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After considering this very question for thousands of times,the famous person who I prefer asking is the minister of education.I have a question whether students could live outside when they study in school.Two years ago,some educational agencies prohibited students from living live outside without schools' permissions.They consider it will be safer for students to live in school.But some students believe these rules which limit their freedom are ridiculous.


In recent years, more and more students choose to live outside as they believe they will be much freer and control their part time more independently without schools’ managements.On one hand,the students who live outside also have better
conditions
than those in the schools.For instance,they do not need to finish the homework hurriedly before the time point when the light will be turned down every day.In addition, it will be more convenient for them to flexibly arrange their lives such as shopping,doing sports and studying.

On the other hand, some managers of the school's dormitory think it is not good for students to live outside.One of the problems is that the students who live outside will be more dangerous than before,for the students are often lack of awarenesses of safety.Therefore,some criminals will look for some students who live outside alone especially those who live alone,it’s much easier to rob them and they almost have no chance to seek for any
help.Only if the students who live together in an apartment, will they live more safely than others who live alone. Furthermore,another problem is that to rent an apartment might be a burden to a family. Consequently,the rent in big cities is always high that student who wants to live outside will have to pay much money to rent an apartment. Moreover,some students whose standards of their own families are poor will make their parents feel more tired than before,if they still insist on living outside stubbornly.At the same time, students who live outside will also be separated from their classmates.They will even have inadequate time to understand and communicate with others,which will cause a serious problem that they will lose friendship, an important thing in their lives.


All in all,there are still some students who prefer living outside,which
has become a heated topic.Seeing all these problems above, I would like to ask the minister of education whether students could choose to live outside instead of living in school.

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