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发表于 2010-9-21 17:17:48 |显示全部楼层

Government should more support art museum and music performance than recreational facilities, such as swimming pool or play ground.

I would agree with the statement that government should support art museum and music performance more than recreational facilities. With the development of modern society, people’s standard of living has been conspicuously improved. As a consequence, when people do not have to struggle with their survivals, they might pay more attention to their mental health. Art is actually the defining form of culture which would meet the publics’ demand.

First of all, people are tired of struggling with each other in order to gain more money, promotions, and fames etc. They might be lack of the capacity to appreciate the beauty of our lives. Actually, art could definitely help people to gain this capability to find the beauty. For example, when people entrance the art museum, they would be emerged in the artistic atmosphere. They make their intense emotion calm down, and forget endless allure of the physical world. Art works such as paintings, sculptures, and photographs would express the beauty sceneries to people and help them relieve pressure from fierce competition in the society. In addition, music performance could show beauty of our lives to people as well. Every time I was frustrated and angry, I would listen to one of the famous partitas, Ode of Joy, which was created by Beethoven. Then my heart was comforted by the music, and I would be hopeful for my lives and the world in my eyes are beautiful. Therefore, art could efficiently help people to relax themselves and improve people’s capability to find beauty of lives.

Furthermore, nowadays we evaluate the development of a country based on not only its economy and military power, but also the level of people’s happiness. Making more money might not be the deciding factor of the people’s happiness but a kind of satisfaction is indeed the crucial factor of happiness. In my opinion, the publics need art to fill with their vacant minds. As a consequence, art museum and music performance are playing a vital role in making people feel happy. One instance might illustrate this point profoundly. When people attend a concert, they might moved by the emotion expressed by the music. As if audiences are travelling with the musician, they experience the soft whisper of the brook, and strongly rhythm of the ocean, finally when the music performance is ended, there seems like to be kind of resonance among audiences and the musician. People could obtain the satisfaction from the art, which is essential key of the harmony of our society.

In summary, art could definitely help people to feel relax and improve mental health. Even though some fundamental recreational facilities such as swimming pools and play ground are need support from government, I think the advantages of developing art obviously outweigh recreational facilities.