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10.2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress

Relieving stress is that of indispensable for life to move forward. Some people prefer to spend time alone to be self-relieved, while some may choose to share with others and regard it as the only effective way to flee from the pressure. As resultful as it may be, entangling from the press by oneself obviously cannot be the best choice for all people, in all situations, at all times.

Which way is exactly the most suitable to release the pressure can only be decided by the one who suffers from it; namely, no one possesses the right to judge "Yes" or "No" for granted on such conclusion as spending time alone is the best one. Say an introverted person probably would like to communicate with him or herself or with non-human creatures, or even with non-living things regardless of where the place is chosen (Actually, the latter twos cannot be strictly considered "alone"). He or she may like to meditate, write something, sing out, and lose in readings or other sort of things that can make them feel just comfortable and released. However, these independently spiritual purifications can be in vain for those who cannot even pipe down. Some people can only distract themselves from the tough world in which they are by spending time with others – families, friends, or even strangers. They just cannot leave alone. If it is a must, they may well fall into depression, or just go crazy. So, the means of mitigation from stress differs from person to person.

Additionally, situation is another factor that shall be taken into account in discussing such subject. Specific circumstances could impel someone to behave differently to get themselves away from being pressed. Suppose a young lady is attending a banquet, however, it turns out all the people around are more excellent than her,
education, financial background, appearance, whatever. All these have made her almost out of breath, and consequently, she chooses to escape and stay alone or just spend minutes thinking over it. Consider another case of example that if a man is inclined to press himself habitually, then how could he be recurred by staying alone? In this case, a more telling measure needs to be taken, that is to drive or take him out and put him in crowds, whether acquaintances or those to be acquainted, via traveling, exercising, chatting or any other deeds that can make him feel pleased or light-hearted.

In fact, we most people interchange these two manners accordingly with no specified rules. All it depends upon is the mood. When it feels tight in heart and tight in time as well, spending time alone to do some simple relaxes can be more sounding. Yet when it occurs to be a long time of working and a holiday is on the way, then a hanging-out with friends is definitely the better choice. Thus, spending time alone when someone is filled up with pressure is absolutely not the best approach at all times.

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10.5 望猛批~~~

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

In such a developed marketing economy as today’s, the all-pervasive advertisements indeed has influenced people’s daily life dramatically, from dressing to diet, from speeches to perspectives; all can be utterly altered by such marketing propagandas, positively or negatively. Thence, some people have begun to blame their unhealthy eating habits on these advertisements. However, this excuse just seems farfetched since nor is the advertising the necessary condition of the cause of this habit or the sufficient one.

Admittedly, the advertising on food, especially the junk food like KFC, candy, ice cream, could be so appealing to children that they will probably ask their parents to buy them home. The consequence of this is that the formal meal may be substituted by these unhealthy foods, and then the harmful habit forms. While this merely happens to 'children', especially between 3 years old to 12 years old, according to a recent research for they are deficient in the capability of self-control. As for teenagers or adults? Probably not. As long as they are resistant enough to the temptation exaggerated by the advertisements, nothing will be changed. They can make this seemingly delicate food as snack when feeling tired at most. Thus, to be the main criminal of the shaping of unhealthy eating habits, advertising is just not incompetent in most cases.

Additionally, advertising cannot be the culprit or the only cause of the formation of poor eating habit, either. What is a habit? Briefly, habit is a persistent pattern of a behavior. It can come into being at any time, affected by any thing and any people. For example, if a parent always purchases sweet food or fast food for their children, whatever reason it is for, or the parent just indulge in satisfying their children's unreasonable requirements, how could condemn advertising as 'the most important cause' of such harmful habit? In fact, many parents do take their children to KFC or McDonald’s frequently, even as a reward. Let's look at another currently happened case. Nancy, one of my roommates, decides to lose weigh just because she cannot wear her newly bought dresses, plus other people's gossips. She cut off the dinners, even breakfasts sometimes, but just one meal a day. Surprisingly, she has held out, for one month. Finally, she made it, yet at the expense of health. She got the acute gastritis. Sounds awful, right? See, it has nothing to do with advertising. It just depends on personal perspectives and decisions. Therefore, advertising cannot be the prerequisite of bad eating habits, not to mention the most important one.

As a matter of fact, some advertising can help improve people's eating habits. For instance, hearing one advertisement on milk, saying 'one cup of milk everyday, a better physique forever' and thus making a change, is just beneficial for people. After all, advertising is only a means of publicizing, to make the products well informed, rather than the direct force that determines one's living habits. All it matters is the person self who owns those habits.

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1# cathyxin
Relieving stress is that of indispensable for life to move forward. Some people prefer to spend time alone to be self-relieved, while some may choose to share with others and regard it as the only effective way to flee from the pressure. As resultful as it may be, entangling from the press by oneself obviously cannot be the best choice for all people, in all situations, at all times.( O


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Which way is exactly the most suitable to release the pressure can only be decided by the one who suffers from it; namely, no one possesses the right to judge "Yes" or "No" for granted on such conclusion as spending time alone is the best one. Say an introverted person probably would like to communicate with him or herself or with non-human creatures, or even with non-living things regardless of where the place is chosen (Actually, the latter twos cannot be strictly considered "alone"). He or she may like to meditate, write something, sing out, and lose in readings or other sort of things that can make them feel just comfortable and released. However, these independently spiritual purifications can be in vain for those who cannot even pipe down. Some people can only distract themselves from the tough world in which they are by spending time with others – families, friends, or even strangers. They just cannot leave alone. If it is a must, they may well fall into depression, or just go crazy. So, the means of mitigation from stress differs from person to person.

