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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.





Studying art and music it is not only bring our required one more like skill but also benefit for personal morality and social development . So, I believed that all of students should be required to study art and music no only just Younger school
children.



On the personal field, studying art and music makes a person more diverse and thoughtful. We should exposed to many different cultures and points of view from art and music. It allows the audience and artist to perceive the world through a different set of eyes. It is also help the healthy development of human memory .For examples, Through painting activities, the human brain emerge different image, scene,and detail
it would help people`s memory development and nurturing the spirit of innovation. It is also an excellent way to spark interest in other cultures and diverse ways of life. As we know ,art and music
most of from the inner expression of human feelings and cultural.




It is also helpful for social development. These subjects give peoples an outlet for express their turbulent emotions. I thinks that art and music are also an excellent way to express emotions.It is easy and safe way for peoples and make our nation to be stable. When I am stressed because of life, one of my favourite activities is listening music. I find that would helps me to soothing and calming. It is a similar effect of looking at works of art, and when one understands the philosophy behind the work, it is that much more beneficial.




Therefore, I believe that studying art and music form all of school can be nothing but beneficial for the students. So, I suggestion authority should required all of students study Art and music.