes are available to choose by teenagers.Neither art classes such as music and opera or sport classes like Gongfu increasingly developed in the recent years.Even some young students have participated two or three these interesting courses.As for me,I totally support that younger school students should take more art or music trainings during their school studies.

On one hand,art and music courses contribute to cultivate children's mental healthy.If a student just kept studing science, math,and language,he/she would get stupid and boring day by day.In contrast,art afford a new perspective to make student to recoganize this fancinating world,which is more interesting than the science or history courses.

On the other hand,studing art or music may provide more possible choices to students after they graduate from school.Some people are born music or art talents. For these people,the art courses are very important to develop their talents.Besides,some ones may have no interests to study science or language.But they could study other knowledge like music instead of science and language.

From what have been discussed above,we may easily draw the conclusion that cources like music and art are essential to young students' growth.