Additionally, situation is another factor that shall be taken into account in discussing such subject. Specific circumstances could impel someone to behave differently to get themselves away from being pressed. Suppose a young lady is attending a banquet, however, it turns out all the people around are more excellent than her, education, financial background, appearance, whatever. All these have made her almost out of breath, and consequently, she chooses to escape and stay alone or just spend minutes thinking over it. Consider another case of example that if a man is inclined to press himself habitually, then how could he be recurred by staying alone? In this case, a more telling measure needs to be taken, that is to drive or take him out and put him in crowds, whether acquaintances or those to be acquainted, via traveling, exercising, chatting or any other deeds that can make him feel pleased or light-hearted.

In fact, we most people interchange these two manners accordingly with no specified rules. All it depends upon is the mood. When it feels tight in heart and tight in time as well, spending time alone to do some simple relaxes can be more sounding. Yet when it occurs to be a long time of working and a holiday is on the way, then a hanging-out with friends is definitely the better choice. Thus, spending time alone when someone is filled up with pressure is absolutely not the best approach at all times.
Cathyxin同学无论是词语的丰富，句子结构的多变，还是例子阐述的恰当都很让人印象深刻。（和我的作文真是千差万别……羡慕啊~~）
我的水平没啥能改的，就瞻仰一下吧！
祝考好~（学习学习~）

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In such a developed marketing economy as today’s, the all-pervasive advertisements indeed has influenced people’s daily life dramatically, from dressing to diet, from speeches to perspectives; all can be utterly altered by such marketing propagandas, positively or negatively. ThHence, some people have begun to blame their unhealthy eating habits on these advertisements. However, this excuse just seems farfetched since nor is the advertising the necessary condition of the cause of this habit or the sufficient one.

Admittedly, the advertising on food, especially the junk food like KFC, candy, ice cream, could be so appealing to children that they will probably ask their parents to buy them home. The consequence of this is that the formal meal may be substituted by these unhealthy foods, and then the harmful habit forms. While this merely happens to 'children', especially between 3 years old to 12 years old, according to a recent research for they are deficient in the capability of self-control. As for teenagers or adults?额，改成But what about。。之类的怎么样？ Probably not. As long as they are resistant enough to the temptation exaggerated by the advertisements, nothing will be changed. They can make this seemingly delicate food as snack when feeling tired at most. Thus, to be the main criminal of the shaping of unhealthy eating habits, advertising is just not incompetent in most cases.

Additionally, advertising cannot be the culprit or the only cause of the formation of poor eating habit, either. What is a habit? Briefly, habit is a persistent pattern of a behavior. It can come into being at any time, affected by any thing and any people. For example, if a parent always purchases sweet food or fast food for their children, whatever reason it is for, or the parent just indulge in satisfying their children's unreasonable requirements, how could condemn advertising as 'the most important cause' of such harmful habit? In fact, many parents do take their children to KFC or McDonald’s frequently, even as a reward. Let's look at another currently happened case. Nancy, one of my roommates, decides to lose weigh just because she cannot wear her newly bought dresses, plus other people's gossips. She cut off the dinners, even breakfasts sometimes, but just one meal a day. Surprisingly, she has held out, for one month. Finally, she made it, yet at the expense of health. She got the acute gastritis. Sounds awful, right? See, it has nothing to do with advertising. It just depends on personal perspectives and decisions. Therefore, advertising cannot be the prerequisite of bad eating habits, not to mention the most important one.

As a matter of fact, some advertising can help improve people's eating habits. For instance, hearing one advertisement on milk, saying 'one cup of milk everyday, a better physique forever' and thus making a change, is just beneficial for people. After all, advertising is only a means of publicizing, to make the products well informed, rather than the direct force that determines one's living habits. All it matters is the person self who owns those habits.

汗颜。。。。。写的很好，我改不出来什么了。。。。

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4# secomg

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改好啦，水平有限，请见谅^^

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10.7 谢谢批改~
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4# secomg

谢谢你的意见哈 我写的时候还在想那个地方应该怎么用， 你倒是提醒了我，太感谢了哈~~:loveliness:

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6# caomiao723

没有啊，我觉得你的意见很中肯呢，我看过你的作文了哈，别谦虚啦。其实我打字很慢的，半个小时内我根本就写不出来。。。你呢？

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7# cathyxin

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10。9 号作业~~

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10# chikako.k

谢谢你的建议，很受用~~~我会慢慢改进的~~:loveliness:

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13# 灰色精英

嗯 谢谢你的建议 很有用 我会改进的 共勉哈~:p

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同学你写的太好了……