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muyun_UID: 2780534

Whatmakes a good neighbor?

It is indisputably that neighbors are crucialpeople in our lives. Many people make a decision about where they live dependon their future neighbors. People would like to live with the neighbors who arerespectful, enthusiastic and community-minded.
Good neighbors are respectful of your needsand your property. Neighbors can ask your permission before doing anything thatinterferes with you, let’s take a representative case for example, theywouldn’t put up a fence between your houses without letting you know first,
they might work with you to decide where itshould be placed and even split the cost. Neighbors live close together, it’sunavoidable that they can learn person details, respectful person will notintrude on their neighbors or broadcast their neighbor’s privacy, a saying hasit that you are respectful of others, so are others.

Another significant aspect is that neighbors are enthusiastic about helpingothers. They are willing to lend you some milk if you run out. They’d like tolet your children stay at their house in the evening if you get stuck workingovertime. They have a favorable attitude toward the case that when they see arobber trying to break into your house, they would call the police.
Of course, you would do the same for theneighbors. If everyone in a neighborhood is zealous to help with each other,which can bring about a simple, happy and pleasant environment.

Moreover, good neighbors are community-minded.They care about the small community. They don’t throw trash on the ground andeven if they find trash, they pick it up. They won’t play loud music late atnight or fight in public. They believe that their personal actions lay a directeffect on the happiness of all of their neighbors.

zcwd123456UID: 2738124

It is indisputably that neighbors are crucialpeople in our lives. Many people make a decision (about where they live) depend on (中文你想说人们依靠邻居来决定住哪里，对吧？但我感觉这样表达不行：1 不看about where they live 的话，你那句话有2个谓语 make 和 depend。而其实你的depend是修饰decision的，按照你的句子，让我读起来depend的主语是people。depend on 用介词换掉，如 in based on)their future neighbors. People would like to live with the neighbors who are respectful, enthusiastic and community-minded.
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Of course, you would do the same for theneighbors. If everyone in a neighborhood(状语后置感觉好点吧~) is zealous to help with each other,which can bring about（用创造怎么样create） a simple, happy and pleasant environment.
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; M) N/ K9 f+ X6 {$ V. |Moreover, good neighbors are community-minded.They care about the small community. They don’t throw trash（trashes可数名词） on the ground andeven（你想说反而吧？好像不是even） if they find trash, they pick it （them）up. They won’t play loud（loudly） music late atnight or fight in public. They believe that their personal actions have 吧~a directeffect on the happiness of all of their neighbors.
你是按照作文书上的改写的吧~~书上的字可是很多哦，你这篇字够300么？

GabrielGaoUID: 2800551

太短了