猫儿脸的独立作文

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08.12.07NA  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress.

Is spending time alone the best way to relieve stress? At first glance, the balance of empirical evidence would seem to lend to considerable credence to this claim. However, I disagree with this claim because this claim is too specious in some respects. Many factors, such as spending time with friends, keeping busy doing some interesting things, in my experience, has served to relieve stress.

Admittedly, spending time alone is a good means to relieve stress. Nevertheless, spending time alone is not the best way to relieve stress, for the simple reason that different people have different ways to relieve stress. It is very likely that spending time alone sometimes is a good way for some people to relieve stress, but it can increase stress for others. Spending time alone, sometimes, makes people unhappy or lonely, and subsequently it increases stress. Accordingly, we cannot generalize that spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress.

Many factors, such as spending time with friends, keeping busy doing some interesting things, and playing sport, are attributable to relieve stress. Without considering these and other possible ways, this claim is unconvincing. For instance, my friend, Jenny, would like to relieve her stress by throwing a party. And my another friend, Bill, like to swim when he feel stress. In my observation, there are lots of ways that can relieve stress. Which is the most effective way should be determined by different individuals and their habits.

While this claim has merit in a sense, in the final analysis, this claim begs question by overlooking some practical problems in which spending time alone is not the best way to relieve stress, and sometimes it can exacerbate stress. In order to generalize this claim correctly, an all-sided consideration is needed before further conclusion.

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Is advertising the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits, as the statement claims? It might be tempting to agree that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits. However, I disagree with this statement because this claim is too extreme.
  The first reason why I disagree with the speaker is that this claim is too specious in some respects.  Admittedly, sometimes advertising can cause unhealthy eating habits, primarily for the simple reason that advertising always overstates the effectiveness of some eating habits. After all, the nature of advertising is to ensure the benefits for companies. However, advertising is not the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits. Many factors, such as custom, disposition and lifestyle, have served to increase unhealthy eating habits. For example, while some food is delicious, many people would like to enjoy it blindly, ignoring the real effectiveness and individual needs.
The second reason why I disagree with the statement is that this claim is poorly supported by empirical evidence. Nowadays, there is no evidence that advertising can increase unhealthy eating habits. Honestly, advertising has no relative with unhealthy eating habits. In fact, most people have cognitive ability which can diminish the influence from advertise. In my view, the reason why some people would like to believe advertisement reflects the real needs of individuals. Due to there is nothing can fit the needs of individuals, the advertisement caters to the individual needs. Definitely, advertising cannot play such an important role in our lives.      
In the final analysis, this statement, while appealing in some respects, overlooks some practical problems in which it is difficult to judge which is the most  important cause of unhealthy eating habits. Obviously, many factors can increase the unhealthy eating habits. In order to conclude correctly, an all-sided consideration is needed.

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那你是女生？ 呵呵， 很多人以为猫儿脸是猫咪的脸， 其实是一种植物-又名三色堇
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Is spending time alone the best way to relieve stress? At first glance, the balance of empirical evidence would seem to lend to considerable credence to this claim.
這句佳句不錯，但credence要不要換個字眼會好一點呢
However, I disagree with this claim because this claim is too specious in some respects. Many factors, such as spending time with friends, keeping busy doing some interesting things, in my experience, has served to relieve stress.

Admittedly, spending time alone is a good means to relieve stress. Nevertheless, spending time alone is not the best way to relieve stress, for the simple reason that different people have different ways to relieve stress. It is very likely that spending time alone sometimes is a good way for some people to relieve stress, but it can increase stress for others. Spending time alone, sometimes, makes people unhappy or lonely, and subsequently it increases stress. Accordingly, we cannot generalize that spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress.

Many factors, such as spending time with friends, keeping busy doing some interesting things, and playing sport, (are attributable建議換成contribute to )relieve stress. Without considering these and other possible ways, this claim is unconvincing. For instance, my friend, Jenny, would like to relieve her stress by throwing a party. And my another friend, Bill, like to swim when he feel stress. In my observation, there are lots of ways that can relieve stress. Which is the most effective way should be determined by different individuals and their habits.
這段例子寫的很好



While this claim has merit in a sense, in the final analysis, this claim begs question by overlooking some practical problems in which spending time alone is not the best way to relieve stress, and sometimes it can exacerbate stress. In order to generalize this claim correctly, an all-sided consideration is needed before further conclusion.

妳寫的不錯 背了一些佳句 可以練習五段式的寫法 然後用例子去支持妳的論點
結論句可以更明確的點出你的同意與不同意
用字與文法很少有錯的
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