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大家不用客气～放马过来吧～～～哇咔咔～～

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那个~~我作文只写了两段，但是这么写可能不太讨好，但是在考场上素没有问题滴~~~~

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With the rapid developing of technology, people are much easier than any time in the history to get exposure to mass media, which can affect us a lot especially by a specific way--advertisement. Take a look at the newspaper or television, not only some high-tech device or daily necessity companies that are placing advertisements, but also some food businesses are engaging in broadcasting their products by using public media ,in order to attract the potential customers and get a share in the huge profit market. While some unhealthy food because of their good lookings get more attention than usual, we are not saying that advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits, but unequivocally, it does play a crucial role.
The first thing comes to m mind is the advertisements about fast fried food.Take some time and think about our life in the past.What we used to eat is just regular and traditional food,we do not eat fried meat or fried chips or fries whatever too much,on the contrary,we seldom come up with(还是to？？with) the idea that we can have fried meat as meal.At this time,there comes the advertisement.It tells us that we can make food more tasty and juicy and children-favorable--which is the trick that always works--by fried food. And the truth is,unfortunately,the tip works .We always want to be good at cooking without spending to much efforts,and the short-cut that the advertisement teaches us is to make fried food.Therefore the vicious cycle is created.We all know too much intake of oil is harmful to health,and too much oil in the food is exactly what people learn from the advertisement.As a conclusion,I do not blame unhealthy eating habits entirely on advertisement,but it should be of much responsibility.
写的挺好的，很流畅，也有自己的想法，没有坚持出虾米错误啊，感觉是一气呵成的，呵呵，不错哒~~

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改好啦，水平有限,改的不好请见谅^^

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4# caomiao723

谢啦~~看来我还是差很多。。。。

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3# cathyxin

嘿嘿~~~

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水平有限 相互学习 加油！

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改好了~~加油！！

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