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父母儿童教育  Parents find it hard to control their children for the children are now inf luenced by many things outside home like television or movie.
    The question about whether television and movie has influence the children's behaviour which induced that their parents couldn't control their children
has concerned some people.It is held by some people that those media like television and movie had a deep insurance on children's action,therefore,the
parents find it hard to lead their children.However,there is an equally good argument about the topic that television and movie play an important part in
children's life,and it color the children's boring and dull life.From my perspective,I think the things outside home have an positive impact on both
children's life and study.
    First and foremost,the major function of television and movie is to creating topics of society.Movie offers people some issues to talk and think,it benefits
people's mental ability,especially to youth generation.For example,The beautiful life had brought a worldwide heat topic about the true value of life.
Titanic had been raising a worldwide mania by its appreciation of fascinating immoral love.Besides,a common topic can improves the friendship and shorten the
distance between friends.Take my experience for example,once I was watching a ethnic movie,some new perspectives of the world came into my mind,I realized
that spending more time with my family and friends,eating my favourite food and visiting the places I love are valuable things in life.
    Moreover,parents should educate their children to find their interest and lifestyle instead control their children.Only in this way,their children can
live a life independent.When it comes to a splendid life,it is children that can decide what kind of life they want to live.Contrarily,the information
comes from television can instruct children to make a better decision,like the major in college and the career.
    Ultimately,I think no one could deny that we can get the most of the news from television even without step out.As we all know,television,one of
the most prevalent modern technologies,is moving into a new era,an era of versatility,which can reshape our lives and our world.The shows processing from
television help girls to pay more attention on their appearance.What is more,the Discovery program provides youth a wide variety of knowledge of science and
humanity ,and raise the public awareness of protecting our mother land in the same time.
    Taking above mentioned into consideration,an unshakable conclusion could be safety drawn that television and movie have favorable effects on children,
especially on children.Therefore,it is unnecessary that parents pay too much attention on the outside things.
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米爆爆UID: 2892134

看完你的。我更觉得我走题了
好不容易写了一次那么HI的文章。竟然跑题。。。
o(╯□╰)o。。。。天要灭我。。。

米爆爆UID: 2892134

..我觉得你跑题了。就不算跑得很厉害，比我好。但是还是有跑了吧。。。

taotaodekuaile8UID: 2843043

2# 米爆爆
哪个观点跑题了呢.....好心人帮我指出来吧，还有就是除了跑题其他的问题有哪些？？？！！！