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1,有人觉得make sure 别人（比如有影响的人或者你的老板）知道你的strength and accomplishment 能帮你获得成功，否则一事无成。你的看法+



It is not doubt get successful that win you boss or influential people help, they could get you the right direction when you confront in the choose and you more easy to succeed . But , I thinks that the auther overlooking other way it also help people`s success in their life time. So,we can`t deny that win other people it not only way let you though to success.



If we can get help from those influential people or you boss help,they could help our make a right choose when our confront to the problems . Because he have more experiment than you and different people they can have a different views that you do not think. For examples, Helen Keller, At 19 months she suffered "an acute congestion of the stomach and brain (probably scarlet fever) which left her deaf and blind.but she did not get up in she life. She learn reading and speaking from she`s teacher help and could comnucation for people and get excellent score graduate from college. Final, let she become a Famous writer and educator .



Work hard it is one of way could let you  successful. When our confront problems ,if you give up you ideals that failure in you work and I think that  you can not acquire successful . As we know that Thomas Alva Edison , he invention light bulb and brought human light. In the invention process, he confront failure of the experiment many times, it was tested for 6000 number of fibers materials and end to determine the use of tungsten silk for the filament, and improve the use life.  



In addition to these reasons, aim it is one of important way acquire  successful , it could let our have more power tIn addition to these reasons, aim it is one of important way acquire  successful , it could let our have more power to working and  make better plans. I find that if I make a plans when I have a goal. I very quick finished by order to my plans and it could let me increase my efficiency. Overall, we have many way lead to successful.o workin

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1,有人觉得make sure 别人（比如有影响的人或者你的老板）知道你的strength and accomplishment 能帮你获得成功，否则一事无成。你的看法+ % u9 _& K/ e* b5 m) ?5 d& {
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3 o! ~* k2 u$ w5 c4 n3 WIt is not doubt get successful that win you boss or influential people help, they could get you the right direction when you confront in the choose and you more easy (easier) to succeed. But , I thinks that the auther overlooking (overlooks) other way (ways) it (which) also help people`s( people ) success in their life time. So,we can`t deny that win other people it not only way let you though to success(不太懂).
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3 `5 r! _  U, J5 O$ I' W% Q& sIf we can get help from those influential people or you boss help,they could help our make a right choose when our confront to the problems . Because he （they）have more （much） experiment than you and different people they can have a different views that you do not think （主语呢？）. For examples, Helen Keller, At 19 months she suffered "an acute congestion of the stomach and brain (probably scarlet fever) which left her deaf and blind.but she did not get up in she life. She learn reading
and speaking from she`s teacher help and could comnucation for （communicate with） people and get excellent score （scores） graduate (graduating) from college. Final, let (去掉) she become a Famous writer and educator .( }$ {. L; B% y
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, B) E, @5 j3 ^, |* vWork hard it is one of way （ways） could let （make） you  successful. When our confront problems ,if you give up you ideals that failure in you work and I think that  you can not acquire successful（什么意思） . As we know that （去掉 加，） Thomas Alva Edison , he invention （invented） light bulb and brought human light. In the invention process, he confront failure of the experiment many times, it was tested for 6000 number of fibers materials and end to determine the use of tungsten silk for the filament, and improve the use life.  
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In addition to these reasons, aim it is one of important way acquire  successful （不懂） , it could let our have more power tIn addition （additionally） to these reasons, aim it is one of important way acquire  successful , it could let our have more power to working （work） and  make better plans. I find that if I make a plans （plan） when I have a goal. I very quick finished by order to my plans and it could let me increase my efficiency. Overall, we have many way lead to successful （success）.o workin4 p4 o6 v3 T, ~; W1 y3 ^) A
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