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Some people argue that parents should help determined the future of their children, while other people don’t think so, they think that children allow to make their ownchoices. In my opinion, although children haven’t been grown up yet, they should have to handle their life by themselves, i.e. parents can make the dicision for one time, but they can not help their children for a whole lifetime.

For one thing, if parents help children to make a dicision for their universities of majors choices, which their kids are totally not interested in, that will bring bad results. My cousin is a vivid example. When she was twelve years old, her parents placed high hopes on her who was expected to be a university student . However, her study grades were not very good, in contrary, she loved painting and handcrafts making very much. At age 15, she failed the entrance exam to go to the high school, her parents felt very mad of her. That made her feel bad and unconfident. Then one day, her aunt come to her house and saw something she make by hands, she was surprised that my cousin was good at this kind of work. She introduced my cousin to a famous craftman in town, and found out that my cousin could learn the technology of the handcraft very quikly. And most important of all, she loved it. Then she was allowed to be an apprentice of the craftman. Now, she has been known in this field. And her parents also feel proud of her.

For another thing, parents may not take place of the children to make their own decision, but to educate their children to find the best way for their future by efficient guide mathods. Only children know themselves entirely can they master their own lives. There are lots of works parents should do. First of all, to observe children, and to know what they like or not. Then to find out which thing they would like to focus on most. After that, parents can talk to their kids that whether they like to go deeper for these things. It is the best way to communicate on time with each other. With this series of paperations, when it is time to make the kids’ own choices, they would not be hurried.

Admittedly, children have poor experiences to the world and society, and parents indeed should help their children. But it is harmful that parents want to control too much to their children’s future. Two outcomes would be caused, one is that children would rely on their parents excessively, the other is that due to the wrong dicision, children would not believe their parents, and don’t try hard to carry their points. We all never want to see that above.

All in all, children do have their own thoughts, and parents should take more time to pay attention their kids, and be patient to guide them instead of interfere them with their own future.



(501words, 70min)

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综合

The professor’s lecture deals with the same issue of the solutions to reduce the population of the cane toad which mentioned in the reading passage. However, the lecturer argues that the three measures are all weak.

First, the professor argues against the reading that a national fence probably won’t stop the spread of the toad. That’s because the waterways could carry the young toads and their eggs to the other side. So only a few young toads or eggs get through the fence, obviously, the professor’s argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.

Moreover, dispite the statement in the reading passage, the professor contends that it is not easy to tell the cane toad apart from native frogs especially when it’s young. In other words, the volunteers could not have enough experience to destroy real toads, which would do harm to to native frogs of Australia.

Finally, wheathe professor asserts that using the virus is a bad idea because it could have terrible consequences for cane toads in their original habitat in America. That will lead to an ecological disaster.This is in direct contradiction with the claim in the reading passage that an infectious virus could be developed to stop the reproduction of cane toads without harming other species.

In conclusion, the professor clearly identifies the weaknesses in the reading passage and convincingly shows that the cntral argument in the readings.

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